newbie, hello

[COLOR=blue]
Greetings other transformer fans. If this is what I think that it is like me, you all breath,eat ,sleep, and write mostly around the TF universe. I am in the process of writing my own TF movie,and I was hoping the the fans on this site would point me in the right direction.I have emersed myself in all things TF and hope that my love for them will get stronger after getting to know some of the other fans.

Hmm, interesting. What would the movie plot line be? I am always curious to see what others are writing about.

I'm Mayhem. I play Maydae (young Pred medic) and Cassidy (a organic raised on the Maximal side).

Hello there,

I'm new too. Well, not as new as you but I still have that "new car smell".

I'm Vander, I just joined War Bound, playing Octane. I've recently rediscovered my TF fandom and this seems like a good place to explore it.

Hope to see you in game sometime.

Till all are one...

Hi Sophira, great to 'meet' you (it's not really a physical thing, but, y'know...). I'm sure a lot of us would like to see your TF movie script and anything else you've written about our favorite robotic lifeforms from Cybertron- feel free to post any of it in the Get Creative forum.

^Dork.

GREETINGS!
Hello!
S'up dawg.

I'm actually not normal at all.

It's nice of you to give Movie-verse TF fans something to look forward to, because the Micheal Bay films leave something wanting. Like plot or character development. (I have issues, as I mentioned, btw)

It's lovely to have you, Sophira.

Thanks! I really am hoping to get it finished soon but the finished result will be 150 to 200pgs. But I think that I can give you a little insight to it... HUGE Prime secret, war prisoners,FIGHT, little human interaction but enough to keep them paid, resurection,FIGHT, and many other characters could..(if you think that it is a good idea) be added into it. They are in it now but 1) my computer that I have it saved on exploded and 2) I will edit it as soon as I get it back and finish it. I really want insight from the fans on this one b/c I really don't think that the movies that have been produced by Micheal Bay are really asking the fans "What does it need to give it that extra wow-factor." I am and will take requests,advice,and writing partners b/c i need to get it done to send in while they are not in progress of writing another.(OH SPOILER ALERT) there is a combined bot in the movie I am writing a bot with both Autobot, and Decepticon training and relations....

Attached Image (Click thumbnail to expand)

Well, honestly, studios wouldn't accept a film script for Transformers no matter how good because it would be unsolicited and unwanted. Besides, they've already started work on Transformers 4

But your film could probably work as a fan project, which would probably be better crafted (probably not as good-looking) as the actual films, but an impressive feat, nonetheless. I'd happily serve as an editor for the film script if you needed one.

(...Wow, I do sound like a dork.)

Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat. There's a TF4? Brooooo. What. Whaaaat.

Anyway, darling, Sophira, lovely little duckie-bear. This sounds like an AWESOME project. High profile and first class. But I humbly suggest working on grammar first? Like watching your spacing and run-ons? Juuuust a friendly little tip. ;D

(Yup. You totally do. ehehe.)

Thx and sorry about the grammer mistakes I have been on stage most of the day and I then had to get a book report done for nxt school year...little sleepy. But I won't blame that. Yes, I have tried to get in touch with MB's office and I have talked to his agent on the phone a few times saying that he would meet with me when he got the chance. That was 8 months ago I was hoping for them to do it kind of like they did Star Wars.

Y'know, I suggest reading this article.

Welcome to the Core, by the way. Which game are you eyeballing?

WOW..that really opened my eyes alot. I really haven't thought about the game yet.(Kinda was focused on the writing bit.) But give me a few to look into and I will. Oh..P.S. check out my little almost-midnight-and-I-worked-all-day-but-still-have-time-for-writing-sample in Creative tell me whatcha think

Do you want an honest critique of it?

I know... It is kinda short and suckish. Not any of my best work at all, just something I had to get off of my chest that I have thought about all week. I really like the idea of having a crossed cybertronian,but I do need to draw out her story from the beginning. So go ahead..give me your best shot