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Naruto Jiyuu > Technique Chart/Bloodline Registration > Yokoshima Clan


Posted by: Death Sai May 23 2006, 08:42 PM
Clan Name: Yokoshima Clan

Name of Clan Technique: Gravity Control

History: The Yokoshima Clan used to be a vey wealthy clan that was established in the Hidden Village of the moon. While the village was not known for their strength, they were known for their research into the depth of chakra. There was one man in the moon village, who was the brightest of them all. He had figured out a way to manipulate the gravity around objects. This mans name was Koji Yokoshima. He was thrilled to find a new breakthrough in chakra control and studied hard, to find the full potential of this new control. After 5 years of perfecting this technique, he decided it was time to teach it to another, so that it would not be forgotten, so he began teaching his son. This also helped the Yokoshima clan gain fame. Within 30 years, the Yokoshima clan became the most powerful ninja in the moon village.

With the bloodline looking secure, Koji Yokoshima passed away, 50 years after the creation of his technique. Before he died however, he made it clear to his son, that the only ones to learn his jutsu, was the Yokoshima clan. His son then took place at the head of the clan. Over the years, the Yokoshima clan grew in numbers. Many other branches were made within the clan as well. It al lead up to one day, almost 600 years after the clans creation. A powerful scientist, Zen-shin Yokoshima, was talking to the present leader of the clan about a new jutsu he had discovered. Da-Ku Yokoshima was the leader at that time. He was the youngest leader known in the clan, being at the age of 18.

Zen-shin had learned to draw the gravitational pull of a meteor to the earth. The young leader thought the man insane and turned him away. As he was turned down, Zen-shin vowed he would have revenge on the ignorant leader. Some weeks later, Da-Ku got a tip from the local ANBU that there was man a top of a hill in the middle of the village. Da-Ku had raced to find him, but was too late. When Da-Ku arrived, the man had already brought a meteor down from the sky, and he crashed it into the village. The blast nearly killed everyone and it obliterated the village. Da-Ku had managed to survive, but now with his village gone, and most of the clan dead, he had no choice but to leave.

The clan to this present day is scattered among the different countries, mostly as missing nin. The few that are accepted by other villages carry on their clans special skills to show among the other villages. Da-Ku has always been held responsible by the other nations for the meteor. It was put on his criminal record, and he is now a feared criminal. Much of Zen-shin’s research was destroyed in the accident, but the few papers that were recovered, lie with Da-Ku.

Clan Jutsu
    Name: Gravity Control Level 1
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Chakra: N/A
    Description: At this level, the clan member is able to manipulate the gravity around small objects such as kunai or small rocks. They can increase or decrease the weight of the object by 10lbs at this stage in their skill. The user can also revert the object back to its normal weight at will. The user can only control the gravity of an object with one hand. So at max, he can only manipulate the gravity around two objects at a time. If his concentration on the objects is broken, then the object will return to normal. As well if the user wants to manipulate the gravity around something else.

    Name: Gravitational Pull Level 1
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Chakra: 1,000
    Description: At this level of skill, the user is able to pull small objects to their hand. Example is that someone could pull a kunai to their hand. The object however cannot weigh more than 15lbs and it must be within 20’ of the user.

    Name: Juuryoku Bakuha (Gravity Blast)
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Chakra: 2,000
    Description: This technique allows the user to fire a short blast of highly condensed wave of air and chakra. The air is condensed with the gravity around in the air. The blast can only be seen as a blur, and when hit by it, it can knock a 5’ ninja back about 10’. The blast feels like you are being bull rushed by a 200lbs person right in the chest. This jutsu is really more for knocking people off their feet or stopping an attack. Kind of like a wind blast but only gravity. If the target hits something in the process of being hit, then it might hurt them.

    Name: Gravity Control Level 2
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Chakra: 5,000
    Description: At this level of skill, the user can now manipulate the gravity around medium sized objects. This involves objects that are under 100lbs. They can also now increase or decrease the weight of the object by 100lbs. Same restrictions apply as the last time.

    Name: Gravitational Pull Level 2
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Chakra: 7,500
    Description: At this level the user is now able to pull larger objects towards them. They can pull objects that are lighter than 50lbs and are within 35’ of the user.

    Name: Kyojuuryoku Bakuha (Large Gravity Blast)
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Chakra: 10,000
    Description: Like the normal gravity blast, this one is much bigger. The blast can now be seen as a dark purplish blur being fired instantly from the hand. This blast is more tightly condensed with gravity, making the air and chakra harder and heavier. This blast can knock down a small tree and even crack rock.

    Name: Gravity Control Level 3
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Chakra: 15,000
    Description: Being closer to mastering this skill, the user can now shift the gravity around larger objects. This includes any objects under 200lbs. They can also now increase or decrease the weight of the object by 300lbs. Same restrictions apply as the last level.

    Name: Juuryoku Bun'ya (Gravity Field)
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Chakra: 15,000
    Description: The user is now able to create a gravity field in their area. A 20’ dome around the user will become a high gravity zone. The gravity will be 2x normal earth gravity. The jutsu will not affect the user, and the dome will follow the user wherever he walks. This field can be turned off whenever wanted. The longer the field is out, the more chakra it will take to hold it up.

    Name: Juuryoku Taijutsu (Gravity Fighting)
    Type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
    Chakra: 20,000
    Description: This is a unique fighting style only known to the Yokoshima clan. The user is able to compress the gravity around ones fist, foot, limb, or body thus changing the weight of that body part. The user does not feel a difference in weight, yet they can change the weight of their attack by 100lbs. This can be a devastating fighting style, and it gives the Yokoshima clan an advantage in close combat.

    Name: Gravity Control Mastery
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Chakra: 25,000
    Description: At this level, the Yokoshima can now almost control all aspects of gravity. Any objects gravity can now be altered and to any weight. Of course, the more weight that something is made, the more amount of chakra it takes to make it that way. Same restrictions apply as the previous levels.

    Name: Kyojuuryoku Bun'ya (Max Gravity Field)
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Chakra: 30,000
    Description: This is a dangerous and powerful jutsu. It takes intense concentration to perform. After using a string of hand seals (takes 1 post) then the user will through out their arms to their sides. This sends out a huge black and purple dome. This is a gravity field that will spread in a 40’ dome around the user. This dome increases the gravity in that dome 5x normal earth gravity. This does not affect the user, unless held for over 5 min. If the field is held longer than 5 min, than it will also crush the user. This will crush almost anything else that’s within that dome. The dome can usually be seen for miles because of its unnatural height and color.

    Name: Black Hole
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Chakra: 40,000
    Description: This is a powerful jutsu only known to the Yokoshima clan. It creates an very small version of a black hole on an object somewhere within 30' of the user. This black hole is no bigger than someones fist and has a strong gravitational pull and strong compression. If something is pulled in, it will most likely be crushed. Even the user has risk of being sucked into the hole. This jutsu is definatly a last resort jutsu. The hole will only stay open for 3 posts as well before closing.

    Name: ???
    Type: ???
    Chakra: ???
    Description: This is a jutsu that has only been performed once. Since the one who used it died while using it, it is unknown how to use it, and exactly what it does. The only way to find out how to use it it, is by studying and deciphering the research that Zen-shin left behind. Presently, Da-Ku Holds this research.
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Posted by: Omega2042 May 25 2006, 10:36 AM
Well, here we go:

1) You mention it as a bloodline, change it to clan. There is nothing in here that suggests there is a genetic trait involved in any of this.

2) The chart:

QUOTE
Name: Gravity Control Level 1
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: N/A
Description: At this level, the clan member is able to manipulate the gravity around small objects such as kunai or small rocks. They can increase or decrease the weight of the object by 10lbs at this stage in their skill. The user can also revert the object back to its normal weight at will.


So they just do a few hand signs and the weight changes? I know we have already talked about this a bit so you should have an idea of what to include here. Just to be safe though: You need to include the limits to this jutsu that you said you already had in mind.

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Name: Gravitational Pull Level 1
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 1,000
Description: At this level of skill, the user is able to pull small objects to their hand. Example is that someone could pull a kunai to their hand. The object however cannot weigh more than 15lbs and it must be within 20’ of the user.


Nothing really wrong with this, something doesnt sit well though. It could just be the fact I am half asleep though.

QUOTE
Name: Juuryoku Bakuha (Gravity Blast)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 2,000
Description: This technique allows the user to fire a short blast of highly condensed wave of air and chakra. The air is condensed with the gravity around in the air. The blast can only be seen as a blur, and when hit by it, it can knock a 5’ ninja back about 10’. The blast feels like you are being bull rushed by a 200lbs person right in the chest. This will hurt genin and chuunin, but for a jounin this is only used to knock them off their feet


Well, if you look at what I posted about chakra levels in relation to rank, this is a low level genin jutsu really. So the fact that it can harm a chuunin and knock a jounin down is a bit crazy.

QUOTE
Name: Gravity Control Level 2
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 5,000
Description: At this level of skill, the user can now manipulate the gravity around medium sized objects. This involves objects that are under 100lbs. They can also now increase or decrease the weight of the object by 100lbs.


Same as the previous.

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Name: Gravitational Pull Level 2
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 7,500
Description: At this level the user is now able to pull larger objects towards them. They can pull objects that are lighter than 50lbs and are within 50’ of the user.


50' is a pretty large radius. I think it should be a bit smaller.

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Name: Kyojuuryoku Bakuha (Large Gravity Blast)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 10,000
Description: Like the normal gravity blast, this one is much bigger. The blast can now be seen as a dark purplish blur being fired instantly from the hand. This blast is more tightly condensed with gravity, making the air and chakra harder and heavier. This blast can knock down a small tree and even crack rock.


Chances are when you change the previous one this one will also change too.

QUOTE
Name: Gravity Control Level 3
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 15,000
Description: Being closer to mastering this skill, the user can now shift the gravity around larger objects. This includes any objects under 200lbs. They can also now increase or decrease the weight of the object by 500lbs.


Would this include people themselves? I would hope not. Apart from that same as the previous two.

QUOTE
Name: Juuryoku Bun'ya (Gravity Field)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 15,000
Description: The user is now able to create a gravity field in their area. A 20’ dome around the user will become a high gravity zone. The gravity will be 3x normal earth gravity. The jutsu will not affect the user, and the dome will follow the user wherever he walks. This field can be turned off whenever wanted. The longer the field is out, the more chakra it will take to hold it up.


Wow, 3x normal gravity is pretty intense. I can only imagine the stress a person's legs would be under. Well, what would happen is their legs would be destroyed under that much pressure. Not sure what I can suggest to fix about this without completly changing it. So I guess just change it in some way and see where it goes from there.

QUOTE
Name: Juuryoku Taijutsu (Gravity Fighting)
Type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Chakra: 20,000
Description: This is a unique fighting style only known to the Yokoshima clan. The user is able to compress the gravity around ones fist, foot, limb, or body thus changing the weight of that body part. The user does not feel a difference in weight, yet they can change the weight of their attack by 100lbs. This can be a devastating fighting style, and it gives the Yokoshima clan an advantage in close combat


It seems as though there should be some downside to this. Most of the other jutsus on this chart contain one. Its also odd that there is no mention of taijutsu until it gets down to 20K chakra. It also seems slightly out of place since this is the only taijutsu on the chart.

QUOTE
Name: Gravity Control Mastery
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 25,000
Description: At this level, the Yokoshima can now almost control all aspects of gravity. Any objects gravity can now be altered and to any weight. Of course, the more weight that something is made, the more amount of chakra it takes to make it that way.


Oh boy, This is a bit extreme. Tired right now, so I will wait for the revisions to get back to this.

QUOTE
Name: Kyojuuryoku Bun'ya (Max Gravity Field)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 30,000
Description: This is a dangerous and powerful jutsu. It takes intense concentration to perform. After using a string of hand seals (takes 1 post) then the user will through out their arms to their sides. This sends out a huge black and purple dome. This is a gravity field that will spread in a 50’ dome around the user. This dome increases the gravity in that dome 20x normal earth gravity. This does not affect the user, unless held for over 5 min. If the field is held longer than 5 min, than it will also crush the user. This will crush almost anything else that’s within that dome. The dome can usually be seen for miles because of its unnatural height and color.


OK, 20x gravity would just outright kill someone. The amount of chakra this would take to pull off is mind-boggling. 50' is just a large radius, and as I have already said 20x gravity would just kill someone. It doesnt seem that a person at 30K chakra would be able to form this really. This seems more like a Kage level tech.

QUOTE
Name: Black Hole
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 40,000
Description: This is a powerful jutsu only known to the Yokoshima clan. It creates an actual black hole on an object somewhere in the vicinity of the user. This black hole has a strong gravitational pull and strong compression in the hole. If something is pulled in, it will most likely be crushed. Even the user has risk of being sucked into the hole. This jutsu is definatly a last resort jutsu. The hole will only stay open for 5 minutes as well before closing.


No. No one can harness the power of a black hole. Its the most powerful force in the known universe. This would not only kill whoever you are fighting, but it would destroy the whole planet along with it. Not even a Kage could pull this off.

QUOTE
Name: ???

Type: ???

Chakra: ???

Description: This is a jutsu that has only been performed once. Since the one who used it died while using it, it is unknown how to use it, and exactly what it does. The only way to find out how to use it it, is by studying and deciphering the research that Zen-shin left behind. Presently, Da-Ku Holds this research


I am pretty sure as to what this is, but you had better PM this to me if you want this chart to go anywhere.

Posted by: Jenaisis May 25 2006, 01:30 PM
About the 'no-one can harness the power of a black hole' comment, I beg to differ. Lots of people have had characters that were able to control black hole-esque things in the forums I've been on.

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