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Naruto Jiyuu > Technique Chart/Bloodline Registration > A continuation of Kurokami Yukio's bloodline


Posted by: Kuroukami Yukio May 4 2006, 03:34 AM
This is just a continuation. I just figured I should add a lil more since my bloodline had very little in it.



Kageheki
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 8,000
Desc: The user lets lose a circular shield of reinforced shadow, blocking strong taijutsu and ninjutsu. Due to the shield being pure shadow, this sheild can be created within a 10 meter radius of the user


Kage Genkotsu
Type: Taijutsu and Ninjutsu
Chakra: 6,500
Desc: User creates shadow and binds it to their hands. While the user attacks, he can detach the shadow at anytime. Therefore, this jutsu can also be used to throw shadow like projectiles. The projectiles are about 2 inches larger, in diameter, than a fist. The Genkotsu, when striking an opponent, sticks to the opponent, binding movement in the part that is struck, for a short period of time.

Tenrai Kage(Divine Shadow)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 4,000
Desc: By taking particles out of the air, and binding it with a very small amount of shadow, the user is able to create temporary shadow. Useful for defensive tactics, such as blocking attacks, but cannot block strong ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques. The user waves his hand, using the technique, and shadow is created, blocking the oncoming attack. This shadow disappears in 2-3 seconds unless it is constantly barraged with particles and shadow, in which it would have to stay on the user. The second it leaves the user's body, it disapparates.

Mass Shadow Creation no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 10,000
(Used With Kagegan)
Desc: The user mass creates shadow and lets it loose on the ground. The shadow then expands on the ground to a radius of about 20 feet. The user can then create clones and can attack with the shadow. The opponent must be inside or just barely outside of this ring to be attacked

Kage Terepo-to(Shadow Teleport)
(Used with Mass Shadow Creation no Jutsu)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 14,000
Desc: The user, while inside of the Mass Shadow Creation Jutsu, can teleport instantaneously within it. This allows from some ridiculously fast attacks. Extended use of this could prove dangerous to the body, however.

Kage Karabu
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 16,000
Desc: A light(in weight) club of shadow, simple enough. However, the shadow is a special type of shadow that is only moldable by the members of the kurokami clan. By adding one's own blood to the shadow, the shadow drains chakra as it touches the opponent. This sword cannot peirce the body, but simple lands bluntly against the victim, causing bruises and draining small amounts of chakra. Likewise, the more chakra it drains, the heavier the club gets.

Kageru(to darken)
Type: Genjutsu
Chakra: 20,000
Desc: By spreading low concentrations of shadow around the area, a black hazey mist fills the area, making it impossible to see clearly.

Posted by: Kuroukami Yukio May 7 2006, 01:31 AM
feel free to post whenever....

Posted by: Omega2042 May 7 2006, 08:41 AM
OK, so here is what your chart will look like if all this gets accepted:
  • Torimadosu (means "to regain"
    Type: Bloodline
    Chakra: N/A
    Desc: Without Chakra losage, the user may regenerate small wounds and also cannot be killed by instant death blows. Although, instant death will be avoided, the user will still be very weak and Chakra requirements for jutsus will triple for non bloodline techs and double for bloodline techs.

  • Kage Genkou No Jutsu (Shadow Copy Technique)
    Type: Bloodline
    Chakra: 2,000
    Desc: This is simply a Clone made of shadows. Due to the difficulty of shaping a body with chakra, especially molding it with shadow, the chakra drain of this technique is hardly negligable. The bunshin acts like a regular bunshin no jutsu, only once hit and destroyed, the shadow clings to the opponent for a short period of time( maybe 2 seconds)

  • Kata Shifuto(Shape Shift)
    Type: Bloodline
    Chakra: 4000
    Desc: This allows the user to shift into animals or inatimate objects. This ability is required to be an accepted member of the Kurokami clan.

  • Tenrai Kage(Divine Shadow)
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Chakra: 4,000
    Desc: By taking particles out of the air, and binding it with a very small amount of shadow, the user is able to create temporary shadow. Useful for defensive tactics, such as blocking attacks. The user waves his hand, using the technique, and shadow is created, blocking the oncoming attack. This shadow disappears in 2-3 seconds unless it is constantly barraged with particles and shadow, in which it would have to stay on the user. The second it leaves the user's body, it disapparates.

  • Kagegan(Shadow Eye)
    Type: Bloodline Doujutsu
    Chakra: 5000
    Desc: Kurokami doujutsu. This chakra drainage is only for activating the Kagegan. The activation of the Kagegan simply allows the user to see concentration of shadow and to see in the dark.

  • Kage
    (Used with Kagegan)
    Type: Bloodline
    Chakra: 6500
    Desc: The Ability to control and manipulate shadows. This technique is difficult to master since when the shadow wraps around the opponent, the user must add large amounts of chakra to the shadow itself since shadow is not material matter.

  • Kage Genkotsu
    Type: Taijutsu and Ninjutsu
    Chakra: 6,500
    Desc: User creates shadow and binds it to their hands. While the user attacks, he can detach the shadow at anytime. Therefore, this jutsu can also be used to throw shadow like projectiles.

  • Kageheki
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Chakra: 8,000
    Desc: The user lets lose a circular shield of reinforced shadow, blocking strong taijutsu and ninjutsu.

  • Kashou(Burn)
    (Used with Kagegan)
    Type: Bloodline Doujutsu technique
    Chakra: 10,000
    Desc: This simple chars the skin of the victim by putting the enemy in a genjutsu of his worst fear. Although as terrifying as this sounds, the burn is very minor. The main purpose for this jutsu is to scar the mind of the opponent.

  • Mass Shadow Creation no Jutsu
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Chakra: 10,000
    (Used With Kagegan)
    Desc: The user mass creates shadow and lets it loose on the ground. The shadow then expands on the ground to about 20 feet. The user can then create clones and can attack with the shadow. The opponent must be inside or just barely outside of this ring to be attacked

  • Buraindo(Blind)
    (Used with Kagegan)
    Type: "
    Chakra: 15,000
    Desc: This simple immobilizes the opponent by blinding them with shadows.

  • Kage Katana
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Chakra: 16,000
    Desc: A katana of shadow, simple enough. However, the shadow is a special type of shadow that is only moldable by the members of the kurokami clan. By adding one's own blood to the shadow, the shadow drains chakra as it touches the opponent. This sword cannot peirce the body, but simple lands bluntly against the victim, causing bruises and draining small amounts of chakra. Likewise, the more chakra it drains, the heavier the sword gets.

  • Kageru(to darken)
    Type: Genjutsu
    Chakra: 20,000
    Desc: By spreading low concentrations of shadow around the area, a black hazey mist fills the area, making it impossible to see clearly.

  • Kagegan Level 2
    Type Doujutsu
    Chakra: 30,000
    Desc: The appearence of the eye stays exactly the same. The Kagegan is able to create shadow instantaneously. The amount of shadow creation potential is dependant on the user's chakra and the amount of light in the area. Less light= less chakra to make shadow. The Kagegan can also use the other Kagegan Jutsus with 1/4th of the chakra taken off the requrement.

  • Kage Baindo no Jutsu(Shadow Bind)
    (Used with Kagegan 3)
    Type: Bloodline
    Chakra: 45,000
    Desc: Using a Kage Bunshin bloodline ability or using his own body, the user is able to fuse with the shadow of the victim and bind all movement of the victim. This jutsu cannot harm anyone or cannot be chained with any jutsu due to the immense chakra drain.

  • Kokushibyo(Black Death)
    (Used with Kagegan)
    Type: "
    Chakra: 50,000
    Desc: This gives a major burn to a body part of the opponent. The only catch is that in order to succeed in this, the user must also experience the genjutsu with the victim. This is because this technique requires the users blood to work. Therefore the user is in the genjutsu till he bleeds in real time which could take many hours.

  • Kagegan Level 3
    Type Doujutsu
    Chakra: 75,000
    Desc: This causes immense strain on the body as well as the eyes. Extended use of this doujutsu can potentially blind the user permenantly. With this doujutsu, the user is able to fuse with shadows and move around, totally hidden.

  • Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Shadow Dog
    Type: Bloodline Summon
    Chakra: 85,000
    Desc: This summons a single shadow dog to fight or train with you. The Shadow Dog has moderate fighting ability and requires pretty high amount of chakra.

  • Kage Kujiku(Shadow Crush)
    (Used with Kagegan 3 and chained with Kage Baindo No Jutsu
    Type Bloodline
    Chakra: 100,000
    Desc: After using Kage Baindo No Jutsu, the user is able to crush the victim much like Sabaku Sousou. The strain is very little but calls for an immense amount of chakra.

  • Kuchibi(Fusion)
    Type: Bloodline
    Chakra: 120,000
    Desc: You may fuse with your dog for a short period of time. This increase all stats by quite a bit, but requires immense chakra.
Well, there are all 20 of your clan's jutsus. Now, lets look at the new ones you want to add:

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Kageheki
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 8,000
Desc: The user lets lose a circular shield of reinforced shadow, blocking strong taijutsu and ninjutsu.


Looks fine, the standard rules for barriers are still around though.

QUOTE
Kage Genkotsu
Type: Taijutsu and Ninjutsu
Chakra: 6,500
Desc: User creates shadow and binds it to their hands. While the user attacks, he can detach the shadow at anytime. Therefore, this jutsu can also be used to throw shadow like projectiles.


Its unclear exactly what type of attack this does. When the shadow detaches what exactly does it do from there? What is the general size of the projectile?

QUOTE
Tenrai Kage(Divine Shadow)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 4,000
Desc: By taking particles out of the air, and binding it with a very small amount of shadow, the user is able to create temporary shadow. Useful for defensive tactics, such as blocking attacks. The user waves his hand, using the technique, and shadow is created, blocking the oncoming attack. This shadow disappears in 2-3 seconds unless it is constantly barraged with particles and shadow, in which it would have to stay on the user. The second it leaves the user's body, it disapparates.


It seems as though this isnt really needed if you already have that shield. Feel free to make a case for it if you want.

QUOTE
Mass Shadow Creation no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 10,000
(Used With Kagegan)
Desc: The user mass creates shadow and lets it loose on the ground. The shadow then expands on the ground to about 20 feet. The user can then create clones and can attack with the shadow. The opponent must be inside or just barely outside of this ring to be attacked


Is that 20 feet the radius or the diameter? It makes a big different depending on which it is.

QUOTE
Kage Terepo-to(Shadow Teleport)
(Used with Mass Shadow Creation no Jutsu)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 14,000
Desc: The user, while inside of the Mass Shadow Creation Jutsu, can teleport instantaneously within it. This allows from some ridiculously fast attacks. Extended use of this could prove dangerous to the body, however.


Powerful, but has a strict side effect so it works.

QUOTE
Kage Katana
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 16,000
Desc: A katana of shadow, simple enough. However, the shadow is a special type of shadow that is only moldable by the members of the kurokami clan. By adding one's own blood to the shadow, the shadow drains chakra as it touches the opponent. This sword cannot peirce the body, but simple lands bluntly against the victim, causing bruises and draining small amounts of chakra. Likewise, the more chakra it drains, the heavier the sword gets.


Looks fine, although why not just call it a club?

QUOTE
Kageru(to darken)
Type: Genjutsu
Chakra: 20,000
Desc: By spreading low concentrations of shadow around the area, a black hazey mist fills the area, making it impossible to see clearly


Another version of the Hidden Mist, so I guess it would be hard to not OK it.

Posted by: Kuroukami Yukio May 8 2006, 10:02 PM
yeh...well about Divine Shadow.

The Kageheki can block powerful ninjutsu, while the divine shadow can block ninjutsu and small projectiles. In other words, kageheki is just a beefed up version of divine shadow. Also, kageheki is created with large amounts of shadow, but divine shadow is created with little, so the kageheki can be created from a large range, while the divine shadow must be connected to the user. Divine shadow is used for more close quarters combat, while kageheki is used against very large projectiles like goukakyuu etc. No way in hell it could block things like Amataratsu. Plus, the kageheki is impossible to move around at a decent speed. So in short, Divine Shadow is used for close quarters defensive meneuvers and is weaker than kageheki. Kageheki blocks stronger ninjutsu attacks but cannot be moved very fast at all.

Also, on Kage Genkotsu. The shadow wraps around the fist and is about...2 inches thick maybe? It was about 1.5 times bigger than a fist, so not too overpowered. The shadow does stick to the opponent for a short period of time. When the Genkotsu is on the fist, it beefs up the strength of taijutsu attacks a little.

On Kage Katana, yah i think i will change it to...Kage Karabu. Straight forward and simple.

Also, the chakra reqs on accepted ninja are incorrect. The ones on Ninja Registration are the correct reqs. Satori changed around the reqs because they were too high.

Posted by: Kuroukami Yukio May 10 2006, 02:37 AM
Ok i added more descriptiveness and shtuff

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