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Sabrina the cyborg

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gracy	Posted: Jul 2 2007, 12:08 PM
Newb RPer Group: Unknown Posts: 2 Member No.: 1,156 Joined: Jul '07	Name: Sabrina Alias: Sabrina the cyborg Gender: female Race: cyborg use to be human Age: looks 20 Alignment: mercenary Skills:she's programed to be a profetional dancer, a elit pilot, a master engineer and a elite bodyguard, a master spy, a master weapons builder, a elite droid macanic, she is also programed to know all forms of battle. they know 190 ways to kill any known species and is well versed in lightsaber contsruction and handleing. they are also extremly agile and can funtion in any envernment, even space.they don't tire out and are still force sencitive. they are also programmed with all the knowledge of the greatest minds in the known galaxy Description: -Hair Colorbrown -Weight107 -Type of buildslender -Facial hair no facial hair. -eye color:eyes are brown -hight: 5' 7" -Clothing: http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m114/ev.06-Z6-armor.jpg note: attached to her skin http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m114/ev.tor-bracers.jpg note: attached to skine also http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m114/evlith/1.jpg http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m114/evlith/draggrst.jpg note: attached to skine also -Markings/Scars: tattoo on back looks like this: http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m114/evlith/Krull.jpg -Anything else of importance: Physical Appearance: http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m114/ev.4_92_resize.jpg Personality: -Likes/Dislikes:likes flowers. dislikes jedi. enjoys killing -Social/Unsocial: social -View on Life/others:cold torward othersw who show emotions. -Beliefs: that people should handle there own problems -Opinion on other factions:undecided -Emtional traits:short temper. lack of good judgment -Anything else of importance: can not remember her past force sencitive: yes but does not know it. Bio: was found dead on naboo by a evil sceintist who quickly turned her into a cyborg. she later escape the scientest on a ship he had also designed and went to find a job as a bodyguard. then she hired on with the hutts as a bodyguard. but when the hutt she was guarding killed itself she took the money the hutt owed her and then took control of his crime ring. it turned out to be a very profitable buessness. years later she now has a hand in almost everything illegal, from spice smuggleing to kiddnaping and extortion. she is making a fortune and loves it. she then uised her fortune to buy a sail barge for when shes at her base of opperations. then her buesness was ruined when she was caught doing a spice run. after she got out of jail she decided to hire out as a mercenary. Home Planet: naboo Weapons: http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m114/evlith/magrail0.jpg type: plasma rifle http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m114/evlith/ccc.jpg http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m114/ev.icTigereye1.jpg note hidden on person http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m114/evlith/pirate.jpg ship:

Crow Ordo�	Posted: Jul 3 2007, 12:21 PM
Alchemic Scientist Group: Jedi Posts: 3,457 Member No.: 255 Joined: Nov '05	Tone it down with the abilities (you're just starting to RP after all), clean it up grammar-wise, and make the Bio a little bit longer.

Sad Statue�	Posted: Jul 3 2007, 12:54 PM
Dak is my bitch Group: Legend Posts: 4,573 Member No.: 66 Joined: Jun '05	And you can't have the ship.

gracy	Posted: Jul 3 2007, 01:31 PM
Newb RPer Group: Unknown Posts: 2 Member No.: 1,156 Joined: Jul '07	could i at least rp getting it.

LaoTzu	Posted: Jul 3 2007, 02:22 PM
I choose to live. I choose to believe in a dream.... Group: Admin Posts: 9,685 Member No.: 97 Joined: Jul '05	It would take awhile (a long while at that) to rp that out, given all of the details and specs on it.....At least from my point of view..

Bendak�

Posted: Jul 3 2007, 02:32 PM

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QUOTE (LaoTzu @ Jul 3 2007, 03:22 PM)

It would take awhile (a long while at that) to rp that out, given all of the details and specs on it..At least from my point of view..

On this point, I agree. Clean the whole thing up, and organize it. You can put hyperlinks instead of all the pictures.

LaoTzu	Posted: Jul 3 2007, 04:15 PM
I choose to live. I choose to believe in a dream.... Group: Admin Posts: 9,685 Member No.: 97 Joined: Jul '05	Also tone down the amount of skills she has right now. She can acquire those latter, but for right now that is pretty high..

Voltar�	Posted: Jul 4 2007, 02:01 AM
I'm your falling star... make a wish Group: Legend Posts: 8,268 Member No.: 684 Joined: Jun '06	What is she, a female Voltar+Shayla? My garsh... she's learned everything but the construction of the kitchen sink!

LaoTzu	Posted: Jul 5 2007, 12:57 AM
I choose to live. I choose to believe in a dream.... Group: Admin Posts: 9,685 Member No.: 97 Joined: Jul '05	I think it might be stuck some where between.....'programed to know all forms of battle. they know 190 ways to kill any known species' and 'are also programmed with all the knowledge of the greatest minds in the known galaxy'.... But I am not going to point anything out. Just cause I don't really feel like it.......oh, and tired......

Sad Statue�	Posted: Jul 12 2007, 04:35 PM
Dak is my bitch Group: Legend Posts: 4,573 Member No.: 66 Joined: Jun '05	Unaccepted. Sorry, your character has not been approved. Read the character creation rules for more information on creating characters, or PM one of the admins for extra help. Hopefully you will have better luck next time! Please review the Character Creation Guidelines for more information on how to create an acceptable character. Star Wars Dominion Staff

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