[Approved] My Character, Aaron, The Gray Jedi

[Aaron]

Name:Aaron Drakson
Nickname:Aaro
Race:Human
Gender:Male
Age:12
[b]Homeworld:Coruscant

Alignment: The New Jedi Order but belives in only the Force and the Potentium/Unifying Force and balances Light and Dark. Will do anything for Peace in the Galaxy like Jacen Solo.

Description Handsome with tan skin and blue eyes. Brown shaggy hair and wears a whie Jedi Robe with a black tunic.:
-Hair Color Brown
-Weight:Average
-Type of build: Medium muscular
-No facial hear. blue eyes, tan skin,
-Clothing:Jedi Robes that are a white robe with black and brown tunic.
-Markings/Scars:A few
-Anything else of importance:Mom was a Diplomat in the Galactic Alliance and Dad was a Jedi turned Sith Lord.

Personality:King bravehearted but can be cold blooded and ruthless
-Likes/Dislikes:Negativity in General
-Social/Unsocial:Social
-View on Life/others:All life is important but eats meat. Believes in the Force
-Beliefs:The Force, The Unifying Force/The Potentium, The Netherworld of the Force, etc.
-Opinion on other factions: Sith-The Sith bring destricution to the glaxy but the Dark Side is good also and so is the Light and they should join forces in search of knowledge peace and prosperity,Republic-The Republic are good but have very corrupt politics, Mandalorians- Powerful soldiars that should fight in the side of good btu can not be trusted and are dirty as Smugglers.,Mercenaries and Emperor- Low down dirty no good.
-Emtional traits:Annoyed, kind, friendly, but can be mean
-Anything else of importance:Nope

History: Aaron grew up having a good life. The Galaxy was in a war btu things were good His mom was a seasoned Diplomat bring peace to Galaxy and even a fighter for other planets such as Corellia and welcoming undeveloped planets to the Galactic Republic. His dad was a powerful Jedi Master on the High Council but his Dad felt that maybe the Dark Side could be pushed to the limits. That event hough the Jedi have changed they are still limited. So eventually the Jedi fought his Dad in a powerful war where Aaron was just a kid. It was said his Dad was killed but his Dad was powerful. His dad may not even be dead so right now his mom is just taking care of him and she sent him to the New Jedi Order to be trained. But heres how it really started: Aaron lived a peaceful lie in the Republic. Hia father and mother met over a political discussion and they were drawn to each other. Eventually they had Aaron their only child. Now his mom and dad's relationship was open known by even the Chief of State but they had to make sure to kee politics and personal seperate. Now Aaron grew up with his dad peacefully. It was his dad that inducted him into the order. That helped him crystalize a lightsaber and taught him basic force forms. Butt his dad was a Gray Jedi also. He felt that the Dark Side is good also. Maybe they're more optimistic than the Jedi who simply side with the light. Thats when his dad be came the new Dark Lord of the Sith. Ona battle on a planet between the Jedi and the Sith his dad was said to be dead. Aaron was devastated but he didnt believe it. Theres rumors that his Dad may be back and Aaron's sad and happy for that. Right now however he's looking for a Master to train with to be come a Jedi Master and eventualyl his ultimate dream to become Grand Master of the New Jedi Order, bring peace and prosperity to the galaxy and become the greatest Force-Sensitive of All Time capable of Blancing the Light and Dark Side Abilities and becoming oneness..

Weapon:Practicing lightsaber thats Blue

Force Powers(if Force sensitive):Can talk to animals and levitate things. Basic force abilities btu has shown tremendous power.

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Lightsaber Form:Soresu
Force Form: Force Channel

[Lao]

I have a few things....

1. Spell errors. To help on this part, you can put it in a word doc and it will help.

2. Only one Lightsaber form at a time.

3. Only one Force form at a time.

4. Fill in the history more.
I.E.
- Fill in your mother and father's history and how your father turned to the darkside.
- Your character's relationship with his father.
- Tell about where you grew up.
- Talk about any siblings.

[Aaron]

edited.

[Lao]

Okay, I see that you have made some improvements but you still need to fix these things before I can approve it...

1. Spell errors. To help on this part, you can put it in a word doc and it will help.

2. Only one Lightsaber form at a time. You can have a different one at a later time. (So choose ONE)

3. Only one Force form at a time. You can have a different one at a later time. (So choose ONE)

[Aaron]

Edited and I checked my spelling. May be some minor erros but its eligble to read.

[Lao]

A few things....

You can learn Djem So and Vaapad later, but for now. This instance. Pick a lightsaber form. Here is an example for you to go by:

Lightsaber Form: Makashi
Force Form: Force Channel

[Aaron]

Kk so I'm approved now so I want to rp with you as my master.

[Lao]

Ummm....I'd hate to break it to you, but you still haven't fixed the Lightsaber Form part. Just pick a form that you can use, and put it there. Literally. You don't have to write out all of your goals and plans for the next twenty years there. But you have to pick something....

[Aaron]

kk edited.

[Lao]

Approved.

Thanks for submitting your character to be approved. Any criticism of your character please take to heart as we attempt to make everyone's roleplaying skill improve, and character's are the ground zero for doing so.

Good luck with future character development, and maybe next time you submit your character it will be deemed flawless. Thanks for choosing SWD and have fun in the RP.

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