Adenn

[Sjo Dijrl]

I am giving up my Jedi character as I can't seem to get going with him.

Also as a side question, should I post in the Official Name Change Thread and Official Faction Change Thread or can one of you guys who accepts my profile do it?

Name: Adenn

Race: Human

Gender: Male

Age: 30

Homeworld: Mandalore

Class: Mando

Description:
Physical -
Height: 6"2'
Weight: 185
Build: Athletic
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Green
Skin Tone: White

Attire -
Head - Sealed Silver helmet, black cloth wrapped around the top and tied in back

Upper Body - Mid-Weight silver chestplate and backplate
--------------- Heat resistant pressure sealed under armor
--------------- Long sleeve heavy metal armor

Lower Body - Mid-Weight silver upper and lower leg plates, with black cloth tied at the waist
--------------- Heat resistant pressure sealed under armor
--------------- Tight black pants

Feet - Silver Mid-Weight vaccum sealed light infantry black boots
------- Standard issue black infantry socks

Personality
Adeen is a very confident in his abilities. He is very intellegent and is a excellent leader. He is more calm and collective than other Mandos. A caring individual Adenn is quite the opposite of selfish. Though a good individual he has very little patience.

History:
Born into a middle class Mando family Adenn grew up on Mando. His father a militaristic mind and his mother the same Adenn grew up hard. Both his father and mother pushed him to suceed beyond the limits of others. When he was not attending school he was away with his father hunting. Here he gained his knowledge of warfare outside of the training he would receive later in his life. His father was a ground soldier and veteran of many battles fought across the galaxy. Before any one else his age Adenn was able to fire a blaster rifle and his one real talent was his pin point acuraccy. Adenn's name is derived from the Mando'a word with merciless and he was exactly that even as a child. Wether it be a friendly game or a competion Adenn never lost.

By the age of 18 Adenn graduated from his private school and immediatly enlisted in the military. Like most Mando parents his were overjoyed that he was following his families footsteps. Two weeks later Adenn was sent of to a training camp on another world, never to see his father or mother again. During the duration of his stay Adenn excelled at everything the trainers could throw at him. Years later Adenn joining the Mando infantry as a squad leader.

Between each conflict Adenn showed his valor. Once cut off from supply lines Adenn himself ran through enemy lines to return with hundreds of pounds of ammo and guns on a repulsor lift. His squad held out for another week afterwards to win the battle. Adenn with given both a promotion and many medals for his and his squads' triumph at the battle.

Now many years after that battle Adenn is a Captain of a platoon of Mando soldiers.

[Lucin Widowmaker]

1. Why would a mando have tight pants?
2. Need better grammar for History
3. Need a larger history. Or otherwise elaborate on your current one.
4. You need to go to the official topics to ask for faction/name change because admins normally don't bother with character approving and they are the only ones who can change your info.

[Jak Kindural]

Sjo, how did your Jedi not "get going?" You do remember that you have to make your own training thread, and then your master will join, right?

[Sjo Dijrl]

Well I can't even motivate myself to even do that much.

Tight pants as in not baggy......don't know how to explain it. I was in a rush when I did this so I will work on it later, most likely tomorrow.

[Lucin Widowmaker]

Then I'll check up on this tomorrow...

[Clapp Rowan]

It's tommorow plus two weeks. I'm sorry, but I must unapprove this.

[Clapp Rowan]

Unaccepted.

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