Title: Super Smash Bros. Brawl fanfic
Description: THE SUBSPACE EMISSARY 2
Evan1109 - March 22, 2008 11:20 PM (GMT)
I know that it's not about Pokemon but there's Pokemon in it!!
Chapter 1
Mario Gets Killed
It has been a whole year since the Nintendo heroes beat Tabuu and now they were celebrating with a fight in a new stadium. Mario and Pikachu were going to fight! They waved at the crowd. They had a battle.
Mario threw fireballs at Pikachu and Pikachu dodged them and used Thunderbolt. But Mario dodged the thunderbolt and ran into Pikachu and punched him. Pikachu was hurt and retalliated by using Skull Bash and Mario got hit by it. Then a Smash Ball appeared and Mario got it. He used it on Pikachu and Mario won.
Then Mewtwo came down from the sky with primids after Mario brought Pikachu back to life!
"Mama mia I thought we beat all the Subspace guys!" Mario yelled.
"Pika pika pi!"
Translation: Oh no, we have to fight them Mario!
Mario and Pikachu fought all the bad guys. While Mario was distracted Mewtwo used his Dark Cannon he had to turn Mario into a trophy!
The whole crowd in the stadium screamed. Could Mario, the greatest hero ever, really get defeated?!
Then Mewtwo set off a subspace bomb and the stadium exploded but thanks to Pikachu everyone was okay because he saved them. Luigi was in the stadium watching the fight and he was sad and angry that Mewtwo captured Mario. Luigi went chasing after Mewtwo all by himself but Pikachu was too worried about Luigi to be by himself when he's so sad so Pikachu went to chase after Luigi so he could calm him down.
Evan1109 - March 22, 2008 11:31 PM (GMT)
Btw I forgot to say, please leave me comments!
CHAPTER 2
Pikachu Pursues Luigi
Pikachu went into the big field after Luigi but then Primids came to hurt him. Captain Olimar was there too and Pikachu and Captain Olimar teamed up. Captain Olimar threw all his Pikmin at the primids to fight, but then he picked up Pikachu and threw him instead because he accidentally thought he was a Pikmin! Pikachu shocked Captain Olimar for revenge. Captain Olimar said he was sorry though.
Then Captain Olimar and Pikachu went after Luigi and saw Luigi was fighting Bowser. Then Luigi got hit really hard by Bowser and Luigi got hurt on the head and he was really dizzy and he went off into the forest, seeming dazed and different. (Remember this part because it's important to know he got hurt on the head!)
Then Pikachu and Captain Olimar fought Bowser. Bowser laughed evilly and brought out his own Dark Gun and tried to hit Captain Olimar but his Pikmin sacrificed themselves to save Olimar and they became trophies. Olimar was mad and angry and screamed "I'LL GET YOU BACK EVIL BOSS!"
Olimar went to fight Bowser with new Pikmin and with Pikachu's help. Bowser used fire breath and attacked captain Olimar and then Captain Olimar threw Pikmin at him and they hurt Bowser. Then when all the Pikmin were back to Olimar Pikachu hurt Bowser with a Thunderbolt. He used Thunderbolt again and Bowser died into a trophy.
Bowser got brought back by Mr. L though, who came in from the forest Luigi went into. Pikachu and Olimar were confused by who this Mr. L guy could possibly be! Mr. L was really Luigi because he got hit on the head too hard, but they didn't know that. Mr. L flew off in his Brobot with Mario's trophy that Bowser had, and took it to these big airships in the sky, while Bowser headed towards Peach's Castle in the Koopa Klown Car.
Pikachu and Captain Olimar chased after Bowser.
MiDNiGHT_PiKa - March 22, 2008 11:39 PM (GMT)
Evan1109 please write more this is good story!
blastoise - March 22, 2008 11:42 PM (GMT)
xXxLegendTRNRxXx - March 22, 2008 11:44 PM (GMT)
TOTALLY AWRSOME!!! GO OLIMAR!
Evan1109 - March 22, 2008 11:49 PM (GMT)
OMG!! I'm so glad people like it! Okay here's chapter 3 and just like the actual game it goes to another story so I hope you don't get confused!
Chapter 3
The Ice Climbers Meet Jigglypuff and Go To Find Articuno
One day the Ice Climbers were sitting at their house in the mountain! Then the Articuno who lived on the mountain came and stole all their vegetables!
"Man, why do birds like to steal our vegetables so much Nana!" Popo said.
"I don't know but this bird looks tougher than an average condor!" Nana said too. So they went out to climb the mountain and pursue the Articuno, fighting the evil polar bears and topis on the way.
Meanwhile Jigglypuff was climbing the mountain. Jigglypuff wanted to yodel on the mountain because she loved to sing. On her way up she saw the Ice Climbers and asked if she could sing for them. The Ice Climbers are nice so they said okay. But of course Jigglypuff's song put them to sleep so Jigglypuff was really angry! Jigglypuff drew on their faces. The Ice Climbers woke up and were annoyed there was stuff on their faces. Jigglypuff tried to beat the Ice Climbers up for sleeping but they had to fight back to defend themselves. Then a Sableye who lived on the mountain attacked them and they decided to team up to get to the top of the mountain together.
On their way they had to fight a bunch of Pokemon who were normally peaceful to the Ice Climbers but now were angry and mad. Jigglypuff was sad because she was a Pokemon and didn't like beating up other Pokemon and the Ice Climbers were sad because they were friends with the Pokemon on this mountain.
So Ice Climbers and Jigglypuff beat all the Pokemon and got to the top of the mountain and Articuno attacked them! Articuno shot Ice Beam at them but they dodged. Jigglypuff used Pound to attack Articuno and it hurt him. Ice Climbers did Squall Hammer into Articuno (I always do this when I fight bosses as them! It's a good technique) and then Ice Climbers used Ice Shot. Then Jigglypuff and the Ice Climbers all did a triple attack to finish off Articuno.
They were sad they had to fight Articuno but they got their vegetables back...but then Wario stole the vegetables! It turned out Wario was using a mind control device to control all the Pokemon on the mountain!
"That's so evil!" Nana said.
"Jiggly!" Jigglypuff said.
Translation: Those poor Pokemon!
Then Watio took the vegetables and drove down the mountain on his motorcycle.
"He's too fast for us to keep up!" said Popo.
Then Articuno got up. Articuno was free from the mind control and wanted revenge so he gave Jigglypuff and the Ice Climbers a ride and they chased after Wario.
Evan1109 - March 22, 2008 11:51 PM (GMT)
Ice Climbers are my fave chars btw I hope they're badass enough XD
Pikaman - March 22, 2008 11:58 PM (GMT)
oh man you could toally be a real writer
Evan1109 - March 23, 2008 12:03 AM (GMT)
I'm taking a break right now but I'm going to do a spoiler for the story and tell you who the first NEWCOMER will be in this story!!

Yeah she and Lucas team up in the next chapter!!\
DON'T LOOK AT THIS POST IF YOU DON'T WANT TO BE SPOILED!
Buizelchu - March 23, 2008 12:04 AM (GMT)
this is pretty good compred to some of the $h1t that i see on 'certain websites'
edit: omg i loooove kunatora. even though i never played mother3 she looks so cool in the fanart and i loved earthbound
Dark_Hououh - March 23, 2008 12:13 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Evan1109 @ Mar 23 2008, 12:03 AM) |
I'm taking a break right now but I'm going to do a spoiler for the story and tell you who the first NEWCOMER will be in this story!!

Yeah she and Lucas team up in the next chapter!!\
DON'T LOOK AT THIS POST IF YOU DON'T WANT TO BE SPOILED! |
is she from the same game Lucas is from?
it says Lucas is from Mother 3, but he looks EXACTLY like Ness who is from Earthbound.
are they the same series like how Pokemon is called Pocket Momsters in Japan?
KirbyMan - March 23, 2008 12:15 AM (GMT)
When does Kirby join? He should join pretty early being a flag ship character
Evan1109 - March 23, 2008 12:17 AM (GMT)
Chapter 4
Lucas and Kumatora Get Attacked
Lucas and Kumatora were walking around togethe rand then suddenly a subspace bomb went off in front of them! They used their PSI powers to escape. Then Primids and Spaaks and Autolances came out to attack them! And there were all Mad Ducks like in Earthbound! And New Age Retro Hippies! (Omg so random xD)
and then Lucas was scared but Kumatora was cool and was all "yo try me I'll protect Lucas because he's my friend" and Lucas was sad because he felt bad his friend had to defend him so he helped Kumatora and they fought together.
They beat all the enemies and went through a level together as a team and fought the bad guys from Susbspace.
Then after a level they met Ness who was also fighting bad guys. Lucas remembered how Ness saved him from Wario and Pokey that one time so Lucas got Kumatora to come with him to help Ness.
Then Mr. L came in from the sky and started making fun of Lucas and Lucas was sad and scared of him. Kumatora and Ness were angry that he picked on their friend so they fought him. Kumatora and Ness used their PSI powers to easily beat Mr. L but Mr. L did jump on Ness's head once or twice. Ness felt like he saw Mr. L once before but couldn't quite recognize him.*
Ness and Kumatora beat him but Mr. L stopped fighting before he could be turned into a trophy and whipped out a Dark Cannon like Bowser had! He was going to fire it at Ness and Kumatora. Lucas was watching and he was sad that he always caused so much trouble for his friends so Lucas jumped in front of the arrow that Mr. L shot at his friends and Lucas sacrificed himself and became a trophy.
Ness and Kumatora looked up to the sky and saw Mr. L fly away with Lucas's trophy in his Brobot towards the big armada of airships and decided they had to find a way to get there and save Lucas because they were sad that their friend sacrificed himself because even though he acts cowardly and timid he loves his friends a lot because he's a nice loving boy.
Ness and Kumatora nodded at each other and ran off to go find a way to save Lucas.
*Note: Ness recognizes Mr. L because Ness and Luigi were both teamed up with King Dedede!
TO BE CONTINUED!!
Evan1109 - March 23, 2008 12:23 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (KirbyMan @ Mar 23 2008, 12:15 AM) |
| When does Kirby join? He should join pretty early being a flag ship character |
Kirby comes soon...I have a plan for him xD
Okay now I hope you guys liked that chapter. I hope you guys thought it was sad when Lucas got trophied because I was holding back tears writing it ;_; I think he has a secret crush on Kumatora maybe! But if you're Lucas x Ness I left it unclear who he was defending so you could go either way ;) But I am Lucas x Kumatora!!
Anyway I'm having a poll now. Which teamup should next chapter be about! VOTE!
1. Pikachu and Olimar
2. Ness and Kumatora
3. Ice Climbers and Jigglypuff
4. New teamup in the next chapter (If you have any ideas for teamups post them to me, I like taking suggestions! I'm like Sakurai xD)
Snubbella - March 23, 2008 12:47 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Evan1109 @ Mar 23 2008, 12:23 AM) |
| QUOTE (KirbyMan @ Mar 23 2008, 12:15 AM) | | When does Kirby join? He should join pretty early being a flag ship character |
Kirby comes soon...I have a plan for him xD
Okay now I hope you guys liked that chapter. I hope you guys thought it was sad when Lucas got trophied because I was holding back tears writing it ;_; I think he has a secret crush on Kumatora maybe! But if you're Lucas x Ness I left it unclear who he was defending so you could go either way ;) But I am Lucas x Kumatora!!
Anyway I'm having a poll now. Which teamup should next chapter be about! VOTE!
1. Pikachu and Olimar 2. Ness and Kumatora 3. Ice Climbers and Jigglypuff 4. New teamup in the next chapter (If you have any ideas for teamups post them to me, I like taking suggestions! I'm like Sakurai xD)
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How about kirby an mewtwo?
KirbyMan - March 23, 2008 12:49 AM (GMT)
I sure hope not. I want to eat something that makes me look cool like Captain Falcon
Evan1109 - March 23, 2008 12:50 AM (GMT)
^_^;;
No offense but why would they team up? Kirby is a good guy and not only is Mewtwo a bad guy he already killed Mario! Kirby would want to save Mario from Mewtwo because they are friends.
Mewtwo is with the bad guys...but he's not exactly all he seems >_> keep an eye on him, he's crafty :ph43r:
Evan1109 - March 23, 2008 01:19 AM (GMT)
SINCE NO ONE REPLIED I'M CHOOSING THE FIRST CHOICE. You guys are so unresponsive!
Chapter 4
Peach Doesn't Get Kidnapped?!
Olimar and Pikachu went to Peach's Castle and all the toads were scared because Bowser was there and Bowser was scary to them. However Bowser was only just charging up his cannon to attack Peach now. But Peach clogged the cannon up with a vegetable! Bowser was mad that his Dark Cannon wouldn't work.
Now Olimar and Pikachu went to help Peach fight Bowser. But Bowser didn't fight with them long since without a working cannon he couldn't get anyone to be trophies.
"At least I have Mario!" he said and he went to his Koopa Klown Car and set off a Subspace Bomb and flew off into the distance.
Peach, Pikachu and Olimar and the Toads all escaped but the bomb engulfed Peach's castle.
"What did he mean when he said he had Mario?" Peach asked.
"He turned Mario into a trophy and he's holding him up on those airships!" Olimar replied.
"Noooo! I have to save him!" Peach said.
"Pikachu, my Pikmin and I will all help you. Also, Luigi disappeared." Olimar said.
"Oh no! But he'll be okay because although he doesn't look like it Luigi can handle himself." Peach said.
The two left to go find a way to get up to the airships Bowser had...
So now, just as a status report in case you guys are lost!
Teams:
Peach, Olimar and Pikachu
Ice Climbers and Jigglypuff
Ness and Kumatora
Bad guys:
Wario, Bowser and Mewtwo
People who are trophies right now:
Mario and Lucas
WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT?!
Evan1109 - March 23, 2008 01:50 AM (GMT)
You guys aren't responding. I don't think you care anymore should I stop ;_; Tell me if I should stop because I don't wanna be annoying.
Chapter 6
Kirby and Meta Knight's Quest
Kirby was walking along Green Greens and then an Axe Knight came up to him. The Axe Knight said "Meta Knight wants you to meet him at the Fountain of Dreams." Kirby decided to get to the Fountain of Dreams, and had to fight Meta Knight's knights like Blade Knight, Sword Knight, Mace Knight, Javelin Knight and Axe Knight. But he won and got to the Fountain of Dreams.
"Welcome, Kirby," Meta Knight said. "It is good that you made it here. Now I must test your skills. TAKE IT!"
Meta Knight threw a beam sword at Kirby and Kirby caught it. Kirby duelled Meta Knight with his sword. Their swords both clanked a lot and then Kirby ate Meta Knight and got his tornado power. Then he used the tornado power on Meta Knight and then Meta Knight used the tornado power on Kirby too. Then they clanked their swords more and then even though it was a long battle Kirby beat Meta Knight. But he was tired and needed rest. Meta Knight was made a trophy and then Kirby brought him back.
"You are very skilled, Kirby, I am impressed," Meta Knight said.
Then the two saw the airships pass by overhead and saw Bowser flying up to them.
"Bowser is up to no good again!" said Kirby.
"Hmm..." Meta Knight said. He then blew a whistle and the Meta Knights assembled. All the axe, blade, javelin, mace and sword knights assembled.
"We need to stop Bowser's evil plan because he's obviously up to no good," said Meta Knight. "Kirby and I are going to stop him, and we need you all to help us out."
The knights all nodded in agreement and then Meta Knight lead Kirby and his knights to the loading dock where he kept the Halberd. Everyone got on, except Meta Knight, who was making sure preparations were complete. Then he was suddenly attacked by Dark Matter! Meta Knight had a duel with Dark Matter right in front of the Halberd. Kirby wanted to help but Meta Knight told Kirby to prepare to launch the ship for him as he had a plan.
Kirby launched the Halberd, and along with the Halberd, the floating platforms rose up from the sky as well like on the stage in the game. Meta Knight duelled with Dark Matter but Dark Matter shot lots of energy beams at Meta Knight. Then Meta Knight stabbed Dark Matter in the eye and he started bleeding and became 02. Meta Knight wasn't phased one bit, and then he avoided his wing attacks then then beat 02. Then the platforms docked onto the Halberd's deck and Kirby came running out to see if Meta Knight was okay. He was.
"Kirby," Meta Knight said, "we must save the world. I think the Subspace Army is back and someone new is leading it."
"How do you know?" Kirby asked.
"Just a hunch." Meta Knight said.
The Halberd flew onwards, pursuing Bowser's airship armada. Kirby then saw Samus's gunship fly by...and towards the airships. What was Samus doing here?!
KirbyMan - March 23, 2008 01:52 AM (GMT)
SteelixShadow - March 23, 2008 01:59 AM (GMT)
It's REALLY good. I always thought in the game that they should talk more, instead of just doing things with no real reason. The dialogue in this is really well written and it explains a lot of their motivations. I think it might even be better than the Subspace Emissary in the game! :o
SHOOTAN - March 23, 2008 02:08 AM (GMT)
KipOfTheMud - March 23, 2008 02:20 AM (GMT)
The story's nice, but your writing skills are a bit iffy.
Evan1109 - March 23, 2008 02:38 AM (GMT)
;_; I'm sorry, I'll try to improve my writing skills. This chapter's going to be really long so be warned.
Chapter 7
Big Teamup
Ness and Kumatora were walking along fighting the bad guys. Then they saw Peach, Olimar and Pikachu also fighting the bad guys. They realized they were all trying to get to the airships and teamed up. They kept fighting really hard enemies like Greaps. Then they saw some ROBs set off another Subspace Bomb. It was obviously all ROB's fault! The five went off to find him and make him take them to the airships since they couldn't fly.
They found ROB and beat him up but then when he was turned into a trophy for being so beat up they revived him because they wanted to beat him up more. But then they saw he was really sad.
"They captured all my ROB friends and mindwashed them to set off Subspace bombs. They just couldn't mindwash me because I'm the Ancient Minister." ROB said.
They felt sorry for ROB and then decided to help him out. They had to find someone who could take them up to the airships...Someone who had a plane.
Then they remembered Captain Falcon had the Falcon Flyer. So they had to go off to Captain Falcon's private island, "Punch Island", where he had a big F-Zero racetrack. Then they saw Wolf O'Donnell was heading there in his Wolfen!
"Not him!" Ness yelled.
"By the way," said Kumatora, "who brainwashed all the ROBs, ROB?"
"It was Ganondorf. He's trying to take control of Subspace so he can rule the world and promised his underlings they could rule along with him as nobles, and he'd be the king. He's controlling everything."
"NO! Not Ganondorf!" yelled Captain Olimar.
"But what would he do to control Subspace?" Kumatora asked.
"Master Hand and Crazy Hand rule over Subspace. They serve one who can prove themselves powerful. By collecting many trophies of fighters and getting lots of Subspace excised all of your own doing, they will view you as powerful and serve you." ROB explained.
"That's horrible!" Kumatora said. "And all the more reason we have to save Mario and Lucas!"
They saw a big boat pass by. On board was a smug looking crocodile captain, king, baron or krusha of some type. Then the six heard the sounds of a Dark Cannon going off, twice, and saw a giant purple dinosaur that looked a lot like the Pokemon Flareth fly off, holding the trophies of Donkey Kong and Diddy Kong!
The six jumped down onto the boat.
"Greetings. I am King K. Rool!" said the crocodile.
"Ugh, why did Ganondorf say I have to team up with you? I want to go fight Samus," said the giant dinosaur.
"You've done well anyway, Ridley. Finally, my arch nemesises are defeated! I will help you fight Samus if we see her too, of course." K. Rool said.
"Ugh, all right." Ridley said. "Let's get these six chumps here too."
NOTICE: Fire up King K. Rool's theme from Brawl if you have the MP3 because it'll make this battle scene seem MORE EPIC!
Peach was immediately snatched up by Ridley. Ridley shot fireballs at her but then Olimar threw Pikmin at Ridley and he was hurt. Then he ate the Pikmin.
"You'll pay for that!" Olimar said and he punched Ridley in the head. Then King K. Rool threw his crown at Olimar. But Ness caught it and threw it back at him.
"PK Fire!" Ness screamed as he used his attack on King K. Rool. He was knocked out, turned into a trophy.
"Hmm..." Ridley said. He summoned the shadow bugs from the inside of the Gangplank Galleon's deck and then they assumed the form of the Donkey Kong and Diddy Kong trophies. Then Ridley revived King K. Rool.
"Now you'll never stop us!" K. Rool yelled as he prepared to fight again. He shot boulders at Kumatora who dodged them with a psychic jump and then she used PK Freeze to hit King K. Rool. He got frozen, and the block of ice hit the evil Diddy Kong. Then evil Diddy Kong got angry and ran to attack ROB but ROB shot lasers at him and the shadow bugs all died.
"CURSES!" Ridley said. Ridley then shot more fireballs and knocked out Ness, but Pikachu revived him before the bad guys could get him. Then Pikachu, knowing Ridley's weakness from their previous meeting, used Thunder. Ridley was downed almost instantly.
"How did you know that'd work so well?" asked Peach.
"Pika pi Pikachu!" Pikachu said.
Translation: He's a flying type!
Then Ness and Kumatora teamed up and dig a giant PK Brainshock on the Evil Donkey Kong. K. Rool knew he was doomed, so he revived Ridley.
"Quick, let's get out of here!" K. Rool said. He hopped onto Ridley's back, carrying Diddy Kong's trophy. King K. Rool laughed evilly as Ridley flew him to the airships.
The six fighters revived Donkey Kong's left behind trophy.
"Oh no, where's Diddy Kong!" Donkey Kong yelled.
"He's up on Bowser's airship armada right now," Ness said.
"We're going to save him, just like we need to save the others." Olimar said.
They used the Gangplank Galleon to travel to Captain Falcon's island...and eventually, they'd have to meet Wolf O'Donnell...
TO BE CONTINUED
SteelixShadow - March 23, 2008 03:01 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Evan1109 @ Mar 23 2008, 02:38 AM) |
"How did you know that'd work so well?" asked Peach. "Pika pi Pikachu!" Pikachu said. Translation: He's a flying type!
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I laughed REALLY hard! It's true though! He would be hurt if he was a flying type!
Evan1109 - March 23, 2008 03:44 AM (GMT)
Chapter 8
Warioware Inc.
Ice Climbers, Jigglypuff and Articuno were still chasing Wario on his motorcycle. Then Wario got shot down by Articuno's Ice Beam and his motorcycle crashed. But then Mona came and rescued him. They drove into Diamond City.
"Thanks Articuno, we'll go on foot from here," Popo said. The Ice Climbers and Jigglypuff went into Diamond City. They found the big Warioware Inc. building.
"Wario must be here!" Nana said. They took the elevator up to the top floor, seeing all the crazy microgames along the way. Then they reached the room Wario and Mona were at. In addition to eating the Ice Climbers' vegetables, they had a trophy of Lucario!
"Oh, hey, kids, you come for your veggies? Mona and I are enjoying them too much, you can't have them! WA HA HA HA! Check out what I snagged while I was up on the mountains, it's so cool." Wario said. Then shadow bugs made Lucario evil and then he fought the Ice Climbers and Jigglypuff.
He used his aura powers and it hurt Jigglypuff real bad. But Jigglypuff used Rest and it killed Lucario and he turned back to normal. The Ice Climbers made Lucario normal and the three fought Wario and Mona.
Wario farted on Jigglypuff but Jigglypuff sang and made Wario sleepy. Lucario was going to use aura powers on him but Mona hit him with her guitar. Mona got hit by the Ice Climbers's ice. After a long fight Wario and Mona decided to escape while they still could. Mr. L showed up in the window with Brobot and Wario and Mona hopped in and the three escaped.
The Ice Climbers, Jigglypuff and Lucario decided to chase the Brobot.
Inside Brobot, Mr. L used a small monitor to contact Wolf O'Donnell, who was on Punch Island still.
"Do you know what happened to K. Rool and Ridley, Wolf? I lost contact with them." Mr. L said.
"I saw them abandon the Gangplank Galleon and the ship's heading to the island. I think they were beaten...but I saw they had a trophy with them."
"Hmm," Mr. L said. "Well, Captain Falcon is so strong. He's our biggest threat. We need to take him out at all costs. I'll attack the ones on the ship to buy you some time. Wario and Mona have lost their Lucario trophy, and couldn't get ahold of Jigglypuff and the two twerpy icicle kids, so they're with me now. They'll give you support in taking down Captain Falcon. His trophy alone will show Master Hand that Ganondorf is a man of great power--few, if any, have bested him."
"Right," said Wolf. "So I guess I have a lot of responsibility. But I'll do anything if it means I can eventually get to fight...HIM."
"Indeed." Mr. L said. "Nobody's seen Star Fox around for a while, but rest assured, if I get him, you have my promise that I'll let you be the one...to take him down. I'll see you in a bit."
What do you guys want to see next:
A. Brobot attacks the seven heroes on Gangplank Galleon
B. Wolf vs. Captain Falcon
C. What's Samus up to?
Or should I go to any of the other heroes?
KirbyMan - March 23, 2008 11:32 AM (GMT)
GLaDoSvox - March 23, 2008 12:17 PM (GMT)
I'm confused. Who's Kumatora?
NyXem - March 23, 2008 12:57 PM (GMT)
Evan1109 - March 23, 2008 02:38 PM (GMT)
Kumatora is Lucas's girlfriend from Mother 3 ^_^ Some people say she is really Duster's girlfriend but NO HE'S OLD! THAT'S SO GROSS! I'm okay w/ Lucas x Ness though B)
Chapter 9
Wolf vs. Captain Falcon
Captain Falcon was sitting in his house watching TV.
"Top story tonight is that Mario was captured by Mewtwo and also a couple of subspace bombs went off. Do you think the Subspace Army is back?" said the Toad who was a news reporter on TV.
"Hmm! I'LL HAVE TO SHOW THEM MY MOVES THEN!" Captain Falcon yelled as he leaped from his chair. But too bad for him because Wolf came through the roof.
"Can't let you do that, Captain Falcon!" he yelled.
"Hmm. COME ON!" Captain Falcon said.
Wolf shot lasers at Captain Falcon but he dodged and did a Falcon Kick into Wolf. Wolf used his reflector to hurt Captain Falcon instead though. But Captain Falcon grabbed him, threw him into the air and gave him The Knee.
"You're a tough opponent," Wolf said.
"You're not all too bad yourself, but I must defeat you!" Captain Falcon said.
"Nonsense!" Wolf said. "I will be the one...to take you down!"
Wolf did his Up+B move (I don't know the name >_>) and it hurt Captain Falcon. But then Captain Falcon did a Raptor Boost and used his Up+B move and grabbed Wolf.
"YES!" Captain Falcon yelled.
Then Wolf was angry but then through the hole in the roof Mona and Wario came down to fight Captain Falcon with Wolf. Wario farted on Captain Falcon.
"That stinks man!" Captain Falcon said. Then Mona rocked out on her guitar so hard it hurt Captain Falcon. Captain Falcon couldn't take it anymore.
"FALCON....PUNCH!" he yelled, and he did an epic Falcon Punch that shot Wolf, Wario and Mona all out of his house in far away into the ocean and they dinged like Team Rocket does.
Then Captain Falcon went outside and saw that a robot was attacking the big pirate ship he saw outside before. He decided to go fire up the Falcon Flyer.
Evan1109 - March 23, 2008 11:36 PM (GMT)
Chapter 10
Samus on the Airship
Samus jumped out of her ship and onto the airship. She knew the trophies were being held here. She expected this would happen. She would be the one to save whoever was being held.
She walked through the airship she was on and then she went across the stage and dodged bullet bills and cannonballs. It was hard but she made it and went down the pipe. She saw no trophies and just a bunch of Koopas and Goombas and Kremlings operating the ship and so she placed a time bomb and destroyed this airship, killing all the Koopas, Goombas and Kremligns, but Samus escaped.
Samus got onto her gunship again and then saw a giant looking airship. Surely this was the flagship of Bowser's armada and they were holding the trophies here.
Then she saw Ridley fly out of the bridge of the airship. Ridley didn't see her but she knew this had to be the place.
She went inside and dodged more bullet bills and Rocky Wrenches this time and then she got to the main room. King K. Rool was in charge right now.
"Hey, it's Samus!" He said. "Too bad Ridley just left. You're the first to make a rescue attempt, I'm surprised."
"Give me them back and no one gets hurt." Samus said.
"No, I can't," King K. Rool said. "The boss wouldn't like it."
King K. Rool looked at the trophies of Mario, Lucas and Diddy Kong.
"They're ours. We're just delivering them to the boss and trying to collect more along the way." King K. Rool said. Then he got a call from Wolf.
"This is Wolf," he said on his intercom. "I failed to beat Captain Falcon. Wario and Mona are with me too."
"Oh well, you came back in one piece, that's all that matters." Said King K. Rool. "Mr. L, how are you?"
"Brobot and I are going to attack the guys who took over Gangplank Galleon. If they get to Captain Falcon's island they can fly up here and we're doomed." Mr. L said.
"Oh no," King K. Rool said. "You have to stop them then. Good luck. I have to deal with Samus."
King K. Rool threw his crown at Samus but she shot him with a power beam. Then King K. Rool got hit by her missles too.
"Ugh, I don't feel like dealing with you. HEY PETEY PIRANHA, COME OUT HERE!" King K. Rool screamed. Then Petey Piranha came out. He shot goop from his mouth and it got on Samus. Then Samus fired a missle in Petey's mouth and he died. For now...
"Grr, I guess I will have to deal with you myself then!" King K. Rool said. Then he was about to attack but Kirby and Meta Knight came in with the Halberd and started firing at the airship they were on. Samus used this temporary distraction to free Mario, Lucas and Diddy Kong and they all went onto her gunship while the big flagship exploded because of the triumph of the Halberd.
"Great job everyone." Meta Knight said to his men and Kirby. "Kirby and I might leave to attack the airship interiors soon...but for now we are staying."
Then on board Samus's gunship Samus talked to her new companions.
"Thanks-a for saving us Samus! You-a so brave!" Mario said.
"Oh no...I miss my friends..." Lucas said. He was sad.
"It's okay, we'll be your friends for now," Samus said as she took off her Power Suit.
Samus was putting her suit away too early though, because on of the airships started firing at her as she escaped! She got into the cockpit and decided they'd need to give the Halberd some cover...She got ready to open fire. Lucas, Mario and Diddy Kong watched intently as she started firing...and then Koopas and Kremlings started attacking in biplanes. The battle up here was only just beginning...
TO BE CONTINUED
KirbyMan - March 23, 2008 11:46 PM (GMT)
More Captain Falcon please.
Evan1109 - March 23, 2008 11:53 PM (GMT)
He should show up again at...Chapter 12, maybe 13 depending on how things go
Evan1109 - March 24, 2008 12:33 AM (GMT)
Chapter 11
Animal Crossing
The village of Smashville was in a panic. A Subspace Bomb went off right outside the village gates...
"Tortimer, I want to go inspect the bomb...I should protect our town!" Said the generic villager boy.
"Okay, but be careful...good luck. We all wish you well." Said Tortimer.
Then the Villager went outside the town gates and looked at the big subspace explosion. Then he saw Bowser pointing a Dark Cannon at him.
"Oh man!" the Villager said. "Can I trade you for that cool accessory you have?"
"W-what?" Said Bowser, lowering his cannon.
"I'll give you a Retro Stereo!" the Villager said.
"Oh...what?" Bowser said. "Ehh...forget you. I'll go find some people on the other end of the cave."
"Oh!" said the Villager. "I wanna go through the cave too! LET'S GO TOGETHER!"
So the Animal Crossing Villager and Bowser teamed up. They went through the cave and fought weird monsters together. Then they met a wild Dusknoir.
"Dusknoir Dusk Dusk Noir Dusk." said the Dusknoir.
Translation: You're evil, Bowser, and you can't come here.
The Dusknoir was going to fight Bowser and the Villager but Bowser won by using his Dark Cannon. Then they got to the other side and saw Pit.
"Palutena sent me to stop you, Bowser. You're evil and I must fight you!" Pit said.
"No, he's good, you're the evil one!" The Villager said. He helped Bowser fight Pit. Between Bowser's flame breath and the Villager's bug net Pit was no match. The duo easily beat him.
"Cool. I guess we should turn him back to normal tho--"
Bowser quickly betrayed the naive young villager and the kid became a trophy, just like Pit.
"Hey King K. Rool," said Bowser on an intercom. "I got two more trophies. Any other successes?"
"Only failures," King K. Rool said. "We lost Mario, Lucas and Diddy Kong. The flagship has been heavily damaged by the Halberd. Petey Piranha was beaten by Samus. If the heroes on the Gangplank Galleon get to Captain Falcon, the armada will surely fall..."
"Hmmph. Tell all the villains up there to start attacking any heroes they see on foot. Instruct Marx to make his first move." Bowser said.
"Alright, I will," King K. Rool said. "Take your two trophies to the headquarters. They'll be safe there. If nothing else, we will buy you time by distracting the heroes."
"Good idea." Bowser said. "Tell Mr. L to give his status report within the next hour, and report it to me. I'll give those at the headquarters your regards."
"Thank you," K. Rool said. "See you later."
Evan1109 - March 24, 2008 12:50 AM (GMT)
Current summary again to make people know what's going on:
Teams:
Samus, Mario, Diddy Kong, Lucas -- On board Samus's gunship
Kirby and Meta Knight -- On the Halberd
Captain Falcon -- Preparing the Falcon Flyer
Peach, Ness, Kumatora, Pikachu, Olimar, R.O.B., Donkey Kong -- Commandeering the Gangplank Galleon
Ice Climbers, Jigglypuff, Lucario -- Pursuing Mr. L
Luigi -- ???
Bad Guys:
Bowser -- Heading to "Headquarters"
King K. Rool -- On the airships
Ridley -- On the airships
Wolf -- Heading to airships on Wolfen
Mr. L -- Attacking Gangplank Galleon
Wario -- ???
Mona -- ???
Trophy Status:
Pit -- With Bowser
Villager -- With Bowser
Bosses:
Articuno -- Beat by Ice Climbers and Jigglypuff, actually peaceful
02 -- Defeated by Meta Knight
Petey Piranha -- Defeated by Samus
Dusknoir -- Defeated by Bowser and Villager
Marx -- Status unknown, not fought yet
Characters to speculate:
Fox and Falco -- With Wolf around, surely they will try to come. Plus, they could help out a lot at the airship battle and aide the Halberd.
Sonic -- He's always gotta get involved somehow!
King Dedede -- He's always a mystery. What will he do? Is he a bad guy or good guy?
Snake -- Will he use his sneaking powers?
Link -- Where the HECK is he?
Evan1109 - March 24, 2008 03:41 PM (GMT)
Chapter 12
Mr. L's Confrontation
Pikachu, Olimar, Peach, Ness, Kumatora, R.O.B. and Donkey Kong were on Gangplank Galleon and heading to Captain Falcon's private island. Then, they heard a big thump on the main deck.
"What's that?" Peach asked.
"Let's check it out." Olimar replied.
The seven went outside and saw Brobot.
"I'll never let you guys get to Captain Falcon's island!" Mr. L said. "Have at you!"
"What is that thing?" Ness asked.
"It's his Brobot, I've seen it before!" Peach said. "Just keep hitting it and it dies!"
"Good to know!" Ness replied.
Brobot fired out missles but Ness destroyed them with PK Thunder. Then Peach threw a vegetable at the robot. Then Mr. L shot out lasers and they hurt Peach. Ness used PK Flash and Olimar threw Pikmin which hurt Brobot a lot. Then R.O.B. shot more lasers to destroy Brobot with.
"What, you fire lasers too!?" Mr. L said.
"I am a robot!" R.O.B. said.
"BUT YOU'RE NOT A BROBOT!" Mr. L said. He fired missles at R.O.B. and he got hurt too. Peach and him were both trophies right now.
Kumatora used PK Freeze and then she kicked Brobot but Brobot hit her with a really big laser, then sucked her into his mouth and she got chewed on and spit out and it hurt her a lot but she wasn't a trophy yet.
Donkey Kong made Peach normal again and then gave Brobot a Donkey Punch and he was too damaged to fight anymore. Mr. L hopped out as Brobot exploded.
"Hmm, you guys are too tough for me. I'm getting out of here. ...ooooh."
Mr. L saw R.O.B.'s defeated trophy and decided to take him.
"L-ater, losers!" Mr. L said, and he got into a rowboat and paddled away.
"NO! R.O.B.!" said Peach.
"It's okay, we'll save him. For now we go up to the airships." Said Olimar.
They looked at the airship battle up above and saw many explosions. They saw the Halberd was there attacking.
"Oh no, I hope Mario is alright." Said Peach.
"I hope Lucas is okay too." Said Kumatora.
"I hope Diddy is alright...My poor friend." Said Donkey Kong.
They paddled onto Punch Island and met Captain Falcon.
"Captain Falcon!" Ness said.
"Hello, Ness." Captain Falcon said. "I was getting ready to show them my moves. Do you guys want to come with me?"
"Yes!" said Olimar. "We must free our friends."
"Come with me!" Said Captain Falcon.
The seven got onto the Falcon Flyer and flew towards the airships of Bowser.
Meanwhile, in the ocean...
"Ganondorf, I have bad news and good news." said Mr. L to his intercom.
"What?" said Ganondorf. "Don't tell me you failed to stop the Gangplank Galleon."
"I did." Mr. L said. "But I did lessen their numbers. I have captured the one called R.O.B."
"Oh, excellent." Ganondorf said. "Actually, I think this outcome is better. More trophies is a good thing...Yes...Mr. L, here are your instructions. Drop off the trophy at the headquarters. Then head up to the airships and attack. I've prepared a new, stronger Brobot for you."
"Awesome!" said Mr. L. "Thanks, sir. But shouldn't someone focus on getting more Subspace Bombs to go off?"
"I already have someone doing that." Ganondorf said. "Wario and Mona are taking control of the R.O.B. Squad for me."
"Excellent. I'll see you L-ater." Mr. L said.
DUN DUN DUNNNNN
Evan1109 - March 24, 2008 08:14 PM (GMT)
Chapter 13
The Subspace Bomb Goes Off Again
Link was running through Hyrule Field and then he found a big treasure chest. He opened it up and found a part of a strange relic.
"I wonder what this is?" he said.
Then King Dedede came and attacked. "You can't have those! The parts cannot be allowed to be assembled!"
King Dedede and Link had a duel. Link used his bow and arrows on King Dedede but King Dedede blocked with his hammer and threw a Waddle Dee. Link beat up the Waddle Dee with his Spin Attack but then King Dedede threw a Gordo. Link then stabbed King Dedede.
"Why can't I have this treasure?!" Link said.
"You can have it because..." King Dedede's sentence was stopped short because he was turned into a trophy. He dropped the treasure.
Mona stood behind him, with a trophy gun. Wario went over and looked at the treasure.
"Heh, this is mine now, fairypants!" Wario said.
He put the weird old relic part in his pocket, grabbed the trophy of King Dedede, and ran away...leaving behind a Subspace bomb.
Link ran away as the bomb exploded. He realized he needed to find the rest of that relic...King Dedede said there were "parts" to it, and they had to be nearby somewhere.
Link saw Popo, Nana, Jigglypuff and Lucario running through the field, watching as Wario and Mona drove away on their motorcycle angrily.
"Are you chasing them?" Link asked.
"Yeah, they're evil and stealing trophies of everyone!" said Popo.
"They don't respect the power of AURA!" Lucario said.
"We need to get the other pieces of that relic Wario has so he can't assemble it!" said Link.
"Okay." Nana said. The five ran off. They fought many enemies and came across another treasure chest with a similar relic.
"I bet they all connect!" said Link.
Then the five ran out of the forest and saw the Great Fox preparing to take off. Fox and Falco saw the five heroes.
"Come with us!" said Fox. "We're going up to the airships."
And so the five did. At least with one piece the relic couldn't be assembled...
KirbyMan - March 25, 2008 11:13 AM (GMT)
Slippy Captain Falcon interaction please. And Leon
Evan1109 - March 25, 2008 09:44 PM (GMT)
Chapter 14
Great Fox Duel
King K. Rool watched the battles from one of the airships. Then Bowser came up from below in the Koopa Klown Car and hopped out.
"I dropped the trophies off," said Bowser.
"Good." K. Rool said. "Now we must commandeer these ships. Mr. L is on his way for reinforcements too, in a new Brobot."
Then Mewtwo teleported in and watched too.
"You came too?" King K. Rool said. "Finally. You've done nothing."
"I'm doing things...behind the scenes, it's more in my style," Mewtwo said, as he pointed down below to the ground, the ground they were flying high over. Subspace was everywhere. Ships were falling into the explosions.
Meanwhile the Great Fox flew up and shot down another airship.
"Good shot Falco!" said Nana.
Then Sonic flew in standing on the wings of Tails's plane. Tails shot down an airship. Then Falco was angry he stole his kill and got an Arwing out and they had a sky battle. Falco shot down Tails. Then Sonic jumped onto the Great Fox and Falco did too. They had a battle.
TO BE CONTINUED....
KirbyMan - March 25, 2008 10:52 PM (GMT)
You do know you need two ROB to activate a sub Space bomb?