My Own Lyrics, what do u think?
 
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chaotic heretic
Posted on Oct 10 2005, 10:08 PM


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i havent got much yet so far all i got is a chorus and the first verse


dead heart hidden mind

my eyes closed
soul empty
heart dead from so many beatings
mind my last defence
hidden from the world
to save itself from the reality

My dead heart beating
My hidden mind unvieled
my soul screaming
in one moment for you


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my hidden mind unvieled

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drk_wn65
Posted on Oct 10 2005, 10:13 PM


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i think you're off to an awsome start. keep going!


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chaotic heretic
Posted on Oct 10 2005, 10:21 PM


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thanks i spent the entire of latin doing that
bludy languages


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drk_wn65
Posted on Oct 10 2005, 10:26 PM


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heh. yeah. being in german III makes me so confused i almost throw up each class.


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chaotic heretic
Posted on Oct 10 2005, 10:36 PM


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finally someone else who does german but then again i am gunna drop it next year


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drk_wn65
Posted on Oct 10 2005, 10:38 PM


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heh. yeah. it's not a very big thing in the states... but, since i live in germany, i guess i need it.


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chaotic heretic
Posted on Oct 11 2005, 08:33 PM


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you might just its not that big in englang either everyone goes for spanish


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