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|Posted by: Syrius Mar 21 2007, 11:01 AM|
Character Name: Ryu Sentakushi
Character Height: 5'6"
Characters Weight: 135
Starting Village: Hidden Mist
Primary Element: Water
Secondary Element: Wind
Character Appearance: He always wears a midnight blue half mask up to the middle of his nose with blue pants and a black shirt, headband, and shoes.
History: Ryu was born March 1990. A member of the Sentakushi clan. While always taken care of by them he was excited to be able to become a ninja someday. Always asking his elder relatives about it, they told him to wait until he was able to get in the academy. When he came of age and started learning his bloodline limit they enrolled him. In the academy he was the top of his class. Always praticing his hand signs and Taijutsu to become quicker, he worked on his chakra control to release his jutsus right after finishing the last sign. Developing rather very quickly for his age, Ryu became a Chuunin the first time around just after 6 months of being a Genin. Doing all he could to become one, Ryu chose to take it easy on the ranks for a while and is now focusing on his training and people skills.
Ryu only stays around the quick and strong and girls while only letting his actions speak most of the time. He is quiet and likes to train on the people of the village for his silent movements. And also listens to orders while on a team.
Hitoe Level 1
Description: While members of this clan may do one-handed seals, skill in doing them well doesnít come naturally. At this level the speed of the seal is slower than normal and takes more concentration to pull off. Used more for show than for actual combat at this point.
Description: The first ice manipulation skill all members of this clan learn. This is also a very simple jutsu. It created a spike of ice about the same size and shape of a senbon throwing needle. This allows members of this clan to have an almost unlimited supply of throwing weapons as very little chakra is used to perform this.
Reiki no Jutsu (Chill)
Description: Any target of this genjutsu will be thought into believing that the temperature in the area is dropped to near 50 degrees Fahrenheit. This has the effect of causing the target to have slightly slower movements and use more energy in an attempt to stay warm.
Mizore no Jutsu (Sleet)
Description: The first true offensive jutsu members of this clan learn. After a short series of hand seals a small gust of wind blows from behind the user. As this wind picks up speed small chucks of ice and formed and fly through the air at the userís target. The damage this causes is minimal, but the wind and ice make it hard to close any distance on the user.
Hitoe Level 2
Description: By having practiced with both normal and one-handed hand seals, the user now shows vast improvement in their ability to perform one-handed seals. There is still room for improvement at this level however. Users now can do one-handed seals with a good deal of speed, but two handed is still faster.
Aisu Toge no Jutsu (Ice Spines)
Description: An advanced version of the Mizore jutsu. The wind itself is about the same strength, but the extra ice has made it colder. Also the shards of ice now have a more defined shape and have gained a sharp edge.
Baisuu Aisu Senbon no Jutsu (Multiple Ice Needles)
Description: Similar to the previous level, only now the user may create more than one at a time. Also with the addition of being able to perform one-handed seals quicker they are able to create and throw at a faster rate. At this level up to three may be created at once.
Academy & Village chart:
Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
Description: This technique must be mastered by any ninja who has graduated from the Academy at the Hidden Leaf Village. It's the most basic technique a Genin must know, since it can be a real lifesaver. This ninjutsu creates an illusional clone of the user.
Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
Description: Henge no Jutsu is the basic skill a ninja must know to become a Genin. It is a very useful and widely used skill in the series, as it has many uses. It's mostly used as a decoy, to confuse the opponent by transforming into somebody that's an ally with the enemy.
Genjutsu Kai (Genjutsu Release)
Description: A Ninjutsu technique where the ninja focuses their chakra and screams "kai" or "release." They can perform it on themselves or on others. It will effectively ward off most Genjutsu, unless extremely powerful or when used in conjunction with an advanced bloodline.
Oboro Bushin no Jutsu (Mist Clone Technique)
Description: A Ninjutsu technique similar to the Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique), as these clones cannot attack. Whether or not they are made out of mist is hard to tell, but they are immaterial and will disperse when attacked.
Kinobori/Kabenobori no Jutsu (Tree/Wall Walking Technique)
Description: By focusing a proper amount of chakra into the feet, the user is able to walk on walls and trees.
Kiri Shunshin no Jutsu
Description: A technique which allows the user to transport from one place to another in a veil of mist. (Not to be used in battle)
Suimen Hokou no Gyou (Water Walking)
Description: By focusing their chakra in a similar manner to the Kinobori technique, the user is able to balance over the surface of water, allowing them to walk and run freely.
Kawarimi no Jutsu
Description: The Body Substitute skill is a widely used and very famous skill among shinobis. Put simply, the user uses speed to his/her advantage, and grabs an item from the environment and places it on his/her current position while moving out of the way.
Mizu Bushin no Jutsu (Water Clone no Jutsu)
Description: This Ninjutsu technique uses water as its base for creating the clones. Each clone is one tenth as powerful as the ninja using it and has a limited range it can move away from its creator. Like the Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Shadow Clone Technique), this clone can attack.
Kirigakure no Jutsu (Hidden Mist Technique)
Description: A Ninjutsu technique that covers the area surrounding the ninja using it completely in mist. Perfect for silent killing, since there's practically no visibility within the area of this jutsu.
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|Posted by: Syrius Mar 21 2007, 11:02 AM|
|my thanks to Omega for helping me choose a last name|
|Posted by: Omega2042 Mar 21 2007, 11:19 AM|
| First of all, I just pulled it from SW2 again. Next, please dont do a solid block of blue font again, it made it hard to read. Finally, your jutsu are all messed up. You are a chuunin, so you have your primary and academy charts only. You get every jutsu up to 10,000 on those charts. Going off of what you put down I would say look at the beast tamer one and the water one. Also the wind one given that its your other element. Oh and a quick work of warning, you can only learn the full chart for your primary, so be sure you think about what you want your growth to be before you commit to one.
Normally I wouldnt make these comments, but why is it even though this would be the first, at least that I can recall right now, character this time around to have dead parents it steel feels horribly cliched and over done? Well, up to you I guess though.
Rest seems to be alright overall. The date is a bit odd considering no years are ever given in Naruto, that and he would be 17 very shortly if he was born at the end of this month. The only true problem here is his age and how easily he became a chuunin. Now I know people like their characters to be super badass and do things simply, but I have to figure given his past he really wouldnt be able to pull this off.
Oh well, I tend to rant when I get sleepy. You can ignore all that if you want, unless the staff who goes over this later agrees with all of it, the only part of this you have to worry about is the jutsu part.