I have to write a Poem for english, and I've got quite a good one, but I need to refine it. What changes do you think I can make?
Keep Keeping On
Keep your head up high,
Even when your life seems tough,
When life seems to just defy,
When you have just about had enough.
Life can't keep you away forever,
Don't let it chain you down,
You may have had a terrible endeavour,
But stand up, and turn yourself around.
Face the hardship,
Make a skip,
Don't look back,
Follow the track.
Now it is all behind,
And you can move on,
You don't have to stay confined,
Don't dwell on the foregone.
Anything I should change?