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Posted by: Smaz Ugonih May 18 2007, 08:15 PM
Character Name: Sheimasu 'Arashi' Ugonih (Smaz)
Rank: Chuunin
Character Age: 17
Character Height: 6'1''
Characters Weight: A thin 9 stone
Starting Village: Hidden Mist Village
Primary Element: Lightning
Secondary Element: Water
Animal Companion: No.
Character Appearance: Sheimasu has a personal issue with showing his flesh off, and thus wears everything long. He sports long, black hair, which eventually is platted near the bottom. It is tied by a small headband with the Mist symbol upon it. His clothing is of a long sleeved undershirt of the colour purple, which above is a dark black garment of sorts, which effectively acts like a long jacket, splitting off into two separate parts at the bottom. It is rimmed with the colour silver. The leggings are also of the colour black, with traditional sandels on the bottom, with purple socks as long as he could have. He also wears small silver gloves to cover his hands. Finally, his iris colours are of a teal colour.

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History: At birth, the Arashi clan could always use their 'Eyes of Mist', allowing them similar abilities as the Hyuuga clan. However, when Sheimasu was born to the wisest clan in the village, he was born without such a profound ability. His parents angered at him for it, they attempted to hide their shame from the village and threw Sheimasu out to the wild, in which to survive, he must learn of the 'Eye of Mist' ability.

During this period, Sheimasu ended up at a small Lightning Village in the middle of nowhere. almost dead as a young boy. It was here that Sheimasu was taken in from a small family. Sheimasu lived, thanks to them, but claimed his parents were dead... and with his hair-tie sporting the Mist icon snapped and lost along the way, there was no way of them telling he was from the Mist Village.

Learning from the single parent mother and her son, Shimigaru, Sheimasu eventually found hospice and enrolled at the ninja academy, hoping to find a greater meaning to his life. He considered Shimigaru his twin brother, and both enrolled together, learning from each other under the Ugonih family name. His foster mother nick-named him Smaz. Smaz eventually learns of electrical juutsu's... and almost learns to use his Eyes of Mist. To no avail. It is a lost ability to him and one he shall never learn... with it's only mark on him as giving him colourblindness.

Then on fateful day... the Mist Village attacked the small Raiton village in he dead of night. It was an equal battle and many died... and Smaz fought valiantly against his past, until... he came up against his own father. He didn't recognize Smaz, at first, but upon seeing Smaz's eyes, he was horrified to battle his own son. Not wanting Smaz to even live due to his inability to learn the 'Eyes of Mist', he tried to kill Smaz then and there. At the last possible moment of the large ice crystal connecting Smaz's body, his foster mother jumped in the way, impaled upon the ice. In a few short minutes, she was dead.

Angry, Smaz and Shimigaru faced Smaz's father together. In a horrific clash, Smaz is beaten, with his foster brother, but the Lightning village eventually prevail against the Mist Village. In final torture, Smaz's father tells them that Smaz is his son, and thus Smaz is outcast from the lightning village for good, to return to the Mist Village under his mother's care.

After a small while, the clan realize Smaz still does not know the ability and rejects him as part of their clan. His father is ashamed at his son and disregarded him for good. His father long went away to forget about his failure of a son, and to seek his own life, to perhaps return to the village one day.

As a result, Smaz is a loner of sorts, and keeps himself to himself, never giving his love to anyone truly. His mother is the only person who comes close, as she does not reject Smaz. Proving his worth, Smaz is forced to enter the Chuunin exams. If he became a Chuunin, the clan would somewhat accept him. If not, he would be killed. Proving his worth, Smaz eventually passes, and generally was accepted. He still is yet to be accepted by everyone. Now a Chuunin, he sets out to start his life, again, in the Hidden Mist Village, with his first bunch of missions...

Starting Jutsu - Elemental Tree:
Raiton: Seidenki Dageki (Lightning Element: Static Shock)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: N/A
Description: A technique often used for training more than actual combat. The shinobi is taught the basis of conducting electricity and using chakra to amplify it to the point where it can harm some one. The shinobi rubs his hands together until they produce a normal size static shock and use chakra to increase the strength by a very minute. Upon having their hand come within one foot of an enemy a small but visible bolt of static electricity is released. The bolt isnít strong enough to actually damage the enemy other than make them yelp but it causes the limb to twitch slightly. Not stun or paralysis them, just make the limb twitch.

Raiton: Yure Ranpu (Lightning Element: Flickering Light)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: N/A
Description: A very simple technique that is used as a signal flare more than anything. The shinobi causes his body to light up like a blue streak of lightning for up to two posts. The light cannot blind anyone, cannot harm anyone, and the shinobi cannot move while it is on. While the technique is active he can turn the light on and off really fast for morose code or signs.

Raiton: Hibana (Lightning Element: Sparks)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 2,500
Description: Raiton: Hibana is often used to create small fires than actually hurt someone although that doesnít mean it doesnít have its offensive moments. The shinobi creates a surge of chakra to his index finger and his thumb. Upon snapping them a wave of small sparks is unleashed capable of causing slight burns, starting fires, or blinding an enemy.

Raiton: Raikou Touza (Lightning Element: Lightning Current)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 7,500
Description: The shinob transfers an electrical current into their weapon or a projectile so that upon the next hit it can cause a slight shock. The real use of this technique is that when someone blocks it with a metallic weapon it travels through their weapon and shocks them anyway.

Raiton: Mahi Dageki (Lightning Element: Paralysis Shock)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 7,500
Description: The shinobi creates a visible ball of electric energy in the palm of their hands. Upon coming within a foot of their target the ball erupts out into a very visible and very fast beam capable of knocking a shinobi over. If it makes contact the shinobi is stunned for one post and if held out the shinobi is stunned for every post it is held. Neither the enemy or the shinobi holding it can move if it is held out for more than one post. (Can be held out for a max of three posts)

Raiton: Raikou Sen (Lightning Element: Lightning Beam)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 10,000
Description: The first real offensive technique of this tree. The shinobi concentrates chakra into their fist and releases it in the form of a concentrated blue beam which travels at the speed of a projectile. Anything touched by the beam will suffer a very painful shock and a first degree burn.

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ABILITIES YET TO LEARN:

Raiton: Raikou Hirate (Lightning Element: Lightning Palm)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 12,500
Description: The shinobi slams both of his palms into the ground and sends a surge of chakra into it. Once the chakra leaves the body it instantly turns into lightning which travels extremely fast across the ground. When touched by the lightning an enemy will be launched into the air and suffer several painful burns on their feet or legs. Two may be launched at a time and in separate directions if one wishes.

Raiton: Heki (Lightning Element: Burst)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 15,000
Description: An odd technique that can be either defensive or offensive. The shinobi releases a surge of chakra from their hands that extends out to about two feet and spreads up and down covering the entire width and height of the body. Anyone hit by the technique will be caught in a massive shock capable of continuously shocking them for two posts or if used in a defensive manor it can block ninjutsu up to 15k chakra. Obviously a taijutsu user wants to avoid this technique.

Raiton: Kusari Raikou (Lightning Element: Chain Lightning)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 20,000
Description: A powerful technique that officially marks the devastation of this tree. The shinobi releases a very fast arc of lightning from their hands capable of causing second degree burns to what ever part of the body it hits. After it hits the lightning can either chain off to another body part or a totally new shinobi. It can jump up to three times before dying.

Raiton: Kouatsu (Lightning Element: 20,000 Volts)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 25,000
Description: A dangerous, yet powerful jutsu. The user concentrates enough lightning onto their own body to create a field of 200,000 volts on themselves. While when first created they will be shielded from the lightning, that shield will soon break. Before that happens they must release the energy into something else. Simply getting close to someone is enough to transfer all of it.

Raikiri
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 30,000
Description: A very famous technique often used in assassination plots. The shinobi uses an entire post to charge their hand with lightning causing it to release the energy in every direction. The next post the shinobi can plunge their hand into a target and because of the lightning it is capable of cutting nearly any substance. Raikiri may only be used twice a thread, three times if the shinobi reaches 75k chakra.

Raiton: Raiu (Lightning Element: Lightning Storm)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 45,000
Description: A very powerful jutsu. It creates a thunderstorm by the user. Unlike with normal thunderstorms, the user can aim where, and how often, the lightning strikes. The downside of this powerful jutsu is that it takes almost all of the chakra of the user to perform, and if the user loses their concentration the storm will run out of control.

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Academic Tree:

Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: N/A
Description: This technique must be mastered by any ninja who has graduated from the Academy at the Hidden Mist Village. It's the most basic technique a Genin must know, since it can be a real lifesaver. This ninjutsu creates an illusional clone of the user.

Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is the basic skill a ninja must know to become a Genin. It is a very useful and widely used skill in the series, as it has many uses. It's mostly used as a decoy, to confuse the opponent by transforming into somebody that's an ally with the enemy.

Genjutsu Kai (Genjutsu Release)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: N/A
Description: A Ninjutsu technique where the ninja focuses their chakra and screams "kai" or "release." They can perform it on themselves or on others. It will effectively ward off most Genjutsu, unless extremely powerful or when used in conjunction with an advanced bloodline.

Oboro Bushin no Jutsu (Mist Clone Technique)
Type Ninjutsu
Chakra: 2,000
Description: A Ninjutsu technique similar to the Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique), as these clones cannot attack. Whether or not they are made out of mist is hard to tell, but they are immaterial and will disperse when attacked.

Kinobori/Kabenobori no Jutsu (Tree/Wall Walking Technique)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 2,500
Description: By focusing a proper amount of chakra into the feet, the user is able to walk on walls and trees.

Kiri Shunshin no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 2,500
Description: A technique which allows the user to transport from one place to another in a veil of mist. (Not to be used in battle)

Suimen Hokou no Gyou (Water Walking)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 5,000
Description: By focusing their chakra in a similar manner to the Kinobori technique, the user is able to balance over the surface of water, allowing them to walk and run freely.

Kawarimi no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 5,000
Description: The Body Substitute skill is a widely used and very famous skill among shinobis. Put simply, the user uses speed to his/her advantage, and grabs an item from the environment and places it on his/her current position while moving out of the way.

Mizu Bushin no Jutsu (Water Clone no Jutsu)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 5,000
Description: This Ninjutsu technique uses water as its base for creating the clones. Each clone is one tenth as powerful as the ninja using it and has a limited range it can move away from its creator. Like the Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Shadow Clone Technique), this clone can attack.

Kirigakure no Jutsu (Hidden Mist Technique)
Type: Genjutsu
Chakra: 10,000
Description: A Ninjutsu technique that covers the area surrounding the ninja using it completely in mist. Perfect for silent killing, since there's practically no visibility within the area of this jutsu.

Posted by: Smaz Ugonih May 31 2007, 05:18 PM
Yup, just changed a few things around. Primarily the name to Sheimasu. I also am posting in a hope that someone will look at this again character, again. We'll see.

Posted by: Omega2042 Jun 7 2007, 11:21 AM
ACCEPTED with the condition that you change the justu you know down to 10K and below. Chuunin start with 10K and not 15K.

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