Dear Alice (Still working on), Please tell me you, No.

[Cheyenne]

xo Together Forever
Name:Cheyenne Carlsson
Years Role Playing: About 3?
Contact: (PM is just fine)
How did you find this site? I was tired of neopets, so I browsed this site.
Age: 15

ox Love and Lust
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Character Name: Alice Marie` Montagray
Age: 21
Birthday: June 13th (I am not sure what time this Roleplay is based in)
Gender: female
Race Requested:Human, or Vampire

xo Famine and Hate
Play By:Kate Moss
Hair Color: Blond
Eye Color:Brownish Green
Height:5"6
Weight: 110
Body Type: Thin.
Appearance: (Must be at least two paragraphs long.)
Can you really tell a person by there appearance? Can you lead from plush lips down to a thin waste and no curves, and assume this girl does not eat? Can you watch her pale skin up to her morning eyes. Features that not one wants, but one that compress the mind to think why. Why must she breath air, why must her hair be messy, and blond. Why must she dress down?

How? How can she walk like that, her complextion expressed in a simplistic way. But How can she just do nothing with it? Although she is not what we would call perfectly beautiful, model material. She it more pretty. Nice to look at. I am afriad we cannot judge this girl, by not her looks nor the way she dressed. I don't think we would get very far by scanning the 5"6 girl down to her shattered vans. This would get us no where.

ox Comfort and Friendship
Likes: The Arts, food, breathing, feelings, open minds, open hearts, sex, drugs, dance, yelling, and music
Dislikes: Perfect people, people who think there perfect, people who are fake, people, to much whipped cream on her cake, birthdays, running, sunny days, close minded people and guys who flash there unflawless bodies.
Strengths: (At least three, paragraph form, explaining)
Clicking tounges send minds into a spin. You may open your heart to this girl, you may express your feelings but you'll only be left deep in the dark. You hands bound and eyes tapped shut.Your words mean nothing to her, but he words mean the world to everyone. You can ingore her all you want, yet her nonemotional replies will make you scream. She will rip your heart piece by piece, lightly tugging at it until it breaks. Her words are like venom.

She can think, well all she does is think. Her mind is always turned on, and her first thought is the first move she makes. Never douting herself makes it so she never hesitates. Because one who hesitates is lost. She would never be lost.

Fearless, one thing that everyone fears is fear its self. Of course she has no intrest in fear, it's just another emotion that would destroy her. So she locks it away. In all sense she isn't afraid of anything. Her body and mind believe there is an explaintion for everything she sees.

Weaknesses: (At least two, paragraph form, explaining)
Love, although Alice does not feel much, when she does she will be weak. The wall between her and the world is the one thing keeping her from falling to the ground and giving up. Once love shatters that world she will be rendered helpless. So far she has done a good job staying away from this so called "love". But one day, it will destroy, as it does to so many.

Speak or forever hold your tounge. Her tounge gets her in trouble. It puts her in places where many people want to bash her head in, persay. She doesn't give up on a fight, this annoys people and she ends up getting hurt. Learning how to hold her words is something that is very hard for Alice.
Personality: (Must be at least three paragraphs long.)

xo Warmth and Family
Family:Her family is dead.
History:"Shes dead." came a voice of impulse. Her mind was blank, the once flooded thoughts stopped. "Who is daddy?" Open eyes ran to her father in fear that her dog might have died or her teddy was lost. The stern man turned and walked away from the confused girl. Dead a word that would echo through the mind of the girl her whole life.

Why must we grow up? Cant time just stop forever, when the perfect moment comes? No, the small girl grew up. She became a teenager. The type of girl that let herself go because she felt that there was no reason to control anything anymore. She fell to the floor and sobbed. Expressing her most inner feelings of hate. Hate for the world, hate for her father, pure hate. Her mother had left her with him. He would never speak to her, or brush her hair. He would drink himself to sleep every night. Alice would watch. Alice would grow, she would fall deeper and deeper into a dead subconsious.

Pack your things and move away your not wanted here. She was kicked out at 16 to fend for her own. Thus she did, keeping to the streets and finding places where she could. Her grungy atire let her blend in well with the world. Her mind not worried on the pain or happyness. Just set on moving, walking until she died. (Must be at least three paragraphs long.)

ox Fun and Randomness
Custom Member Title: HeyCheyenne.
Keyword:Blood is thicker than water.

[Administrator]

`Pending
Your appearance is fine, but the way it's written kind of irks me,
even though I think I get what's being said. On the otherhand, I am going
to have to ask you to be a lot more specific on your history.
I really don't understand what her history is. You also need to
fill out your personality. Also, one more thing: I need to change
your account name to your character name.
Thanks!