[Approved] Duke Stelleso, The Mysterious One

Name: Duke Stelleso
Nickname: The Mysterious One(optional)
Race: Human
Gender:Male
Age:13
Homeworld: Coruscant

Alignment: JediPadawan/Sentinel, Republic, (Affiliated with the Jedi and Lawful Good)

Description: Has shaggy brown hair and brown eyes. Wears white black and gray Jedi Armor with the republic insignia on it with his robes under it. Tan skin
-Hair Color: Brown shaggy but combed well
-Weigh/Heightt: Average
-Type of build: Medium muscular.
-Facial hair, eye color, etc
-Clothing: White Black and Gray Jedi Armor like the ones worn in the clone wars with black, brown, crimson robes underneath, wears white tipless gloves with black Jedi combat boots like Anakin's with the buckles fulyl adjusted but for style leaves part of them open..
-Markings/Scars: A few. One above the eye and one on his chest.
-Anything else of importance: Mother was a Diplomat turned Jedi turned Mandalorian Warrior and father was a reckless Jedi Knight.

Personality: Sarcastic wit. Some times have an outrageous personality and a dry sense of humor. Charming, calm, wise. Believes reckless is good but it is a last resort. Cautious, conservative, but unorthodox/maverick, intelligent. Has a bit of arrogance but keeps it under control. Jokester and bears a contrast to Aaron's personality and life. (Note: All of these characetrisitcs he got he got them growin gup in child hood and his life and learning about the Jedi)
-Likes/Dislikes: Dislikes Negativity in general
-Social/Unsocial: in between
-View on Life/others: All life is important but death is a part of life and so is killing evil.
-Beliefs: The Force, The Unifying Force, The Light and Dark Side, The Living Force
-Opinion on other factions: Sith-Evil, can’t be trusted. As dirty as the Empire, Bounty Hunters, etc., Jedi-Guardians of Peace and Justice that fight for the Republic. They may police the galaxy but at least they’re keeping it safe.
-Emotional traits:Serious, Fun, Easily Annoyed, Mysterious
-Anything else of importance:Nope

History: Duke was born to a well family on Coruscant. His mother was a former bounty hunter but turned a diplomat after years of knowing it wasn’t getting her anywhere in life. Eventually she found out Diplomacy didn’t always work out so well and she went to go fight for Mandolore and Kamino knowing she had genes similiar to Boba Fett and the Clone Troopers, that it wouldn’t reduce her to the level of Smugglers. His father was a Jedi Knight but he was reckless. It was his recklessness that denied him access to the Council and promotion to Master. Duke was also friends with Aaron but as a year older than Aaron he often looked out for Aaron who was an uncontrolled child; a reckless and arrogant one who could fall to the dark side. They bared similarities in beliefs and personalities so they got along good; resembling the rebellious nature of the Knights of the Old Republic As Duke grown up he often idealized the likes of Obi-Wan Kenobi, Grand Master Yoda, Luke Skywalker, Anakin Skywalker, Kyp Durron, Mace Windu and more. One day Duke wanted to have a seat on the Council. One day his dad took him to get inducted into the Order as his dad as his master. Duke was happy he was an Apprentice but his dad was cocky. Duke learned basic things from his father but one day his Father chose to go fight the Sith. He felt that it was reckless but for the greater good but what happened? They tortured his dad to death. From that day Duke learned that recklessness is only good when necessary. Wisdom comes first over bravery which is sometimes just foolish chilvary He is now searching the galaxy in search of a Jedi Master to teach him the ways of the Force and rebuild the Jedi Order that once patrolled the stars. He has also found out about the death of Aaron. he grieves over it but Aaron made the same mistake as his father.

Weapon: Blue and Red lightsabers designed just like Obi-Wan's and Luke's amde with synthetic crystals. Mean to show his belief that if the Light and Dark Side come together that it’s unstoppable. Can make the two lightsabers into a saberstaff.

Force Powers (if Force sensitive): Basic Force Powers; Force Speed, Force Push, Telekinesis,Force Jump, force Speed, Force Sense

Vehicle/Ship :( optional)
-Picture of the Ship:
-Ship name:
-Type of ship:
-Weapons(if any):
-Size:
-Capacity:(Amount of people that can fit in the ship)
-Crew(if any):(How many it takes to man this craft)
-Size of Crew: How many people are part of your crew.
-Capability of ship:
-Any other detail of importance about your personal craft:


Lightsaber Form: Soresu but Duke has yet to learn to truly learn Jar'Kai with his two lightsabers.
Force Form: Force Channel

A few things....

1. Luke Skywalker is not alive currently, which would imply that your character can't have a personality similiar to Old Ben and Anakin. And in order to get personality traits from a person you have to spend some time around them. In short, no.

2. What kind of crimson armor does he wear underneath his robes?

3. So does his use the Jar'Kai style of lightsaber combat or Soresu, because their is a reference to your character using both.

4. How is your character's father a Jedi Master when in your back story you say

That was after a quick glance. Please make the corrections. Thank you.

edited.

A few things....

- Alignment, is talking about your character's alignment. I.E. lawful good, chaotic evil.

- Lightsaber form, do you use Jar'Kai or Soresu? Put one down. If it is your own form then explain it.

- I need a list of Force powers your character uses.

edited.

Approved.

Thanks for submitting your character to be approved. Any criticism of your character please take to heart as we attempt to make everyone's roleplaying skill improve, and character's are the ground zero for doing so.

Good luck with future character development, and maybe next time you submit your character it will be deemed flawless. Thanks for choosing SWD and have fun in the RP.

Star Wars Dominion Staff