Name: Janus Arait
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 17

Homeworld: Koros Major

Alignment: Sith

Description:
-Hair Color
Blonde Hair
-Weight
176 lb
-Type of build
Acrobat Build
-Facial hair, eye color, etc
Eyecolour is a light green, he stands at 6.1 ft, caucasian skin.
-Clothing:
See picture: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:StandardReborn.jpg
-Markings/Scars:
A Tattoo of a setting red sun in the middle of his forehead.
-Anything else of importance:
Nothing else.
Personality:
-Likes/Dislikes:
Janus likes deceiving others and subtle manipulation, he also likes Combat with Lightsabers, however, he detests politics for some reason.
-Social/Unsocial:
Social
-View on Life/others:
He sees others as tools and weapons to use at his will, he cares little for the lives of others unless it is important to his goals.
-Beliefs:
Janus believes that the Sith have grown too weak and that they require a subtle touch of a deceiver to awaken them fully and bring back the golden era of the Sith.
-Opinion on other factions: He detests the Jedi, the Republic he cares absolutely nothing for, the Imperials he also cares nothing for.
-Emtional traits: Janus keeps most of his darker emotions under a tight lid, keeping up a facade of being 'pleasant' and 'well-mannered', but underneath he is a swirling nexus of hate and a thirst for power.
-Anything else of importance:
Nothing
History:
Born on Koros Major, Janus was born to a pair of Human scholars named Karlos Alrait and Nomi Alrait, who studied Koros Major's past, he was an only child and known as a bright child who loved history, when he was 14 his parents died in an accident he was found by the Imperials who took him hoping he would make a excellent recruit that nobody could trace,later they found that he was Force-Sensative, they sent him to the Sith who trained him in the Dark Arts, he was a very curious adept, always studying tomes and scrolls in the Archives, upon reading about Darth Bane he changed dramatically, employing Darth Bane's techniques of deception and using his own intelligence to enforce it by appearing 'well-mannered' and seeming harmless, he became manipulative and devious in his own right, waiting patiently for his time to acomplish his goals.


Weapon:
Single-Hilted Lightsaber (Red Crystal)
Force Powers(if Force sensitive):
Force Push
Force Pull
Force Leap/Jump
Sense Force
Hide Force Sensitivity
Force Blast
Force Grip
Drain
Force Bolt
Force Form:
Force Mastery
Lightsaber Style:
Form I: Shii-Cho

dump the powers, more history

Slit some of it up more, add more catagories in your History. E.g Childhood, Teenager, Young Man, Sith. Do each little step into the Dark side.

Split up you history and description and even your history apart from each other, it is a bit to close and scruffy for my liking. Plus it makes it look like you have more, so some people who just look at the length will think it is more. However they should read it so I don't think that trick should work... I read it. I like the fact he mentions his parents and what they did but expand on that and expand on the planet. I put a description of my homeplanet becuase it is a fairly unknown one, so is... Koros Major.

So basically, alot more history, do more personality and some more description, explain each individual trait like possibly a flick of his sleeve when he is uneasy or something like that.

Jack shut up you are not allowed to post here. Wanna post apply for a modship... Dump the powers as said. Um make that description list into paragraph form.

That's not really required Pard. it's a character sheet.

Actually you can keep the basics (the basics being: Force Push, Force Pull, Force Leap/Jump, Force Grip) but add more history. If not, then dump the powers.......

Don't look like he's showing up and this is almost a month old...

Unaccepted.

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