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Naruto Jiyuu > Technique Chart/Bloodline Registration > Saru Clan Bloodlines


Posted by: Fuutonshinobi Mar 25 2007, 12:28 AM
Name:Saru Clan Bloodlines
Village: Leaf
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Rank: Saru Clan
Description: The Saru Clans members live in jungles in trees. The villagers always thougt they were weird. Every clan member has an ape companion. Clan members age 1-20 has a monkey. Clan members age 20-40 has a gorilla. Clan members age 40 and up has an oranutang. Even if a member isn't an actual ninja, they still have a companion.


Nomingo
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Chakra: 1,000
Type: Supplementary
Description: The user can see how long(days,months,years,ect.) thier enemy will stay alive,but the only downfall is that thay do not how or why.And its temporary

Regeki lvl 1
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Chakra: N/A
Type: Attack
Age:1-20
Description: The users body gets the chakra outline of a monkey and abilitys of the monkey, like monkey speed.

Regeki lvl 2
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Chakra: 2,000
Type: Attack
Age:20-40
Description: The users body gets the chakra outline of a gorilla and abilitys of the gorilla, like gorilla sterangth.

Regeki lvl 3
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Chakra: 3,000
Type: Attack
Age:40 and up
Description: The users body gets the chakra outline of an orageutang and abilitys of the orageutang, like orageutang wisdom.

Posted by: Omega2042 Mar 25 2007, 01:00 AM
Apart from being the wrong format and lacking vital information that all charts needs, those jutsu wont be accepted. They dont fit in with Naruto very well and they are overpowered.

Posted by: Fuutonshinobi Mar 25 2007, 03:11 PM
ok im still working on it so hold on

Posted by: Fuutonshinobi Mar 29 2007, 12:13 PM
ok so far done

Posted by: Omega2042 Mar 29 2007, 09:12 PM
First of all, you dont put what village this is for. Next you dont have a history of the bloodline nor do you explain what the trait is.

Next all the jutsu are off as well. The first is just a no, it has GM writen all over it, plus this isnt Death Note. The other three are just too cheap in terms of chakra, plus they are vauge with the exact effect. I mean how strong are you?

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