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A love poem!, A little romantic| WeLiveInHope! |
Posted: Mar 20 2010, 07:48 PM
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Newbie  Group: Members Posts: 13 Member No.: 125 Joined: 20-March 10  |
hi,
I wrote this poem years and years ago to my first love. Please tell me what do you think of it? You are likened to a pearl in my heart. A smooth, glistening spot hidden inside my clam like heart. Who knows how precious this jewel is? Until my heart is opened no one will be able to see how bright my love sparkles in the light, how many pearls there are or will be. I don't know but none the less a seed has been sown. Whether it grows one cannot see. I will wait until the day when my jewels are set free from my heart, to lie closely next to thee. I hope you like it  cheers, WeLiveInHope! |
 
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| Les |
Posted: Mar 20 2010, 07:57 PM
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I use a computer, therefore I am. Group: Admin Posts: 19,246 Member No.: 70 Joined: 8-March 09 |
It shows real depth.
 You obviously enjoy your poetry. |
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| voice |
Posted: Mar 20 2010, 08:02 PM
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Administrator Group: Admin Posts: 25,694 Member No.: 1 Joined: 3-March 08 |
Very good. Wait to Sherry comes on... she likes writing them herself... and a few others.
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| G4G Scotty |
Posted: Mar 21 2010, 06:13 AM
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Member Group: Members Posts: 559 Member No.: 74 Joined: 7-April 09 |
Yes, thanks for the poem and really enjoyed it.
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| sherry |
Posted: Mar 21 2010, 08:27 AM
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sherry Group: Members Posts: 30,693 Member No.: 25 Joined: 2-June 08 |
That's an original idea for a love poem WLIH! Very good. Did your first love ever receive it? Some thought has gone into it, that's for sure
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| WeLiveInHope! |
Posted: Mar 21 2010, 11:57 AM
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Newbie Group: Members Posts: 13 Member No.: 125 Joined: 20-March 10 |
hi, yes she received it. Someone told me first love is always the best! I suppose there will always be a place for her in my mind. And she is a real beauty  cheers, WeLiveInHope! |
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