Title: revelation
Description: poem
ayachan - February 16, 2009 05:05 PM (GMT)
a mask of happiness made of lies
turned out to be my demise
the truth has set me free
only to bring such misery
now i walk alone
my innocence overthrown
no longer breathing
no longer feeling
in the struggle, i've faltered
i have all but surrendered
through it all, i tried
but all my faith had died
alwaysthewhiterabbit - April 28, 2009 09:21 PM (GMT)
Thats a good poem. I like the ryme scheme but its not cheesy. If you have more you should put them up. :happy
snowwingz - April 29, 2009 10:59 AM (GMT)
It's wonderful~~~~! xD
You really have talent :yay :yepyep
yep yep, if you have more poems, do post them up xD
Candi - May 1, 2009 12:30 AM (GMT)
Wow o: That's amazing:]]
I love that the poem wasnt like, really over-done but still really detailed:]]
Our show for last year was titled Revelations too xD
We started off with a REALLY cheesy speech/poem/intro type of thing xD I laughed the first time I heard it xD
mikariangel - May 1, 2009 12:48 AM (GMT)
xD that's not nice candi. cheesy stuff are the things we remember and last through the years
the poems great, i love it :wuv
snowwingz - May 1, 2009 05:18 AM (GMT)
xD But i don't like poems that use olden english :hide It always takes me so long to understand them... :cry
mikariangel - May 1, 2009 10:41 PM (GMT)
but they sound cool :music
snowwingz - May 2, 2009 08:43 AM (GMT)
lols :happy with all the thys and thees xD
mikariangel - May 2, 2009 03:56 PM (GMT)
i know, but is hard to pronounce for me :hide
snowwingz - May 3, 2009 09:04 AM (GMT)
xD yeah i get them wrong sometimes too :bwipe
mikariangel - May 6, 2009 10:09 PM (GMT)
