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Celestria
Posted: Sep 12 2008, 05:16 PM


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I GOT OVER MY WRITER'S BLOCK.

About fucking time too. So I started writing some random brawl one-shot. It's still not done, and I bet there's a load of typos, so, whatever.

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Wolf O'Donnel flexed his fingers and grinned evilly at his opponent, Princess Peach of the Mushroom Kingdom. They were both on the Final Destination stage, as Master Hand gave them a last minute match that morning. Wolf hardly cared - he enjoyed any brawl that consisted of beating the crap out of someone, even if that someone was a delicate princess. He still didn't know how the dumb blonde got into the tournament. Peach, on the other hand, was waiting nervously for the announcer to shout 'GO!', signalling that it was time for her to get her ass kicked...again. She sighed and wished that she was against anyone other than Wolf, the anti-social space wolf who beat up anyone just for glancing at him in the hallways. Peach looked at the audience stands, where she spotted Princess Zelda, her best friend, give her a look of sympathy. Yep, even she realised that Peach was going to get seriously injured.

The announcer's voice rang out through the stadium, and instantly, Wolf charged at her with a crazed look in his eye. He swiped at her, his claws flashing, and she didn't have time to block his attack, resulting in opening up a nice gash on her cheek. Droplets of blood oozed out and onto her dress. Peach quickly shielded herself and slapped him, knocking the wolf back slightly. She touched the gash for a brief moment, before narrowing her eyes in anger and running forwards, performing her side-special (Peach Bomber) on him. Wolf yelped, then swung his leg around and tripped the princess up and clawed her again.

"Oh, he better not be too rough on her." Zelda muttered, gasping slightly as Wolf rounded a kick at Peach, which hit the mushroom princess in the stomach, sending her flying. Link, the hero of twilight, glanced sideways at his friend, blinking.

"Eh, she'll be alright. Wolf's in a good mood this morning, so he won't beat her up too much." Link said with a slight grin. Zelda ignored him, gripping her seat and wincing slightly. She could've sworn she heard one of Peach's bones crack from that fall.

Peach coughed loudly and choked on a bit of blood. She screwed her eyes up in pain and refused to look up, afraid that if she did that Wolf would finish her off. The mercenary gritted his teeth and looked down at the princess. She really looked pathetic, and it was making him feel slightly guilty. But a match was a match, and there was no turning back. She'd have to tough it out and realise there was no plumber around to save her. Wolf raised back another claw, and swiped her across the face, which sent her tumbling across the stage. There was a few gasps from the crowd, and out of the corner of his eye, Wolf could make out the fat, italian plumber jumping up and down on his seat angrily and throwing curse words at him. Wolf smirked, his thoughts leaving the match and off into his own little world. Obviously, fighting Peach was incredibly boring to him.

This gave the princess time to get back at the wolf. She mustered all the strength she had and dashed towards him, taking out her frying pan and wacking him with it. Wolf barely had time to shield himself, and was knocked back a few feet. He got back up and snarled dangerously at Peach. I need to hurry up and beat her now, before the time limit runs out. Wolf thought, glancing up at the clock which read '00: 43 seconds remaining'.

In a hurry to end the match, Wolf leapt at Peach, teeth bared, and aimed a punch at her. Peach reacted instantly. Instead of attacking, she dodged the attack and grinned, then quickly winked at him. Wolf blinked and stumbled backwards like a confused puppy. The princess took advantage of this. She grabbed him by the ear then sent him upwards, following up with an up-smash attack.

...And the wolf was sent flying off into the distance, howling.

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The lupine sat down in his usual seat inthe cafeteria, demanding that Olimar fetch him some food, which the captain quickly obliged, afraid of being fanged. Wolf ignored the harsh glares he was receiving from certain smashers like Marth and Luigi, who were both good friends of Peach. He was lucky Mario wasn't in the cafeteria. Ever since his match with Peach, the close friends of the princess had been less than kind towards him because of the way he threw her around in the match, despite the fact that she won in the end.

Samus Aran approached Wolf, glad in only her Zero Suit, then sat down next to him and waved a hand in front of his face. She was ignored. Wolf was now wolving down his dinner, which Olimar and nervously brought to him, then scurried off with the Pikmin following.

"No hello? How rude." Samus muttered, smirking slightly. Wolf glared at her.

"Get lost. If you're here to yell at me about Peach, then--"

"I'm not. You just looked... a little lonely."

"I prefer to be left alone." Wolf replied simply, pushing his plate away. Samus blinked and they sat in silence for awhile.

"Oh yeah," Samus started, suddenly remembering something, "Mario's looking for you. He might just want to rip your guts out. I dunno."

Wolf snorted as if he didn't care. Which he didn't. Mario didn't oppose much of a threat to Wolf, but he wouldn't pass up a chance to have an outside-brawl with someone, even if it was against the rules. "Where is he?" Wolf asked. Samus raised an eyebrow.

"Oh please, don't go and do something stupid. Just leave him alone. Do you wanna get kicked out of the tournament?"

Wolf shrugged and stood up. "Well, bye." he said without waiting for a reply. He silently walked out, leaving a confused Samus behind.

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The rest is to come later. I need feedback, so, read it dammit.


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Posted: Sep 12 2008, 05:20 PM


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AWWWWEESOME! <333


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Celestria
Posted: Sep 12 2008, 05:21 PM


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Yay :D

*Happy dance* xD


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jewel espeon
Posted: Sep 12 2008, 05:39 PM


...I think meh new lucario likes sushi. *feeds* x3
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Yah. But I think you slightly spelled plumber wrong. I dunno. XD


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Celestria
Posted: Sep 12 2008, 05:41 PM


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Ocrap. I did. @.@

xD Thanks Jewely.


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LitatheLighmosa
Posted: Sep 12 2008, 08:45 PM


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So THAT'S Link's little title in Twilight princess! I've been wondering that.

Pretty good.


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Celestria
Posted: Sep 13 2008, 03:26 AM


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You didn't know that? xD

And thanks. :3


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LitatheLighmosa
Posted: Sep 13 2008, 11:16 AM


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No I didn't.


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Posted: Sep 14 2008, 10:35 AM


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DUDE THIS STORY KICKS BUTT.


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Posted: Sep 14 2008, 10:40 AM


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YAY. 8D


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LitatheLighmosa
Posted: Sep 14 2008, 10:46 AM


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Yeah. I while back, I wrote a one-shot on paper just to test my writing/descriptive skills, and it kicks butt. I'll post it if you'd like. This one-shot of yours, silver, inspires me.


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Celestria
Posted: Sep 14 2008, 10:49 AM


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...*is happy*

Thanks, Lita. xD

And post it. :3 I wanna read stuff.


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LitatheLighmosa
Posted: Sep 14 2008, 11:14 AM


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Here it is, a retarded and untitled one-shot. Obviously about Lita. and she's steaing stuff, lol.

A dragon-like creature bounded through a dense pine forest, leaping from one tree to another while looking around, wary of pursuers. The beast stood on its hind legs and was far smaller than a true dragon, yet the similarity was undeniable. The scaly being was a Lighmosa, and ancient descendant of the dragons.
A roar resounded from over head, and the Lighmosa looked up with a small gasp with such a quiet and high voice that it was obviously female. Her yellow eyes twinkled gold as she saw through the leaves to see an orange wyvern, no doubt searching for her.
"Come out, little Lita, come out and play!" It screeched. Lita-the Lighmosa- merely sped along faster, until she found the edge of the forest to see a city, in its center a stone castle.
Lita was still for a moment, and in that one moment one could see her: A green dragon upon her hind legs with a golden belly and blue wings. Her hands had two fingers and a thumb each, and her feet both had three clawed toes. Her tail ended with three shapes like leaves, the one in the center largest. Her head had a horn on the forehead, a long leaflike strip in the back of the head, like hair, and a wolf's snout. She stood straight and tall.
A roar erupted again from behind Lita, startling her, but this time she made no sound. But she jumped down from her tree branch and made her way through the city and into the castle.
In the castle, it seemed as if she had been there before, as she crept directly to the highest tower, where there was a wooden door. She opened it to reveal a room with a bed, shelves, and a wardrobe. But what interested Lita was what lay on the bed: A polished and well decorated bow, a leaf shaped sheild, a staff with a ball of light at its end, and a silver crown encrusted with emeralds. The only thing which seemed to be missing was a sword and its sheath, which were slung on Lita's back.
Lita gathered the treasures and opened the window, which was to be her escape route. She stood on the windowsill and jumped out, spreading her wings as she jumped to fly, escaping back to the forest.

~end~

Short, and that's exactly how it's written. No paraphrasing(Despite my wishes to), so it sucks. Despite how I wrote it somewhat recently.

So how do ya like it?


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Celestria
Posted: Sep 14 2008, 11:39 AM


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Pretty good. A little short, but still, you're writing style is good. :3 Maybe make it longer and add some dialog? I dunno. xD


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LitatheLighmosa
Posted: Sep 14 2008, 11:42 AM


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It's short because I only had one peice of binder paper. I have loads more now... and anyways, that was written because I felt like writing at the time.

And anyways, I nearly paraphrased it because I forgot some of it xD

And on an offtopic note, get on FC please.


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