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Omega2042 - April 12, 2006 06:52 AM (GMT)
I once made a comic featuring the members of another RP I was a member of. Now I have been thinking of making a comic for this site. Now I cant just stick you in without you giving permission. OK, so I can and might if I need another character for the story, but might as well ask anyway. Now, what I made this topic for really was asking two questions:

1) What do you guys think of this idea?

2) What sprite do you want?

I have no talent with drawing, so I use sprites. If you want to see two of the older pages go have a look:

Mazrith986 - April 12, 2006 07:02 AM (GMT)
I like the idea as you know.

As for my sprite i'll get back to you on that.

Vox - April 12, 2006 01:17 PM (GMT)
Sounds good!

Unfortunately, I don't know jack about sprites.

Uchiha Mikyas - April 12, 2006 03:43 PM (GMT)
1) I like the idea. It sounds like a parody of different FF games, is it?

2) My 2nd character, Akimichi Chibi could be in it I guess... He would make an okay character, the sprite would be of Brolly from DBZ.

Omega2042 - April 12, 2006 06:24 PM (GMT)
No no, not your character, but you.

Vox - April 12, 2006 10:00 PM (GMT)
Got anything in a trenchcoat?

Omega2042 - April 12, 2006 10:10 PM (GMT)
Here is the intro:

I think that also answers your question. Oh and to add onto the thing about the sprites, if I alerady have the sheet you are good to go. If I dont have it or dont know where to get it easily, chances are you wont be able to use it unless you go look for it yourself and give it to me.

Uchiha Mikyas - April 12, 2006 10:12 PM (GMT)
Hmm.... me? In that case, would this work? Yeah I know I'm NOT Axel nor do I look anything like him, but.. yeah.

Omega2042 - April 13, 2006 04:55 AM (GMT)
Page One:

Oh and dont be too surprised that there is more to this than jokes. I do have a plot for this thing you know.

sashaki - April 13, 2006 04:43 PM (GMT)
1) I think its a pretty good idea

2) sprite:

Edit: fixed it, but due to tripod, just copy the url and paste it to the address thing.

btw Omega2042 , sanji looks funny with that love look :lol:

Omega2042 - April 13, 2006 06:46 PM (GMT)
That is way too small. You want to find something like:

Basically what you need on a sheet is: Walking, Standing, Attack Poses. Everything else is just extra, but always nice to have.

Omega2042 - April 14, 2006 12:53 AM (GMT)
Yeah I know I am double posting, but I need to post this. Anyway here is the first version of the Cast of Characters I made mainly so people had at laest some idea of what is going on. Also if you have any problem with anything this is the time to bring it up, because once I start making it the chance of me changing anything is very low.

Ds14 - April 14, 2006 01:13 AM (GMT)
DS has a spritesheet for you! He wants to be Youko Kurama. Yay!
user posted image

Omega2042 - April 14, 2006 05:01 AM (GMT)

Omega2042 - April 15, 2006 08:54 AM (GMT)
Page 3:

Now with crappy litle battle scenes! At this point I bet you are all wondering exactly how many sprites I have. Well the answer is a lot.

Uchiha Mikyas - April 15, 2006 06:40 PM (GMT)
I like them. Of course, a few more jokes and deeper plot wouldn't hurt... :blink:

Omega2042 - April 15, 2006 06:45 PM (GMT)
Well, only like two people here know the whole plot. Plus, its three pages long, how much of a plot do you expect there to be? Also humor sucks at advancing a plot.

Fire Fist Ace - April 16, 2006 04:24 AM (GMT)
I like the comics. keep up the good work. =D

Omega2042 - April 16, 2006 05:01 AM (GMT)
Well due to not being at home, I wont be able to make anyt new pages until tuesday. The comp I am now on doesnt have photoshop nor any of my sprites, so its just impossible. On the other hand it gives me plenty of time to work on the plot.

Omega2042 - April 18, 2006 07:33 AM (GMT)
In a rare moment of me being nice, I am giving everyone the option of giving me what you want your fighting style to be like. Now I dont have to use it of course, but chances are pretty good that I will. Remember, your sprite doesnt have to use the fighting style that it normally uses. It does make things easier for me, but I can live.

Now as for the power scale of this thing. Well, I can do whatever I want with it. One day you can be kicking everyone's ass, then the next you cant hurt a fly. The reasoning behind it doesnt have to make sense. I mean, this whole thing is mostly a comedy anyway, so random things that happen dont have to have a reason behind them. Just know that you wont get within a distance that would cause you to be able to be as strong as me, ever. Oh and Matt cant hurt a fly.

For your attacks you can have them be anything really. I mean you can say it will destroy the world if it was ever used, but it never will. Oh and just so you know, I can change the laws of physics whenever I want, so dont try to think of a reason why my comic doesnt make sense. In fact, it shouldnt anyway.

Uchiha Mikyas - April 19, 2006 01:59 AM (GMT)
How about like the power of wind for my character? Sort of controlling it and releasing it from his body. And possibly gauntlets.

Vox - April 19, 2006 01:16 PM (GMT)
Vox, he does things the old fashioned way. Fists, swords, and automatics.

sashaki - April 20, 2006 12:46 AM (GMT)
power of darkness, (grayish color thing) a big sword what else?

Omega2042 - April 20, 2006 07:50 AM (GMT)

Kanki-chan - April 21, 2006 02:29 AM (GMT)
lol, great comic so far. I'm just sad that I don't know jack squat about sprites...but still, great comic, love the comedy (I could see a lot of the characters acting like that inreal life though...).

Omega2042 - April 21, 2006 02:41 AM (GMT)
Well, if you dont know anything about them you can just suggest either a character or a general idea of what you would want and I can find something.

And thanks for the compliment.

Ds14 - April 21, 2006 02:42 AM (GMT)
I want youko kurama's abilities

Omega2042 - April 21, 2006 04:39 AM (GMT)

sashaki - April 21, 2006 04:10 PM (GMT)
oyi!!! when am I coming in? heh ^^''

Omega2042 - April 25, 2006 07:48 AM (GMT)
No idea.

Anyway, the intro is now done and before I make the next few pages, which I already have planned, I would like to know what you guys think so far.

Mazrith986 - April 25, 2006 08:11 AM (GMT)
Keep up the good work!

Pandaman - April 25, 2006 06:50 PM (GMT)
Excellent, I can't yet compare it to the two predecessors because it is still in its early stages, but it looks like it is coming along well.

Uchiha Mikyas - April 26, 2006 09:47 PM (GMT)
My opinion, I can say I like it. It's pretty funny.

Omega2042 - April 28, 2006 08:26 AM (GMT)

Omega2042 - May 2, 2006 11:16 PM (GMT)
Page 7:

I would like some comments on this. If I dont it makes me think no one is reading it.

Uchiha Mikyas - May 2, 2006 11:47 PM (GMT)
I love that one. I like how you just made them start arguing about what FF girl was hotter/cooler while they were falling to their death. That was so random, which made it hilarious. I can definitely say I enjoyed it for 2 minutes.

Kanki-chan - May 3, 2006 01:11 AM (GMT)
lol, his teleporting is hilarious-he could've done it at any time, and...yeah, almost spoiled the page, but still, liked it :D

Mazrith986 - May 3, 2006 01:57 AM (GMT)
Nice Job omega!

Oak - May 3, 2006 02:48 AM (GMT)
Pretty good, except everyone knows that Aerith is the best.

Ds14 - May 3, 2006 03:43 AM (GMT)
I thought that was hilarious. But i'm gonna have to say you're all wrong.
DS> Yuna = Tifa > Eveyone > Quistis of FF8

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