Nice. I like the text ^^. 8/10 for both. I like the renders used.
i don't think he used renders there, just c4d's maybe...
both look nice... 1st 8.5/10, 2nd 7.7/10
btw, what your using? brushes or c4d's?
c4d renders are renders...........
the first has potiential just neds a lil work on depth
2nd: Brushed with C4D renders over the top
, the second one consists of brushes with 2 C4D renders, 1 C4D copied twice for depth and a red C4D to create some sort of effect, dunno how i did it.. just imagination ^^
and the text is underneath a C4D render
i havent used brushes since 2005... -_-