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 The Dark Forest of Despair, A fanfic about a guy and a mean Onix.
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Posted: Mar 22 2008, 10:35 PM


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This is going to be continued some time when I have more time and am not distracted by all my things I have to do and video games. I am probably going to write an entire novel, and eventually include Steelix and myself in it. Right now it's just about this guy at school I know. And is a novella.

WARNING*** MAY CONTAIN SWEAR WORDS! IF YOU DON'T LIKE SWEAR WORDS THEN DON'T READ THIS!!! YOU HAVE BEEN WORNED.

The Dark Forest of Despair
by SteelixShadow.

Copyright 2008 SteelixShadow, all rights reserved.

It was three days since George had last eaten any real food, all he had to eat was berries and tree bark and treemoss and his stomache hurt from all the bacteria. He was sick, and tired, and the forest around him was no easy place to be, but he knew in his heart that he had to keep going. He had come into the forest with only one hope, to make a new home for himself away from the people who were mean to him. They couldn’t see how talented he really was, just thought his hair and voice were stupid so they made fun of him. He knew that in the forest everything would be okay, but he hadn’t known that the forest he was going into was actually the dark forest of despair.

On the fourth day into the forest, George took out his map and looked around. He was near a large rock and many different trees, and he thought he knew where he was but wasn’t sure. It had rained during the night so his hair was wet. His clothes clung to his strong muscles and made him look good, but no one was around to see him so he didn’t mind. He saw one of the rocks was definitely on the map, so he knew where he was, at least he thought. He decided he had better get walking again if he was going to reach the pond.

The pond was in the middle of the forest, and it was where he had decided to live. He was really good at fishing and building, so he knew he could build a house by the forest and then live off of fish the rest of his life. The pond had shown him where it was in a dream, but at least he thought he was in the right forest with the pond. He didn’t know if the forest was the right one, but he saw on the map he knew where a large rock was so he went on anyway, in hope.

There was a cave ahead of him, large and dark, and big like a mouth of a demon or a monster. George was scared of the cave but he saw on the map that the cave went through to the lake, so he was safe. He had with him a katana and a wakizashi that he had made himself. They had black runes on the edges that meant DESTRUCTION and HONOR, respectively. Sometimes when he was making them it looked like the runes were glowing red, but George thought it was just the blaze of the furnace reflecting off of the runes, so he never knew that it really did glow red sometimes when he got really strong and mad.

He walked through the cave, brandishing his katana out in front of him, carefully. He couldn’t see very well because his flashlight had gone out on the third day into the forest, but he walked by sense of hearing and smell, and he knew it was just a straight walk towards the pond. He thought he saw something moving in the shadows, but it wasn’t anything he worried about. What little he knew...

Suddenly an Onix came out of the shadows! George swung at it with his katana but it broke on Onix’s side! “Ha ha!” said Onix! “I broke your sword and now I am going to fucking kill you!” George broke out in a sweat as he ducked away from the Onix. It swung its tail at him but he jumped ouut of the way just in time, but it kicked rocks at him and he broke his arm! “Oh no!” thought George, wincing against the pain, “This is really bad!” Suddenly George looked at this broken katana, and noticed that the runes on its edge were glowing red! George’s eyes reflected the red glow and it looked like fire was in his eyes. “I am going to beat you, Onix!” George screamed, and he unsceathed his wakizashi and jumped at Onix. He struck at Onix and cut off one of his eyes. “AAGGGGH!” Onix screamed, “But I can still see you with my other eye! Now I will wrap you!” Onix used wrap, grabbing George around the body and wrapping him up in his rocky hard body. George pushed against the rocks but it was too hard. The squeezing felt so painful that he almost passed out, but he kept string and fought even harder. He pushed away the rocks and jumped away, then threw the wakizashi at Onix and killed him in the throat. “MY THROAT!!!” Onix screamed, then fell over. George knew that he had killed a beautiful creature, but it was something he had to do. He slowly walked away from the fallen Onix, sad that what he had had to do.

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"When the winds swept by us in the night, I knew that Steelix and I had felt something together, and the the end of my life as a lonely teen were ended."

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Wow you are a really good writer! Have you thought about writing a book? laugh.gif
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Part 2.

At the end of the cave, George expected to see the pond, but it wasn’t there! He was nervous and scared, and looked around to make sure there wasn’t a pond somewhere nearby, but there wasn’t. He checked his map and there was definitely a pond on the map, but not where he was. Now he was really scared, and didn’t know what to do. He thought that the pond would be right there, but it wasn’t! He didn’t usually cry around people, but there was no one around so he did. It was okay because he was really sad! The pond wa his life, his future life anyway! Where was it?!

“Hey!” came a voice from the shadows of the nearby trees! “Why are you crying?” George looked around, but couldn’t see anyone, just a shining coming from the trees, but he didn’t think anything of it. He started crying again. “Stop crying!” the voice said again, this time definitely from where he had seen the shining. George stood up and went over there. “Who... who’s there?” he asked aloud, cautiously. Suddenly, a Steelix came up out of the trees! How had it been hiding there, George though... and there was a guy riding on it! The guy had on a black shirt that was loose and big, and khaki pants. He had a shotgun in his belt that had a handle made out of obsidian!

“Oh no!” George at once thought, but then he saw that Steelix and the guy were smiling at him, so he wasn’t afraid. “Who are you?” George asked. “I’m SteelixShadow, and this is Steelix, my best friend! We heard that there was an Onix fight around here!” George started to cry again. “I didn’t mean to kill him!” George screamed! “He was going to kill me if I didn’t, I thought!” SteelixShadow and Steelix bowed their heads in sorrow. They knew that they should never kill pokemon, because it was just as bad as killing a person. “George,” SteelixShadow said, “you shouldn’t have done that. You can always run away from pokemon. There’s never a reason to kill.” George cried and hit his hands against the dirt. “Damnit! Damnit! I’m sorry, ONIX! I’m sorry I killed you!” Steelix looked at SteelixShadow with a look of knowing and understanding, like they were talking without using their mouths. SteelixShadow nodded and looked back at George. “George, I know you are sorry, but you must make amends to the Onix. Go bury it, then we can talk some more.”

George went and buried the Onix in the ground of the cave. He buried his swords along with him, because he felt that the Onix deserved it. George cried a long time over Onix’s grave, then went back outside. SteelixShadow and Steelix were lying together on the soft earth, their bodies nestled closely. George looked at SteelixShadow and felt a weird feeling, like they could be really good friends. SteelixShadow opened his eyes and looked at George, and George looked away, embarassed. “Did you bury Onix?” SteelixShadow asked. “Yes, he is at peace now.” “Good, then we can begin.” “Begin?” George asked, questioningly. “What do you mean?” Steelix woke up and looked into SteelixShadow’s eyes, then looked at George. Suddenly, George heard a voice in his head that sounded like Steelix! How could Steelix be talking to him without using his mouth?!

“George,” Steelix said “I am psychically communicating with you. It is an ability I have had ever since I met SteelixShadow.” “How did they meet?” George thought. “We met a long time ago, in another plane of existence. I will tell you more later, if you like.” “You can... hear my thoughts too?!” George thought. “Yes,” SteelixShadow thought. “We can communicate telepathically with each other now. It is easier then talking out loud, I think.” “Yes, it is. Okay, we’ll talk telepathically from now on,” George thought. “So what did you mean about ‘begin’?”

Steelix rose up from where he was lying and went over to George. “George, you are in the wrong place. This is not the forest you thought it was, but is actually the dark forest of despair. There are many evil pokemon here that might want to hurt you or even kill you.” “OH NO!” George thought loudly, then started to cry again. “STOP CRYING!” Steelix shouted in his mind. “If you cry now, we won’t be able to help you! You are in danger!” “Okay,” George thought. “I’m sorry. Let’s get to work.”

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"When the winds swept by us in the night, I knew that Steelix and I had felt something together, and the the end of my life as a lonely teen were ended."

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Posted: Mar 22 2008, 11:39 PM


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QUOTE (Shane @ Mar 22 2008, 11:25 PM)
Wow you are a really good writer! Have you thought about writing a book? laugh.gif
I would buy it! biggrin.gif

Wow thanks! Yes I'm planning on writing a novel but I have a lot of other stuff to do most of the time so I haven't done much yet. Right now this is just a novella, which is like a short story.


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"When the winds swept by us in the night, I knew that Steelix and I had felt something together, and the the end of my life as a lonely teen were ended."

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Okay, I ate some fishsticks and now I’m back in the game!

Part 3.

“We need to get above the forest so we can draw a map of it,” thought Steelix. “I can fly, but I can only carry one of you humans on my back. So, who is better at drawing. I know SteelixShadow is really good. Are you good at drawing, George?” George sighed mentally. “No... I’m not good at anything.” George was about to cry again, but he didn’t because Steelix was looking at him. “George, that’s not true,” thought Steelix. “You are good at fighting, and good at survival. Not many people could have survived so long in the dark forest of despair as you did.” George looked up, tears drying in his eyes, and smiled. “You’re right, Steelix,” George thought, “Even though it was wrong to kill Onix, I survived that dangerous encounter. Maybe I will grow up to be a warrior!” Steelix smiled at George. “Yes, maybe. You can be anything you wish to be, as long as you try your best.”

Steelix and George hugged, then Steelix took SteelixShadow up into the sky to draw a map of the dark forest of despair. George looked around the clearing for any sticks or rocks that could be turned into weapons. He found a big stick that was made out of wood, and it looked sharp enough to be a spear, so he took that and slipped it into a belt loop like a holster. By the time he had done this, Steelix and SteelixShadow had returned. “I drew a map,” SteelixShadow thought, showing a piece of paper to George. The map was amazingly well drawn. It looked a lot like the maps at the beginning of the lord of the rings, medieval and beautiful. But the words were spelled in modern english instead of olde english. “What is this?” George asked in his mind, pointing at a place on the map. “That’s the pit of death,” said SteelixShadow, “At least, that’s what Steelix and I decided to call it. It looks like a big purple vortex. Who knows what could be lurking there. I think we should stay away.” “Good idea,” George thought. “What is this here?” Steelix and SteelixShadow looked at where George was pointing, then frowned and hung their heads. “What is it? Is something wrong?!” asked George in his mind. “That’s the burial ground for Pokemon,” Steelix said, sadly, in his head. “We saw many bones there that looked like Pokemon remains, which are dead corpses or skeletons of Pokemon. That must be a very sad place.” George looked at Steelix and SteelixShadow’s faces and sighed. They didn’t say it, but everyone knew they were thinking about how there was one pokemon who would never get to be buried among the rest of his brothers and sisters... Onix.

“Well...” SteelixShadow thought, trying to lighten the mood, “Where should we go to? We have to get out. On the map, there’s a trail marked with arrows. I think that it is the way out. I think we should follow it.” “Agreed!” Steelix and George thought in unison, then laughed! They set off together, SteelixShadow riding on Steelix, and George walking along side.

After a few hours of walking, George remembered how hungry he was. “Hey, SteelixShadow and Steelix... um... do you guys have any food?” “Yes,” they thought. “Do you want some of it? We will share.” They decided to stop for lunch. The food consisted of a few sandwiches, some soda for George, and a beer for SteelixShadow. George asked if SteelixShadow should really be drinking the beer, but SteelixShadow just glared at him and George knew it was probably best to drop it. Steelix ate a few poffins and was happy. They finished up and were getting ready to continue walking, but just then a Scyther jumped out of the forest at them! Someone somewhere yelled, “Use Slash on SteelixShadow!” and then Scyther leapt into the air! George looked around for the source of the voice, but there was no one around! Suddenly George felt himself being lifted up into the air! It was like he was flying... and he was! Steelix was lifting him up into the air! “What’s going on?!” George screamed, forgetting to use telepathy. “I am taking you up away from the battle, George,” Steelix thought. “This is between SteelixShadow and Manette.” “Who’s Manette?” George asked, this time remembering to just think the words. “An old girlfriend and now rival of SteelixShadow. They will fight forever. It is best to stay out of it.” George looked down into the trees, but could only see a few blinding flashes of green and black, then the green flashes stopped and there were red and black flashes. George wondered what was going on. He knew it couldn't be anything good.

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"When the winds swept by us in the night, I knew that Steelix and I had felt something together, and the the end of my life as a lonely teen were ended."

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Can't wait for the next part hehe, its so detailed wink.gif
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this is really awesome i wish i could write stuff like this
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You guys are really nice. I had to eat dinner but I'm probably gonna right the next few chapters in a few hours, so check back then! (if you want)


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This is very impressive. You've got a lot of potential to be a good fanfic writer.


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You guys inspire me to write some more about this so here we go!

Part 4.

Subtitle: Manette and SteelixShadow.

WARNING***** This section contains some innuendo (dialogue that has one meaning and another meaning that is adult) so if you don’t want to here that, don’t read okay? I don’t want to offend anyone. It also contains swear words.

Just as Steelix was lifting George up into the air away from the fight, SteelixShadow drew his shotgun and aimed it at the scyther. The scyther saw the shotgun but didn’t know what it was, because it had never seen a gun before, so he thought it was a blunt sword. “Ha!” thought the scyther, who was also telepathic, “My blades are much sharper and longer than yours!” SteelixShadow saw that scyther thought the shotgun was a blade, and he knew that this gave him the advantage in the fight since he knew more about his enemy then his enemy knew about him, but he didn’t think this out loud in case scyther would psychically hear it. He just felt it, like a true warrior.

SteelixShadow pointed the shotgun at scyther and almost pulled the trigger, but stopped. He had been thinking rashly, not really realizing what he was doing. Again he felt the words inside himself instead of thinking aloud, “I can’t kill the scyther. He is a pokemon, and no pokemon deserves to die, even evil ones.” He lowered the shotgun. Scyther laughed, then swung at SteelixShadow’s neck! SteelixShadow jumped out of the way and rolled along the ground, narrowly avoiding hitting his head on a rock. “That was close,” he thought. “Not close enough!” screamed the scyther, who then slashed at him again. SteelixShadow used his shotgun like a shield, blocking the scyther’s blade with the obsidian handle, and pushing it away. Scyther was pushed back and disoriented, so SteelixShadow saw his chance and took it. He picked up the rock that he had almost hit his head on and threw it at scyther’s face. The rock almost hit scyther, but just then a shuriken flew out from the trees and knocked the rock away! The shuriken smashed the rock against another tree, crumbling it to pieces, before it stuck its sharp point into the tree. “Where did that shuriken come from?!” thought SteelixShadow.

Suddenly, as if answering SteelixShadow’s question, a beautiful girl stepped out of the trees and looked at him. She had long black hair that had a red streak in it, and her face was small but pretty and her eyes were red. She wore a suit that looked like a skin tight suit, except it was made of shiny black leather that looked japanese. Japanese writing was down one side of it in red. It clung to her body so you could see her femininity. Her face had no make up on it but there was a tattoo of a dragon on her neck, where it would hurt the most when she got the tattoo. She touched the tattoo and winced, as if it reminded her of something from long ago.

“Manette!” SteelixShadow shouted in his head, gritting his teeth and glaring at her. “Why are you here?!” “Here to catch the secret pokemon, of course!” Manette said in a sexy voice. “I didn’t know you would be here, though. We seem to ‘move together’ a lot, don’t we?” she said in her mind with a smile on her face. SteelixShadow looked down at the ground, ashamed of what Manette was implying. They had been together many years ago, in a different time, but now they fought.

“If you want to catch the secret pokemon,” SteelixShadow thought, “you’ll have to go through me! I’m not here to catch it! I just want to save it from the dark forest of despair!” “Sure!” Manette laughed mentally. “That’s the kind of lame actions I’d expect from someone like you!” “You take that back!” SteelixShadow screamed, then lunged at her. “Come here, big boy!” Manette thought, then counter attacked.

Manette had two hundred shurikens that she kept in a special compartment, and she was deadly with them. It was all she fought with, even in close up combat. SteelixShadow knew this, and he was really good at blocking the shurikens with his shotgun’s obsidian handle. They fought in this way for some time, light reflecting off of their weapons when they clashed. Manette seemed to make red flashes while SteelixShadow made black flashes. Manette jumped really high, bouncing off of trees and throwing shurikens with deadly accuracy. SteelixShadow blocked most of the shurikens, but one slipped by his defenses and hit him in the leg. He fell to his knee, then snarling tore the shuriken out of his leg without caring about the pain. He threw it away, then jumped after Manette. “I will get you, Manette!” SteelixShadow exclaimed, then he spun the shotgun around on his finger as he flew through the air. Manette saw that this was a move she had never seen before. “What attack is this?!” Manette thought. “It’s my spinning shot! And you won’t dodge it, so get ready!” SteelixShadow yelled at her in his head, then he pulled the trigger. Since the shotgun was spinning, the bullets went in a circle straight at Manette. They all hit her in the leg, and she fell to the ground, screaming. “Aaaah! Damnit! You beat me again, SteelixShadow!” SteelixShadow hadn’t wanted to hurt her, so he just shot her in the leg. He knew that he had had to, to stop her from killing him with her shurikens. “I didn’t want to have to do that, Manette, but you left me no choice. I’m sorry, but you should be good instead of evil.” “NEVER!” Manette screamed, as it looked like the red flashes she had made were now shining in her eyes. “Scyther! Use fly!” Scyther ran over to Manette and picked her up, then flew away. In the passion of it all, they had forgotten to use telepathy. “I will catch the secret pokemon, SteelixShadow. You better believe me!” Manette screamed, then they flew away. SteelixShadow looked after her as she left, feeling a pain in his leg from the shuriken, but also a pain in his heart, from when he used to love her. “Goodbye, Manette...” he thought. But he knew he would see her again some time soon.

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"When the winds swept by us in the night, I knew that Steelix and I had felt something together, and the the end of my life as a lonely teen were ended."

-SteelixShadow

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I’ve got my cup noodles and a seven up... LET’S GET BACK INTO IT!

Edit --- ****I’m sorry guys, the next update might be a while. Writing this chapter made me almost lose it, emotionally. I am crying as I type this. But don’t let that stop you from enjoying this. I’ll be fine, and I’ll write the next chapter soon*****

Part 5.

As Steelix and George floated up above the trees, scyther and Manette shot past them into the distance. George looked at Manette and thought she was really pretty, but Manette looked at him and gave him a mean look, and he looked away shyly. Steelix and Scyther both locked eyes, and held each others glare until scyther was too far away to be seen. Steelix looked determined. They floated back down into the forest, where SteelixShadow was. George jumped off of Steelix’s back and went over to SteelixShadow. “Are you okay?” George thought. “Yes, I’m fine. I just got wounded in the leg a little bit.” George looked at the wound where Manette’s shuriken had hit SteelixShadow. It was bleeding and looked pretty bad. “Maybe you should get some medicine, or put a bandage on th...” “IT’S FINE!” SteelixShadow interrupted, shouting in his thoughts. George gasped and was taken aback. SteelixShadow looked at the ground and had a dark look in his eyes. George looked at Steelix, but Steelix just nodded. “SteelixShadow has seen a lot worse, George. He’ll be alright, so don’t worry.” But George couldn’t help but worry, because he felt that SteelixShadow and himself had grown really close, and he really liked him. He thought again, hesitantly, “SteelixShadow... what happened down here?”

SteelixShadow was quiet for a long time, then he looked at George. “We fought. We always fight, now.” He looked away into the sky, off where Manette and Scyther had flown away to. “We were locked in a duel, but I surprised her and won. We both suffered leg injuries, though. We’re very evenly matched.” George pictured Manette in his mind, and remembered her beauty. He knew that her beauty must also be deadly, if she was a match for SteelixShadow. Then he remembered what Steelix had told him about Manette. “Steelix told me that you two used to go out,” George thought. SteelixShadow nodded. “Yes, in a way. We met long ago, in another world far from this one. There was a place called the internet... at least I think it was a place. It’s hard to remember now. We met there, I remember that much. We became friends quickly, then grew into something more.” George listened intently. “We did things together,” SteelixShadow continued, “and went to things called movies and played things called videogames. One day she showed me the gateway between universes, and we started traveling to different worlds.” “Wow! How many different worlds are there?!” George asked excitedly. “Many,” Steelix cut in. “There are many different universes, and in each one are many different worlds. They all share similarities, and they all can influence each other. This world we live in is called the Pokemon World, though there are many other worlds that have pokemon living in them. It’s interesting, because in some worlds, Pokemon are just thought to be a fantasy story, or a game... and in some, Pokemon don’t even exist!” George was amazed. “You mean there are places that don’t have Pokemon?!” Steelix laughed. “Sorry for laughing,” he thought, “but yes, there are.” George couldn’t believe it. He looked at SteelixShadow, who was brooding. “What was the world you came from like?” George asked. “Did it have pokemon?” Suddenly, Steelix fell silent and looked at the ground. George felt like he had said something wrong, but SteelixShadow just slowly nodded, then looked into George’s eyes.

“The world I come from... it was a horrible place. There were pokemon, but no one believed in them. People thought they were just make believe. I... I was ridiculed for believing in them. The world I’m from, people judged each other by their beliefs, or by the color of their skin, or by the way they liked to make love.” George sniffed back tears, for he too had been judged unfairly. SteelixShadow continued. “Wars were fought between people over money and lies. People killed other people just for fun, or to take things from them. Kids had to go to a place they hated called school and were beat up every day. It was the law. Adults had to work hard jobs all the time just to buy food. It was horrible. I... I usually don’t like to talk about it.” George wiped tears from his face and thought, “I’m sorry, SteelixShadow. I won’t bring it up again.”

There was a pause, where they all heard the wind blowing through the trees. SteelixShadow walked over to Steelix and hugged him. “It’s okay, George. I got over it long ago. When I met Steelix, everything was okay.” “You met him when Manette took you to the Pokemon World?” George asked in his head. “No,” SteelixShadow thought. “He was waiting for me here.” George didn’t understand, and asked SteelixShadow to explain. “When I lived in the bad world, I had dreams about Steelix. I knew he was real, but the people I told thought I was crazy. It hurt, badly, but I kept going, because I knew he was real. When I met Manette, and we went into the gateway between universes, I chose to go to the Pokemon World because I knew Steelix would be there, and he was. I found him quickly. It was like we both knew where the other one was. I still had to walk quite a ways to get to where he lived, and when I did it was already night time. I saw him coming up over a hill as I was entering a meadow. Our eyes met and we ran to each other. We hugged and grew together as one. We could each feel our minds intertwining, strengthening the psychic bond we both knew we each had. It was a long time before we let go, and started walking back to his home, the cool wind chilling us but our closeness keeping us warm. When the winds swept by us in the night, I knew that Steelix and I had felt something together, and the the end of my life as a lonely teen were ended.” SteelixShadow stopped thinking, then he hugged Steelix again and Steelix hugged him back with his tail. George looked at the two with tears in his eyes. They were truly best friends, and it was beautiful.

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I was thinking of putting something about World of Warcraft in here, because of what happened yesterday, but that would be mean and I think I’ll just let them forget it ever happened, to be nice.

Anyway... HERE COMES PART 6. I feel much happier today!

Part 6.

George wiped the tears from his eyes, and SteelixShadow and Steelix got serious again. They hadn’t yet told George about the secret pokemon.

“George, the reason Manette is here,” SteelixShadow began, “is to capture the secret pokemon.” “Secret pokemon?” George thought questioningly, “What’s that?” “It’s a secret, of course. No one knows what kind of pokemon it is, but rumor has it that it is very powerful. Manette wants to capture it, but Steelix and I have decided to free it. When you fought that Onix we heard and came to investigate, which is how we met you.” George nodded, remembering. Steelix thought, “George, we know you wanted to escape the hardships of life by coming into the forest, and circumstance and coincidence have put you on an even harder path. You did not choose this and we are sorry for putting you in this situation. If you want us to take you to the lake, we know where it is. It’s in another forest nearby, and we can go there now and help you build your home there, then we can go save the secret pokemon. Or you can come with us. It’s up to you.” George looked at his feet, kicking the dirt. What did he really want out of life? He had come here to get away, and to live alone away from all the evil and bad things in life. But now he had a chance to do something good! If he helped SteelixShadow and Steelix save the secret pokemon, then maybe, just maybe, a little bit of that goodness would rub off on the world. How could he refuse that chance? “I’ll do it,” he thought. “I’ll go with you. It will be hard, I know, and I might get hurt or even die, but I don’t care. If I can save the secret pokemon, I want to try. I want to go with you.” “GREAT!” SteelixShadow and Steelix thought in unison. “Then let’s go!”

“Do you guys know where the secret pokemon is?” George asked? SteelixShadow and Steelix looked at each other. “I thought you knew!” Steelix thought. “I thought YOU knew!” SteelixShadow mentally replied. They both rolled their eyes and sank to the ground, defeated. “Oh no!” thought SteelixShadow, “What do we do now!” George walked over to them and shook his arms in the air. “Guys! Guys! I know! Manette went off in that direction!” He pointed after Manette. “Do you think SHE knows where the secret pokemon is?” SteelixShadow scratched his chin and nodded, slowly. “Hmm... she is a very good information gatherer. I wouldn’t be surprised if she knew where the secret pokemon was. Do you think we should follow her trail?” “Yes!” George thought. “Let’s chase her!” They all agreed to follow George’s plan.

They walked in the way they had before, George alongside Steelix as SteelixShadow rode him. George was no longer hungry so he took some time to enjoy the scenery. Even though it was called the dark forest of despair, it was neither dark nor very despairing. George enjoyed watching the sunlight beams shine between the trees, and watching the little specks of pollen float around the air. He spied some butterfrees off in the distance. They were dancing in the air, playing, carefree. This made George smile. Suddenly he spotted some rocks far away in the shadow of a large tree. They were moving along the ground! George thought it must be some geodudes or some gravellers, but then he saw something that made his heart skip a beat. His wakizashi! It was sticking out of one of the rocks!

“OH MY GOODNESS!” George exclaimed, forgetting to use telepathy. “It’s that Onix I killed! He’s over there, alive!” George turned around to show SteelixShadow and Steelix, but they weren’t there! He was alone in the woods! “SteelixShadow?! Steelix?! Where are you guys?!” George was scared and very confused. Not only had his friends disappeared, but the Onix he had killed was alive and well. George thought hard about what to do. “SteelixShadow and Steelix might be in trouble, but I know they can handle themselves. Also, we’re linked telepathically, so it won’t be hard to communicate and find each other. Onix is hurt. He probably can’t get that wakizashi out of his throat. If I don’t help him, no one will! Maybe Manette will find him and kill him again, and then she’d have my sword! Also, I’d like to apologize to Onix for murdering him. This is the best choice. I must go after Onix. Once that’s done, I can find SteelixShadow and Steelix.”

George ran off into the woods after Onix. He had no idea how much danger he was really in.

To be continued...


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"When the winds swept by us in the night, I knew that Steelix and I had felt something together, and the the end of my life as a lonely teen were ended."

-SteelixShadow

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Part 7.

Subtitle: SteelixShadow and Steelix get seperated.

SteelixShadow and Steelix went along their way, very focused on their goal to find the secret pokemon before Manette. “Do you see those leaves that are a little out of place, and those that have been cut in half?” SteelixShadow asked Steelix. “Yes, they look as if a scyther flew through there.” Steelix replied. They knew they were on the right path.

“How are you doing, George?” SteelixShadow asked. “If you get tired, I can walk and you can ride on Steelix for awhile.” George was still beside them, but he looked different, in an odd way. There was a faint purple sheen to his skin. SteelixShadow figured that maybe he felt sick. “You look sick, George”, he thought. “Why don’t you ride on Steelix for awhile to rest?” George didn’t say anything. “Doesn’t he hear me?” SteelixShadow asked Steelix. “I don’t know,” Steelix replied. “George? George?” The oddly purple George just walked along beside them, not saying a word. “Maybe the sickness has blocked his telepathy?” SteelixShadow thought, then he said out loud, “George, is anything wrong?” George looked up at him with a completely blank stare, but then he quickly smiled very wide and responded, “No, I’m fine! Why do you ask?” SteelixShadow and Steelix were a little worried about George. He was acting oddly. “George,” Steelix said aloud, “ride on my back for awhile and take a nap. You look tired.” “Okay!” George said, and he leapt up onto Steelix’s back as SteelixShadow jumped off onto the ground with a soft thud.

They passed time in that way for some time. SteelixShadow started to notice how much pollen there was in the air, and it made him feel like sneezing. “I’m about to sneeze,” he tought, “so excuse me.” No one answered. He sneezed, but then he sneezed again and again! He couldn’t stop sneezing. His eyes started to water and he had to close them because they were burning! “Oh jeez, I’m having an allergy attack. I have to stop a second.” Again, no one said anything. SteelixShadow was a little insulted, so he looked at where Steelix and George had been, but they weren’t there! “What?!” SteelixShadow shouted! “Where’d you guys go?! What happened?!” There was no one around him at all. He was very worried. “They couldn’t have gone far,” he thought. “I’ll just keep going, using telepathy, and I’m sure they’ll hear me.” That thought made him feel a little better, but he couldn’t forget the way George had looked right before he had started having the allergy attack. George has been purple, and grinning really wide.

****WARNING: This next section contains some erotic parts that might not be appropriate for children. Please don’t read these parts if you are a child, or if things like this bothers you.****

Suddenly, a rustle in the trees nearby made SteelixShadow turn around. There was Manette, coming out behind him! She was wearing lingerie, and she looked very beautiful. SteelixShadow couldn’t help staring, even though he wondered why Manette was there. “Wow! I mean... what are you doing here, Manette?!” “SteelixShadow,” Manette said in a low, sexy voice, “I decided not to catch the secret pokemon after all.” She walked up to him swaying her hips and showing him her breasts in an alluring way. SteelixShadow started to feel hot and uncomfortable. “You... you have?” SteelixShadow asked, quivering. “That’s great!” Manette chuckled as she stepped up right next to SteelixShadow. He could feel her breath on his neck. “Yes, there’s only one thing I want to catch now.” “What’s that?” SteelixShadow asked. Manette winked. “Your heart.”

SteelixShadow gasped and tried to push her away, but Manette was already leaning in to kiss him. He pushed at her, but his hands fell on her breasts and he squeezed them accidentally, and then he couldn’t contain himself. It had been so long since he had been close with Manette. He wanted her, bad. They fell to the ground and made love right there and then. It was amazing, the best SteelixShadow had ever had, and he had had a lot of girls before. Manette finished up and cooed sweetly in his ear. “That was great, honey,” she said, and SteelixShadow agreed. Neither of them smoked, but SteelixShadow had a beer so they shared it. They lied together on the ground, naked and cuddling. It was perfect, and SteelixShadow never wanted to leave. Little did he know, that soon he would never be able to...

To be continued...

****If you didn’t read the erotic parts, here’s what happened that’s important. Manette came back and SteelixShadow did something with her and they are in love again, but for some reason it is dangerous for SteelixShadow to be there with Manette.****


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"When the winds swept by us in the night, I knew that Steelix and I had felt something together, and the the end of my life as a lonely teen were ended."

-SteelixShadow

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