Hubris Rose, Jedi Apprentice

[Annex]

Name: Hubris Rose
Alias: 'Hubie' is occasionally used as a diminutive, but he dislikes it.
Species: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 14

Appearance: Hubris has rather unkempt brown hair, which is generally kept to a length no longer than two inches, preventing it from ever looking too messy. His eyes are a dull blue, perhaps best described as a sapphire in smoke, with relatively thin lashes, and a Mongolian lid. The eyebrows that lie above follow the contour of his almond eyes, but are quite small. His teeth are straight, and his lips relatively thin. Hubris is blessed with a moderate to dark complexion, and no visible blemishes.

The boy is of average height, with smallish feet, contrasting with fingers and toes that are rather long and amazingly dexterous. His arms and legs are covered in a fine hair, that is beginning to darken, though more-so on his legs. Hubris is quite thin, though looking more athletic than lanky. He usually wears Jedi robes of typical design, preferring earthy browns, and tans to more exotic colours.

Personality: Confident and strong-willed, Hubris is never one to back down from a challenge. He tends to be an analytical thinker, and is rather good at solving problems of logic, while being less proficient at creative or inventive thinking. He prefers to work from a design, or formulate a plan than to improvise, but is capable of it when time is an issue. He tends to be jovial and friendly, though doesn't usually start conversations.

Hubris seems to be a natural in the art of bladed combat, after having trained extensively to gain knight-level proficiency in Makashi. The flow of battle is natural to him, and there's nothing he loves more than exercises of the saber. Picking up new forms is easy for him, and he seems to have a good grasp on the philosophies that shaped them. He hopes to one day be heralded as a great Jedi Swordsman, perhaps even a Blademaster.

Physical Traits:
Strength: below average
Stamina: average
Agility: above average
Balance: average
Flexibility: above average
Speed: average

Force powers:
Force Speed - level 1
Force Sense - level 1
Force Seeing - level 1
Telekinesis - level 1
Force Jump/Leap - level 1
Telepathy - level 1
Meditation - level 1

Lightsaber Forms:
Shii-Cho - low proficiency
Makashi - high proficiency
Soresu - moderate Proficiency

Affiliation: Jedi
Rank: Student (or equivalent, if 'padawan' requires a master)
Masters: N/A
Apprentices: N/A

Vehicles: None
Capital Ships: None
Weapons: Blue Lightsaber
Items: None

Homeplanet: Coruscant
Background: Prose is overrated. All bios should be in limerick form.

Hubris, a baby was born
To a mother sad, broken, and worn
He seldom cried
Rarely sighed
And never did he look forlorn.

Mother and son, they lived on the street
And seldom had shoes on their feet
Stole milk and bread
So they could be fed
Tried, always, to be discreet

A Jedi saw him one day
And asked to take Hubris away
To train in the light
One day be a knight
What could his poor mother say?

So he went along with this man
And joined in with the Jedi clan
They taught him the force
And the Code, of course
Said 'Do all the good that you can'

Eight eventful year's its been
Since he came on the temple scene
Built a saber
Blue in flavour
Colour didn't rhyme, there, it seems.

(I'll edit the background if you really want me to, but I contest that that took far more effort to write than two paragraphs)

[Sith'ari Darth Kracken]

YAY! Annex!

Lol, I like it. And considering the other information (Appearance, Physical Traits, re-ordering of headings) I'm assuming you've used this character before, I like that.

Three things before this is Accepted.

1. The equivalent rank is Student, and a Master, while helpful, is not necessary to progress.
2. Your name needs changed to be in the style Jedi Student _____. The blank may be fill with anything you want, but the most obvious I see are Jedi Student Hubris, Jedi Student Rose, Jedi Student Hubris Rose. Please reply with what you want your name to be and we will change it.
3. In order to keep track of everything we ask that you make a Request for all non-starting items. You only need to request your lightsaber.

Do those and we will Accept your bio.

Kracken

[Annex]

No, I haven't used this character before. It's just that templates tend to suck, so I rearrange/edit them to an order I prefer. The Physical Traits are more of a guide for me, but I figure other people might like to see them, too.

1. Consider it changed
2. To this day, I can't understand why this is necessary. Can't it just be my user title If you won't have it any other way, go with Hubris Rose (assuming it fits).
3. But that requires I make a whole new topic, and seems like far too much effort. Then again, I've probably spent longer writing this response than it will take to make it. *scurries off*

[Sith'ari Darth Kracken]

ACCEPTED.

And I finally decided to change that name thing. It is now in your Member Title, your character name is your Member Name, the Member Title can be broken into multiple lines, and Members cannot edit their titles.

Kracken (see, I sometimes listen to members )