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Title: the banana can write
Description: or at least try to


OMGBanana - March 13, 2010 08:58 PM (GMT)
i do write stories, although i never finish them because i have such a short attention span.

the current one that i am working on is about a group of teenagers who stay at an old house, owned by a creepy looking man and woman, as part of a school trip.

weird things happen, like strange noises, nasty letters about people left around the house, things going missing, things moxing around... at first they think it was caused by two rival groups of friends who are on the trip. some of the nasty girls work out that it was done by a group of others who dont like them (although most of the class has a reason to, they are nasty throughout the whole story), as it was hinted at by a quiet girl in the class who is friendly to everyone.

then things get even worse, and really scary things happen, and some of the class begin to believe that it is ghosts.

in the end they all find out that the letters were written by this quiet girl, as she didnt like the way the group of girls who get the letters were treating the rest of the class. the rest of the stuff was done by a boy who wasnt allowed to go on the trip because of his behaviour in class.


a few months later they find out the house they stayed in has been abandoned for years and the people there were ghosts all along.......

Les - March 13, 2010 09:02 PM (GMT)
Nice twist at the end, Kayls. Seems like you have a bit of a knack for this. :)

voice - March 13, 2010 09:48 PM (GMT)
Yes, excellent... we'd like to see more.

sherry - March 14, 2010 08:31 PM (GMT)
An interesting plot there, Kayls :)




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