Name: Sabrina
Alias: Sabrina the cyborg
Gender: female
Race: cyborg use to be human
Age: looks 20

Alignment: mercenary
Skills:she's programed to be a profetional dancer, a elit pilot, a master engineer and a elite bodyguard, a master spy, a master weapons builder, a elite droid macanic, she is also programed to know all forms of battle. they know 190 ways to kill any known species and is well versed in lightsaber contsruction and handleing. they are also extremly agile and can funtion in any envernment, even space.they don't tire out and are still force sencitive. they are also programmed with all the knowledge of the greatest minds in the known galaxy
Description:
-Hair Colorbrown
-Weight107
-Type of buildslender
-Facial hair no facial hair.
-eye color:eyes are brown
-hight: 5' 7"
-Clothing:
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m114/ev.06-Z6-armor.jpg
note: attached to her skin
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m114/ev.tor-bracers.jpg
note: attached to skine also
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m114/evlith/1.jpg
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m114/evlith/draggrst.jpg
note: attached to skine also

-Markings/Scars: tattoo on back looks like this:
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m114/evlith/Krull.jpg
-Anything else of importance:
Physical Appearance: http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m114/ev.4_92_resize.jpg

Personality:
-Likes/Dislikes:likes flowers. dislikes jedi. enjoys killing
-Social/Unsocial: social
-View on Life/others:cold torward othersw who show emotions.
-Beliefs: that people should handle there own problems
-Opinion on other factions:undecided
-Emtional traits:short temper. lack of good judgment
-Anything else of importance: can not remember her past

force sencitive: yes but does not know it.
Bio:
was found dead on naboo by a evil sceintist who quickly turned her into a cyborg. she later escape the scientest on a ship he had also designed and went to find a job as a bodyguard. then she hired on with the hutts as a bodyguard. but when the hutt she was guarding killed itself she took the money the hutt owed her and then took control of his crime ring. it turned out to be a very profitable buessness.

years later she now has a hand in almost everything illegal, from spice smuggleing to kiddnaping and extortion. she is making a fortune and loves it. she then uised her fortune to buy a sail barge for when shes at her base of opperations. then her buesness was ruined when she was caught doing a spice run. after she got out of jail she decided to hire out as a mercenary.

Home Planet: naboo
Weapons:
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m114/evlith/magrail0.jpg
type: plasma rifle

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m114/evlith/ccc.jpg
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m114/ev.icTigereye1.jpg
note hidden on person
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m114/evlith/pirate.jpg

ship:

Tone it down with the abilities (you're just starting to RP after all), clean it up grammar-wise, and make the Bio a little bit longer.

And you can't have the ship.

could i at least rp getting it.

It would take awhile (a long while at that) to rp that out, given all of the details and specs on it.....At least from my point of view..

On this point, I agree. Clean the whole thing up, and organize it. You can put hyperlinks instead of all the pictures.

Also tone down the amount of skills she has right now. She can acquire those latter, but for right now that is pretty high..

What is she, a female Voltar+Shayla? My garsh... she's learned everything but the construction of the kitchen sink!

I think it might be stuck some where between.....'programed to know all forms of battle. they know 190 ways to kill any known species' and 'are also programmed with all the knowledge of the greatest minds in the known galaxy'....

But I am not going to point anything out. Just cause I don't really feel like it.......oh, and tired......

Unaccepted.

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