[Approved] Fang T'aak, Young Sith

[Hunter]

Basic Information
Name: Fang T'aak
Nickname: New Lion
Race: Bha'lir/Human cross (Sith lchemy creation)
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Homeworld: Kamino

Faction Information
Faction: Sith
Alignment: Sith

Physical Description: Crossbred with a mix of human and bha'lir tiger DNA, Fang resembles that of a bha'lir tiger with a humanoid frame. Covered in dense white fur, Fang constantly looks as though he is constantly ready to hunt or attack something. His muscles seem well developed due to the DNA mix; giving him strong upper and lower body strength naturally.

Hair: None
Height: 5'11
Weight: 172lbs
Build: Well developed and toned upper and lower body.
Clothing: Usually, Fang wears shin protected boots, designed to be as lightweight as possible with traditional black Sith overalls - material trousers which bag slightly at the waist, held in place by a tied black material belt. The top half is the kimono like piece of material which hooks around his front, held closed under the belt..
Markings: Fur - due to the bha'lir DNA, Fang's body is covered in rather dense fur; a deep blonde shade.

Razor sharp teeth - much like the feline that he was piece together from, the teeth in Fang's mouth are visibly sharp, with the canine's elongated much like they were sabretooth teeth.

Retractable claws - at the end of his hands, Fang's nails retract and extend, making use of them when he is hand to hand.


Personality:
Likes: Training - by focusing himself, Fang becomes stronger with his use of the force and lightsabers, despite only having a training equivalent for the time being. He hopes soon to build his own saber so that he may join the ranks as a true Sith warrior.

Hunting - it is almost instinctual for him, and thus, whenever he can, Fang sets out on the hunt, either for food or to find targets.

Accomplishing his goals - the pressure on him to be successful is immense. Therefore, it is one of his primary concerns that he is able to match up to the standards that the Sith place on him.

Sharpening his claws and teeth - blunt piercing weapons are weak piercing weapons.

Dislikes: The Jedi and the Republic - feeling that they get in the way of his progress, Fang wishes them disposed of so that he may continue his growth of abilities.

Unpleasant smells - his nose is incredibly sensitive. If a scent is too strong, it becomes overpowering for him and blocks picking up any others, leaving him to rely on other methods of tracking. It can also leave him somewhat impaired as, due to being stronger, can cause him to feel massively ill.
Social/Unsocial: Fang is not one for conversation and socialising - he will not look for nor try to instigate conversation, and will often glare at those who attempt. However, with those he is more comfortable around (master and higher powers) he is willing to speak, provided he can do so to as small a degree as possible.
Views: The world will be his when he learns more to become one of the strongest Sith alive.
Beliefs: Little is known on if Fang does or does not posses a form of spirituality - as he often refuses to share anything in the way of personal information about himself.
Emotional Traits: Despite his potential, Fang is accute to bouts of frustration and aggression. While, in fighting this can be a dangerous weapon to face, it can also be one of his greatest issues as he learns to control it. Otherwise, he seems rather reserved and calculated about those around him.

History and Background: Fang wasn't born. Not really, anyway. What he was, would be better described as "an experiment". A test to see if the mixing of DNA's would equal that of a stronger warrior. That's what the Sith wanted to know; and it was a test they were more than happy to try out. After discussing with the people of Kamino - mostly one sided, hostile pushes with the assuring that the people of Kamino would be paid handsomely for their part in the creation, using their advanced knowledge and ability with cloning and gene research - the production was put into place. For a while, it was very touch and go; mixes of results ranging from near success, before sudden shutdown of vital organs, to complete failures from the off, coming out massively troubled or problemed.

Eventually, after large amounts of work were put into the genetic coding the experiment, at the time named Project AHGR (Animal Human Gene Reconstruction), took the correct shape. The humanoid body and brain with the enhancements of an animal added in. Questions were raised, however after study and checks, the results came in positive - Fang was set to function well, correctly, without his body systems contradicting and shutting one another down, and was assured to have a lengthy life span.

The creation process complete, he was then incubated to quickly grow and develop until he was at a physical age of 18. Grown and physically developed, he was then set onto so that he was taught basic motor skills, thinking process - educated into being loyal to the Sith, molded to fit their wants and desires; though underneath, he was also taught the means of free and willing thought. To make decisions on his own terms, and consider factors before making any actions. His mind was developed until he was able to think both independently and efficiently without breaking any of his higher powers main desires - or at least, as little as possible.

His DNA mix gave Fang a rather healthy, or unhealthy depending on how it was looked at, mean streak of emotions. Going rapidly from calm, cold and decisive to suddenly aggressive, vicious and rage filled, even without a lightsabre - his overly sharp teeth and retracting claws became more than difficult to deal with.

During his progression, both physically and mentally, Fang displayed signs of the force in him - one of the primary concerns of the Sith. With that, he has proven to be a worthwhile endeavor, more time and training will prove invaluable as he works toward becoming an asset to the Sith. The only of his kind, Fang is keen to make sure that stays as it is; wishing to be a legend for what he is rather than being the start of a breed.

Questioning the efficiency of their first subject, project AHGR was put on a standby notice - not closed and ended, but rather put on pause to test and check the current status of their first breakthrough. Fang was to be studied as he grew to be checked both for his problem areas, both mental and physical, as well as his most successful areas. The Sith looked to him as a learning curve; see what they wanted from him within their future experiments and what they wanted to remove from any possible future generation.

Recent History: Fang's most recent accomplishments are primarily his progression into the Sith classes. Although still a young learner, he has been showing much in the way of potential. His powers with the force have becoming increasingly more prominent; focusing large amounts of his time on training, focusing for now on three things - gaining his lightsaber, developing his sabre fighting style, and developing his force powers. When these are done, he will continue to work, progress and expand until he is notorious as a deadly opponent.

Weapons: Vibrosword, the Force itself, claws, teeth.

Ship: Usually, Fang will be a passenger rather than a pilot himself, though if required, he is partial to a speeder of any form. He himself does not pilot anything.

Force Information:
Force Sensitive? Yes
Force Powers: Force Push
Force Pull
Force Jump
Force Speed

Lightsaber Form: Sith - Form VI Niman; using it to incorporate his claws, fangs and force pushes into his fighting style with the use of a vibrosword, Fang has worked to progress it as his primary means of attack.

Force Form: Force Aura

[Lao]

A few things:

- Your Faction would probably be the Sith. Unless you don't want to be apart of them.

- What is Force Drag? (Could it be Force Pull?)

- Is Project AHGR still active?

[Duke]

You remind me of Savage Oppress from Clone Wars.

[Lao]

Duke,

Please keep comments like that, out of Character Creation.

[Amy Setsudanki]

Just fix what lao said to fix and it can be aproved

[Hunter]

Sorry for the delay, net's been out at home so I had to wait till I was back in class before I could read and edit anything. Anyways, I've sorted what was said, and thanks for the assist. Anything else needing changed or looked at, feel free to mention and I'll get them sorted as soon as possible. :D

[Lao]

That's okay, no worries. Take your time and let me know when this character is done.

[Zacharias]

Very nice character profile! I like how you balanced out his strengths with the smell weakness; that was a nice touch.

I don't really get the feel for what motivates him, to be honest, and that gives him a certain mystique. He looks at first to be a creature of instinct, engineered to fight for his masters, and on the other hand he looks personally ambitious, trying to carve out a name for himself before more like him arrive. Interesting possibilities there...

On a slightly irrelevant and petty note, a 5'11" person at 145 lbs would struggle, I think, to perform the feats of strength attributed to your character; I'm of a similar description, and though I am pleased with my physique, I would not by any means describe it as "well developed". I suppose with the genetic altering he could be given a different musculature to make him stronger, but still, if we were being nit-pickingly realistic, I'd weigh him in around 165 pounds. I have no idea why I felt compelled to point that out, so feel free to ignore it if you so desire.

Overall, really great character! I'm looking forward to rping with you! Lao has, in the past, pointed out that you can start roleplaying before your character is actually finished, so feel free to hop in whenever you are ready.

[Hunter]

Much appreciation to everyone for their contribution on my character, it gets read and used no matter what. Someone puts in their offer to help, the least I can do is find use of it!

Zacharias, thank you for the kind words, I'm glad that little part made an appeal. I just kinda looked at it as a common sense thing, and I hate making guys without giving them a sense of "this is how to actually hurt them". xD I took your words on board and shifted him up to 170 - I figured that the added 5lbs would give some allowance due to his muscle.

The whole background thing..I kinda wanted to contradict it a little in the sense that he's an engineered biological being who was made so that his masters could use him; but he's also got the whole "I think and I react" trait where he has a concept of the world around him.

I think that he's more or less done and I'm gonna hop about RPing, so really now Lao, if you want me to make any more edits to make him suited to the accept stage, or if you have any ideas on how I could improve him more, please let me know! I'm excited about getting him accepted and started here. :)

[Lao]

Approved.

Thanks for submitting your character to be approved. Any criticism of your character please take to heart as we attempt to make everyone's roleplaying skill improve, and character's are the ground zero for doing so.

Good luck with future character development, and maybe next time you submit your character it will be deemed flawless. Thanks for choosing SWD and have fun in the RP.

Star Wars Dominion Staff