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Posted by: Ds14 May 4 2006, 02:43 AM
The first half should be renamed Hana-Ouji: Defensive Stance and this new one should be under it and named Hana-Ouji: Offensive Stance And it'd be great if you could change the name from "Flower Power" to "Hana-Ouji Style".

Hana-Ouji: Offensive Stance

Kakigan 2(or Kakigan- Offensive Style)
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Chakra: N/A
Description: Unlike the original Kakigan, this version of the Kakigan gives the user a yellow iris and pink pupil. It allows a user to do different techniques than the Defensive Stance Kakigan(Kakigan 1)
Unknown requirements to achieve.


Hana Henge no Jutsu-
Type: Ninjutsu(Can not be Kai'd[made up a word there])
Chakra: 500(plus knowledge and complete memorization of anatomy of the plant)
Description: User can turn into a plant they have memorized the physical structure of.

Hana no Wana
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 7,000
Description: Much like the defensive genjutsu, Hana no Wana, this actually does ensnare an opponent in a vine or flower stem.

Roketto Gahou no Jutsu (Rocket Spore no Jutsu)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 10,000
Description: A burst of any spore the user of the jutsu is able to duplicate is shot out of a large flower that grows from the user's hand. If used against an opponent, it will knock them backwards explosively and if used on the ground, the user will be shot *high* into the air.

leaf Transport no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 2,000
Description: A user can change any small leaf into a large one capable of keeping them aloft at great heights. (Gliding, not flying)

Gogahou no Jutsu (Five spores no Jutsu)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: See Below
Description: Spores that originate from a small swab applied to the user's body multipy and cause effects on opponents. To add the element of surprise, one does not need to say the name of the type of spore they are activating.
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Spore 1: Hypnotic Spore - Puts an opponent within 3,000 chakra above and any amount below into a state of semi-sleep. During the time in this state, the user can command that person to do anything within their normal ability.
Chakra: 5,000

Spore 2: Poisonous Spore- Causes nausea, vomiting, and muscle spasms/pain to anyone that breathes them in.
Chakra: 5000

Spore 3: Rapidly Reproducing Spore- This spore's ideal habitat is inside of the human body. Although it is aerobic and cannot survive when soaked in water and can be killed by high temperatures, if they are inside of a shinobi, they will rapidly propagate and weigh down the victim. They will also make breathing hard, but not nearly impossible. If left untreated for too long, the spore may invade other tissues or brain and possibly kill the victim.
Chakra: 7,000

Spore 4: Paralysis Spore- Causes a victim who is 5.000 chakra or less above the user to be immobile for one post. Anyone within 5,000 below for two posts. Anyone below 5,000 to be immobile for 2. If three times the chakra of the victim, they will be immobile for 4 posts.
Chakra: 7,000

Spore 5: Chakra Sealing Spore- Same chakra limits as paralysis spore, but this spore has its own chakra that blocks a victims chakra from the inside out.
Chakra: 10,000
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Botanical Animation
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: Gained with Kakigan 2
Description: Can control surrounding plant life. Including growing and shrinking them. They can manipulate woody plants but NOT trees, which are too thick to bend and too large to grow/shrink.

Posted by: Omega2042 May 5 2006, 10:01 AM
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Roketto Gahou no Jutsu (Rocket Spore no Jutsu)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 10,000
Description: A burst of any spore the user of the jutsu is able to duplicate is shot out of a large flower that grows from the user's hand. If used against an opponent, it will knock them backwards explosively and if used on the ground, the user will be shot *high* into the air.


I already said what my problem was with this, so just edit it. Also instead of having "*high*" why not just use very?

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Spore 3: Rapidly Reproducing Spore- This spore's ideal habitat is inside of the human body. Although it is aerobic and cannot survive when soaked in water and can be killed by high temperatures, if they are inside of a shinobi, they will rapidly propagate and weigh down the victim. They will also make breathing hard, but not nearly impossible. If left untreated for too long, the spore may invade other tissues or brain and possibly kill the victim.
Chakra: 7,000


Well, it seems to be impossible for me to look at a chart and not find a problem with one of the jutsus. Anyway, if the spores ideal habitat is inside of a person's body and they hate high temperatures, why do they like being inside a person?

Also I would say all these spores are Taijutsu.

Anyway, I am tired at the moment so I will finish going over it tomorrow.

Posted by: Ds14 May 5 2006, 09:57 PM
QUOTE (Omega2042 @ May 5 2006, 04:01 AM)
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Roketto Gahou no Jutsu (Rocket Spore no Jutsu)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 10,000
Description: A burst of any spore the user of the jutsu is able to duplicate is shot out of a large flower that grows from the user's hand. If used against an opponent, it will knock them backwards explosively and if used on the ground, the user will be shot *high* into the air.


I already said what my problem was with this, so just edit it. Also instead of having "*high*" why not just use very?

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Spore 3: Rapidly Reproducing Spore- This spore's ideal habitat is inside of the human body. Although it is aerobic and cannot survive when soaked in water and can be killed by high temperatures, if they are inside of a shinobi, they will rapidly propagate and weigh down the victim. They will also make breathing hard, but not nearly impossible. If left untreated for too long, the spore may invade other tissues or brain and possibly kill the victim.
Chakra: 7,000


Well, it seems to be impossible for me to look at a chart and not find a problem with one of the jutsus. Anyway, if the spores ideal habitat is inside of a person's body and they hate high temperatures, why do they like being inside a person?

Also I would say all these spores are Taijutsu.

Anyway, I am tired at the moment so I will finish going over it tomorrow.

Yeah, they are tai, but the act of making multiples of them from a small number is ninjutsu.

Btw, they hate VERY high temperatures. Say... colder than boiling water and much warmer than the human body.

Posted by: Ds14 May 6 2006, 03:44 AM

Hana-Ouji: Offensive Stance

Kakigan 2(or Kakigan- Offensive Style)
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Chakra: N/A
Description: Unlike the original Kakigan, this version of the Kakigan gives the user a yellow iris and pink pupil. It allows a user to do different techniques than the Defensive Stance Kakigan(Kakigan 1)
Unknown requirements to achieve.


Hana Henge no Jutsu-
Type: Ninjutsu(Can not be Kai'd[made up a word there])
Chakra: 500(plus knowledge and complete memorization of anatomy of the plant)
Description: User can turn into a plant they have memorized the physical structure of.

Hana no Wana
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 7,000
Description: Much like the defensive genjutsu, Hana no Wana, this actually does ensnare an opponent in a vine or flower stem.

Roketto Gahou no Jutsu (Rocket Spore no Jutsu)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 10,000
Description: A burst of any spore the user of this jutsu is capable of multiplying is shot out of a large flower that grows from the user's hand. If used against an opponent, it will knock them backwards explosively and if used on the ground, the user will be shot very high into the air.

leaf Transport no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 2,000
Description: A user can change any small leaf into a large one capable of keeping them aloft at great heights. (Gliding, not flying)

Gogahou no Jutsu (Five spores no Jutsu)
Type: Ninjutsu to multiply the spores and taijutsu for the effect of the spores themselves.
Chakra: See Below
Description: Spores that originate from a small swab applied to the user's body multipy and cause effects on opponents. To add the element of surprise, one does not need to say the name of the type of spore they are activating.
-------
Spore 1: Hypnotic Spore - Puts an opponent within 3,000 chakra above and any amount below into a state of semi-sleep. During the time in this state, the user can command that person to do anything within their normal ability.
Chakra: 5,000

Spore 2: Poisonous Spore- Causes nausea, vomiting, and muscle spasms/pain to anyone that breathes them in.
Chakra: 5000

Spore 3: Rapidly Reproducing Spore- This spore's ideal habitat is inside of the human body. Although it is aerobic and cannot survive when soaked in water and can be killed by high temperatures, if they are inside of a shinobi, they will rapidly propagate and weigh down the victim. They will also make breathing hard, but not nearly impossible. If left untreated for too long, the spore may invade other tissues or brain and possibly kill the victim.
(To clarify, a killing temperature would be around 120 degrees fahrenheit, well above possible human body temperature.)
Chakra: 7,000

Spore 4: Paralysis Spore- Causes a victim who is 5.000 chakra or less above the user to be immobile for one post. Anyone within 5,000 below for two posts. Anyone below 5,000 to be immobile for 2. If three times the chakra of the victim, they will be immobile for 4 posts.
Chakra: 7,000

Spore 5: Chakra Sealing Spore- Same chakra limits as paralysis spore, but this spore has its own chakra that blocks a victims chakra from the inside out.
Chakra: 10,000
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Botanical Animation
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: Gained with Kakigan 2
Description: Can control surrounding plant life. Including growing and shrinking them. They can manipulate woody plants but NOT trees, which are too thick to bend and too large to grow/shrink.

Posted by: Omega2042 May 7 2006, 09:56 AM
QUOTE
Roketto Gahou no Jutsu (Rocket Spore no Jutsu)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 10,000
Description: A burst of any spore the user of this jutsu is capable of multiplying is shot out of a large flower that grows from the user's hand. If used against an opponent, it will knock them backwards explosively and if used on the ground, the user will be shot very high into the air.


In case you forgot what I mentioned to you, this description is mixed up. So clean it up so I can understand what is going on.

As for the spores, I think that the chakra amounts should be changed. Maybe something like: 5,000-7,000-10,000-12,000-15,000. I am not set on those numbers, but I think they should be spaced out somewhat. You can talk to me about the numbers if you wish.

Posted by: Ds14 May 8 2006, 12:58 AM
QUOTE (Omega2042 @ May 7 2006, 03:56 AM)
QUOTE
Roketto Gahou no Jutsu (Rocket Spore no Jutsu)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 10,000
Description: A burst of any spore the user of this jutsu is capable of multiplying is shot out of a large flower that grows from the user's hand. If used against an opponent, it will knock them backwards explosively and if used on the ground, the user will be shot very high into the air.


In case you forgot what I mentioned to you, this description is mixed up. So clean it up so I can understand what is going on.

As for the spores, I think that the chakra amounts should be changed. Maybe something like: 5,000-7,000-10,000-12,000-15,000. I am not set on those numbers, but I think they should be spaced out somewhat. You can talk to me about the numbers if you wish.

Roketto Gahou no Jutsu (Rocket Spore no Jutsu)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra: 10,000
The user of the technique creates a flower 5 - 10 feet in diameter that grows from the palm of their hand. Out of the center of that flower shoots any previously learned spore of the user's choice at high pressure, in great numbers, and at a high velocity. Enough to spread over wide areas or to launch a user into the air.


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