[Approved] Kragnos Bonescar

[Silverscale]

I hope he's acceptable, been a while since I tried to make a star wars character.

Name: Kragnos Bonescar
Nickname: Kragnos the Technomancer, called that because of his great proficiency with technology and his experiments in combining it with the force.
Race: Zabrak
Gender: Male
Age: 26
Homeworld: Unknown

Alignment: Jedi

Description: A rather tall Zabrak, 7'2" in height to be precise, his black skin, red eyes, horns and blue tattoos makes him very intimidating, and yet his red eyes hold a kind soul in their eyes, this man's mind cannot be determined by his looks alone.
-Hair Color: No Hair
-Weight: 108 kg
-Type of build: Athletic with a hint of slim built that shows that he's not just strong but also rather dexterous as well.
-Facial hair, eye color, etc: Red Eyes, stone like face and pointy ears.
-Clothing: Black Tunic, Dark Brown Bulletproof Leather Vest, Dark Green and Dark Brown Colored Camouflage Pants With Dark Blue Protection Pads, Dark Brown Utility Belt With Two Containment Hatches And Two Big Pouches, a Pair of Black Leather Boots With Hidden Compartments In The Heels and a Big Dark Brown and Light Brown Backpack.
-Markings/Scars: His skin is black and has aquamarine blue tribal tattoos over his body, similar to those of Darth Maul's but not identical. On his back there's several scars, apparently created by some kind of torture tool, multiple types of torture tools, and on his left shoulder there's a light gray branding in the shape of a number, 214-0253, looking like the serial number made for a product.
-Anything else of importance: Out of his cranium grows a skeletal crown of large black horns sticks out of his skull, larger then a normal Zabrak have, they make him look very intimidating, the horns have jagged shapes, almost like dirks, a type of dagger. He always carry some kind of weapon and/or gadget on him, even after undressing for a shower he never takes off all his things.

Personality: Kind hearted, a bit of a geek, loves technology and combat, dislikes slavery and dark tight places and considers himself to be a creator of life and not just a droid builder.
-Likes/Dislikes: He loves technology, droids, space ships, weapons, combat arts, the way of the force, unknown technology, inventing, gadgets and other stuff related to combat and technology, and he also loves meat, especially roasted bird.
He does not enjoy to see innocents injured or put into danger, he despites slavery and more darker sides of the world, he doesn't enjoy politics or acting polite, and he absolutely despites vegetables, especially celery.
-Social/Unsocial: While he likes to speak to others and treat them equally so is he not a very... social person, he is extremely paranoid of his surroundings, because of his childhood he has an extreme paranoia of being watched, it has made him not the most social of people, sometimes he wakes up by frightening nightmares of his past and cannot sleep for hours.
-View on Life/others: Kragnos thinks of life as something you should enjoy while it lasts, to not let things get heavy on your shoulders, you should protect the life of others, to kill is a natural order so he doesn't think much of things when he have to kill, though he cannot deny he doesn't enjoy ending a sentient being.
He sees his creations of droids, robots and other intelligent mechanisms as a way of creating life, he sees it as a way to give life to the lifeless and let it experience things it had never done before.
-Beliefs: In ways of believes Kragnos is not a very religious person, but he believes that the force is neither evil nor good, there is no darkness nor light, those elements are created by the Jedi and the sith, the Force is pure life, it can end it and create it, and he prefers to create then destroy life.
-Opinion on other factions: The way of the force shouldn't be split apart and fought against one another, it causes disturbances in the universe that causes many disasters, this is what he believes in the situation of the Sith and the Jedi, but he knows that there will always be war between people of different believes.
For the Republic and the Empire he is a strict follower of the republic as he cannot see an Empire as a good thing where only one person rules, it wouldn't be right for anyone to have one person decide whether you can be free or not.
-Emtional traits: Kragnos hates dark and small spaces, it frightens him in a way that not even a powerful sith lord would do, he fears it like nothing else. But on the other hand has he managed to get over part of his phobia, and has gotten better at staying in closed spaces, but he still prefers to keep it light. He
-Anything else of importance: He is extremely paranoid of his surroundings, because of his childhood he has an extreme paranoia of being watched, it has made him not the most social of people, sometimes he wakes up by frightening nightmares of his past and cannot sleep for hours.

History: Kragnos Bonescar was found as an orphan among the slave market aboard the space station Valhall-20, he was about six years old when he was found, he had no knowledge of his origin, all he knew was the terrifying life as a slave, the whips, the knives, the branding and the hitting. He was always kept inside a small and dark metal box with only a small amount of light coming out of the ventilation holes in the lower edges of the box.
He was discovered after a week after the slave market had been exposed, he was free from the slavery and raised in an orphanage on Naboo, but it was clear that the trauma was still strong in him as he was frightened by others for over two years until he felt safe enough, and yet even more so he retains his fear of dark and closed spaces. It became clear that Kragnos was an intelligent boy, very intelligent, as he began to make childish gadgets out of the broken toys and equipment in the orphanage. When he became older Kragnos became a mechanic on a space station, it was there that he meet his first real friend, and fellow Zabrak, an old Zabrak named Telon Rostblade, he taught Kragnos the way of mechanics, how to build things, how to design, how to engineer, how to create.
Telon also taught him the old self defenses of their ace, seeing how Kragnos was an orphan and only had his wit, intelligence and speed, he was rather scrawny back then, he began to build him into a true Zabrak warrior. When Kragnos became twenty Telon gave him a very special birthday gift, a BARC Speeder, a speeder once used by the clone trooper commandos during the Clone Wars, it had been old and the stuffing of the seat rotten with maggots, but it had been the most wonderful gift Kragnos had ever been given. He restored the old piece of junk into its original state and then improved it, giving it a better defense with an added blaster, an enlarged cargo and freshened joints. Kragnos even used the spare parts he got over from it to create a small droid he named H3-R4, but he liked to call it Hera, it was a small second degree droid that was sentient and had a will of its own, it can act as a seeker, scout, spy, training and even as a pilot droid, though that was only because through the following years of upgrades Kragnos did to H3-R4, he made it capable of all these things as he grew more experienced in the use of technology.
But then there was an incident that forever changed Kragnos' life, Telon had told him to go to a repair job on an interstellar hypder drive that had gotten damaged by pirates. He had repaired it and installed it, but as he was just closing the hatch to the hyperdrive he was startled by the sound of gunfire and then out from one of the cargo door came a pair of jedis chased by a group of storm troopers, defending themselves against the soldiers with their lightsabers, even if they were outnumbered by a big amount. Kragnos had been uncertain what to do when one of the storm troopers shouted out to kill him as there were to be no witnesses.
He sprang into action without thinking and leaped off the platform he had been raised on to reach the hyperdrive, he drew one of his daggers and stabbed one of the troopers in the skull with the knife before drawing the dead trooper's blaster and fired it in rapid fashion at the group, a repeater blaster rifle was a devastating weapon against big groups in. The troopers ducked at the wild bolts of red energy and tried to fire back but didn't get the chance as the rapid fire was too random to take a chance. In the end the rifle was out of ammunition but by then had a great deal of the troopers fallen from the spit fire of energy bolts. The remaining troopers charged at Kragnos who drew his dagger again along with his blaster and fought in his people's fighting style, stabbing and slashing his dagger while also firing his blaster in a close melee combat. But in the end he was struck by a bolt in the side and he fell, clutching his wound.
The jedis who had fought with him tried to get to him as the trooper who had hit Kragnos walked forward to shoot him in the skull, Kragnos panicked and shouted out in defiance into the barrel, feeling an unknown force rise in his chest. "GO AWAY!!" The barrel of the blaster was suddenly pushed away with the force of a bullet and went straight through the trooper's torso, smashing another in the helmet, stunning him. Kragnos blackened out from the mental strain of using the force and do not know what happened next.
He woke up in his bed with Telon and the two jedis looking down at him, his side bandaged and a wet rag on his forehead. The Jedis said that he had the potential to be one of them, if he was willing, as they had seen he had the power to use the force. Kragnos had been surprised at this, and wanted to be alone for a little while with Telon to talk with him, the old Zabrak told him to accept their offer, he was meant for greater things then a simple mechanic. So after a week after recovering from his injuries Kragnos left with the Jedi to become one of them, but he would always keep contact with the old mechanic, the one he had grown to call Father.
And now after two years of training himself in the basic powers of the force and the art of the force he feels a great change is upon him, and he knows that it will be a great trial for him to get through it, but he will try his best to get through and earn his place as one of the Jedis, and let his work with technology, make the galaxy a better place for everybody.

Weapon: Once he finishes his training as a padawan he intends to make himself a completely unique lightsaber. But as he has not even a regular one yet does he use a pair of Bryar pistols and a pair of Combat Knives. He also carries thermal detonators and minor tools and gadgets he can use in emergencies.

Force Powers(if Force sensitive): Force Pull/Push, Concentration, Force Leap, Force Aura, Battle Precognition (I checked it out and Easy Ranked Powers are allowed)

Vehicle/Ship:(optional)
-Picture of the Ship: http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb2006...ARC_profile.jpg
-Type of ship: Biker Advanced Recon Commando (BARC) speeder
-Weapons(if any): Twin light Blaster cannons and a single Light Blaster cannon.
-Size: 4.57 meters
-Capacity: 2
-Crew(if any): 1
-Size of Crew: 1
-Capability of ship: A Speed of 520 km/h and a cargo bay capable of holding 10 kg
-Any other detail of importance about your personal craft: It's cargo capacity is bigger then normal BARC Speeders and it has an additional Light Blaster Cannon on its rear to be used if in pursuits. And it also has a special slot in its rear that makes it possible for H-34 to insert himself into the speeder and control the speeder in emergencies, and even sue the weapons.


Lightsaber Form: Shii-Cho
Force Form: Force Channel

[Pard]

Busy right now, I will read it later. But you can still go RP, you can RP before your profile is approved or even written. It allows you to figure out who your character is and if you like him or not.

[Zeon705]

Youll learn force powers once your training is complete. You have like a sporadic understanding of the force but you can not fluidly harness it yet.

Change that or make a note of it in you powers section and I think youll be golden.

ONce you fix it I give it my stamp of approval, nice job! You may RP in the meantime if you'd like, character creation is just a formal sort of thing so we can document your faction lol.

[Silverscale]

Edited.

[Pard]

Approved.

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