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 Kulmiye Idris
Kulmiye
Posted: Jan 28 2006, 11:47 PM


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Kulmiyes bloodline is a way to keep chakra held up in the body. The user has his chakra then also a chakra puch which holds an extrodinay amount of chakra for times of great use.

Clan:Idris
Name:Kulmiye Idris
type:taijutsu


Rage anami no jutsu
Type: taijutsu
Chakra: N/A
Description: The user releases a small amount of the held chakra to increase his perfromance in attack. Speed increases and so does strength.


Kani no jutso
type: Taijutsu
Chakra: N/A
Description: The user releases more chakra to not only improve his performence but to also begin using jutsu's without the attacker noticing. The chakra around the user is seen.

Sugi No jutsu
Type:Taijutsu
Chakra:5,000
Description:The user must be of the clan and must be able to release small amounts od chakra at a time. With one handseal the person can teleport to diffrent areas around a small area. This move when executed has a 30 second cool down and is better for transportation then fighting.


Magi no jutsu
Type:Genjutsu
Chakra:5,000
The user must be from the clan and must be able to release chakra from the chakra puch. This move allows the user to surround a body part with the illusion of pumping chakra. when this attack hits it gives the illusion of the opponet being sliced but the enemy will not actually be sliced. Just the pain will be felt.


Full no jutsu
Type: Taijutsu
Chakra: 10,000
Description: The user releases the full amount of chakra. At this point the chakra is not only seen but the attackers/allies can ffeel the power like a very strong wind.
The person's performance is times by 2. This last for 5 post



Cooli No Jutsu
Type:taijutsu
Chakra:20,000
Description: like full no jutsu user does that but also this turns the chakra to a black and the user gains wings of light like an angel. His performence is times by 100. The only problem is that the user is only aloud 10 posts mins of this after he is fully paralized for two hours.
((Caution: If the user uses this and time runs out without an escape from the enemy or death of enemy the user can be killed without the permission of attacker.))
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Kintaro
Posted: Jan 28 2006, 11:55 PM


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Had it in the wrong place man. Moved it for ya... you gotta try to register charts first and you are doing it wrong =P

First off use the format please. Next these moves are kinda >_> over powered slightly? The last one seems to copy Choujis clan technique as well. On top of that dry.gif N/A in chakra means a genin can start with it which = NONO.
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Uchiha Satori
Posted: Jan 29 2006, 12:14 AM


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Alright, ok.. This seems like an interesting concept, but is somewhat under developed. When you say that your character stores chakra in his body.. do you mean like Tsunade does? With the seal on her forehead?

If so, that could be work able.. but you need a better description of HOW it works, and exactly how much chakra it stores. I mean, a genin shouldn't be able to hold as much as a jounin for example. Also, using jutsu without being seen? How does that go?


Then um, you made a typo at the start, I think it ment to say that they held a pouch filled with chakra.. I don't see how that works at all. I mean, even if they somehow put someone's chakra in a sack.. how could they use it?

When you think of your clan.. ask yourself those questions, so you can make it a bit more complete. If you have any comments or questions post 'em here, otherwise PM me.
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Kulmiye
Posted: Jan 30 2006, 11:31 PM


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Well the chakra pouch is just like the how the clan with sharingan is to that the body is diffrent.

He has all his internal organs, but there is a puch from only the ppl of his clan has which stores chakra. its not and actual puch but an invisable chakra lined pouch. Its like how naruto keeps all that chakra in rasenga but yets it's in the body and is stored. It's meant for the genin. On what rank he is, is how much his performance is increased. When I say jutu's u can't see I mean with some nin, it takes a lil to do all the hand shapes. i mean his hands become so fast theres no time to try to inturrupt the hand seals.
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