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Naruto Jiyuu > Technique Chart/Bloodline Registration > Kaname bloodline


Posted by: NightFire Apr 23 2006, 07:13 PM
Clan Name: Kaname
Name of Bloodline Technique: Korusogane Eye
Description: A bloodline seemingly not far from that of the Sharingan. It is believed that at one point, the people of this line once shared a common relative with that of the Uchiha clan. Unlike the Uchiha, who's legendary sharingan is very well known, the Kaname have kept their Korusogane eye very well hidden.

Few in the Kaname clan ever used their korusogane eye, fearing others hatred of them, and possible killing of the members of the clan.Because of this, few ever mastered it and its true potential. But one member of the Kaname clan discovered it, and mastered its first level. His lust for power led him to leave his village, and become more powerful. But, he was tracked down, and killed.

So, his wife was forced to leave, carrying their unborn child, to the village hidden in the leaves, the only place that would take him. Now the Kaname clan call the village hidden in the leaves their home. Most shinobi from this family are of average strength, though they have hidden power that most of them never discover or use. Those that learn to use their Korusogane eye, tend to have even moreso than usual.

But, rather than flaunt themselves, this family prefers to try and keep normal lives. Or, at least normal for a shinobi.(NOTE: Please pm me if you wish to join in this clan. I am debating on how many that I will allow in it.)
  • Korusogane eye
    Type: kekki genkai
    Chakra: N/A
    Description: Causes the iris to go a neon green.. This increases the users site, to the point that they notice slight movements. Though, it takes much training to be able to only notice the important things. This also to some degree makes it easier to track fast movements and help see through genjutsu.
  • Namari Kaname no jutsu (Kaname special mark jutsu)
    Type: Kekki Genkai
    Chakra: N/A
    Description: This is a technique that only the kaname clan knows how to do. It is the branding placed on a newborn baby of the clan. The branding is done wherever the parents choose to place it,l though it is usually on the shoulderblade of the child. (NOTE: Here is an image of the branding-
  • Asari no jutsu(search jutsu)
    Type: Kekki Genkai
    Chakra: N/A
    Description: Every child of the Kaname clan is branded by a special technique by their parents when they are born. With much training, the tatoo is able to leave the body in order to scout an area. This is somewhat painful, though after many uses, the pain is ignorable.
  • Torusa no jutsu(water spitter jutsu)
    Type: ninjutsu
    Chakra: 850
    Description: The user spits out a series of small balls of water, which while flying at the enemy, freeze into icicles. They tend to be no larger than 4 or 5 inches.
  • Hyoton: Mizu Gaeshi
    Type: ninjutsu
    Chakra: 5000
    Description: The user puts their hand on the ground, and then pulls up, leaving a trail of water behind, which quickly freezes. This creates a weak barrier between them and their attacker.
  • Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu (Water Doppelganger Technique)
    Type: ninjutsu
    Chakra 7600
    Description: Creates physical copies of the user. Though, these have 2 problems. Usually one hit destroys them. And they are essentially water in the appearance of the user.
  • Korusogane eye (level 2)
    Type: vision
    Chakra 10000
    Description: There is only one distinction between this level of the korusogane eye eye, and the first one. In this level, the users eye fade from neon green, to a neon blue. This level allows the user to see even more clearly. Track quicker movements, and see through more powerful jutsu.
  • Doragonken (Dragon blade)
    Type: Fire
    Chakra 10500
    Description: The user uses three handsigns, and then the last hand sign is the right hand is a fist, with the palm pointing towards the ground. The left hand is flat against the side of the hand. The user then pulls their hands apart, leaving a trail of water, that quickly freezes. This is a very advanced technique and takes a lot of chakra. The icicle is now in their right hand, and they use it like a sword. (NOTE: If the user is left handed, then the hands are reversed as such.)

Posted by: Omega2042 Apr 23 2006, 11:42 PM
Now if you want to make a bloodline you will have to put more effort into it than a normal chart. You will need to make a history for the clan, it doesnt have to be long, but its needed to give an idea behind how old it is and how famous it is. You also have to say which village it is in.

As a tip, there really isnt enough here to make a strong clan. You might want to expand it and add a few more jutsus, but you dont have to.

Posted by: NightFire Apr 23 2006, 11:52 PM
My plan was to add a couple more jutsu. I just was waiting for my mind to have some kind of burst of inspiration. So it isn't done yet. I forgot to put that in the thing. But, I am currently working on it.

Most likely I will have that burst during school tomarrow.

Posted by: NightFire Apr 25 2006, 11:11 PM
Sorry for the double post, But I finished!!!

Posted by: Omega2042 Apr 27 2006, 01:46 AM
First of all the History is a bit off.

1) In 400 years its highly unlikely that only one person would be able to use it.

2) Villages want nothing else then to protect their bloodlines. Even if the members tend to be a bit crazy, they still would do everything they can to keep them.

Now onto the chart itself.

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Korusogane eye
Type: Vision
Chakra: N/A
Description: Causes the iris to go a neon green.. This increases the users site, to the point that they notice slight movements. Though, it takes much training to be able to only notice the important things. This also to some degree makes it easier to track fast movements and help see through genjutsu.


This just seems like a watered down Sharingan. You took off the ability to copy and changed what the eyes look like.

To save both of us some time here are the problems I have with this bloodline:

1) As stated above this is basically a weak Sharingan.

2) The jutsus in the chart are also similar in style to the Uchiha clan. With the exception of the one earth jutsu, which doesnt seem to fit in with the rest of it.

All in all it seems like a variation on the Uchiha clan.

Posted by: NightFire Apr 27 2006, 09:16 PM
1) I think it over and see what I can do

2)I talked to another admin, and he said it was fine that they have left their old village.

3)The point is supposed to be it's similarity to the Sharingan. In case you missed it, it says that it was thought at one point to have been closly related to that of the Sharingan. And I can take out the earth jutsu if need be.

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