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| QUOTE | Likes: # Playing Quidditch # Gobstones club # Her studies # Herbology # Studying about Helga Hufflepuff # Long chats with Hagrid # Studying care of magical creatures # Swimming # Horse riding # Duelling # The Quibbler # The Daily Prophet # Witch Weekly
Dislikes: # Reptiles # Death Eaters # Dark Arts # Purebloods who think they're better than everyone else # The disappearances # Slytherins # The Ministry # Sand / Mud / Any kind of dirt |
I'd prefer it in paragraph form, explain a little, read some of the others profiles to get a feel of what I want.
I want a name not a picture please
| QUOTE | | General Knowledge: What most people could say they know about Selena is that she is an only child ( not true according to Rose's mother)...She is a member of the Hufflepuff Quidditch team. |
I thought her name was Rose, but here you put Selena. You can not pick your own house, I pick it for you, so please change all that says you are Hufflepuff, also you must try out for the quidditch team before you can be a member, the tryouts have yet to be made.
| QUOTE | History:
Rose was born at 1.10am on the morning of the 1st October. She was a healthy strong baby from the moment she was born. She was the youngest of the twins that were born. Her sister Taina was extremely sickly and at the time Rose's mother Melissa was a single parent and she couldn't cope with two children never mind one that was always ill. So after a lot of soul searching Melissa decided to give Taina up for adoption, This all happened before Rose was six months old. Eventually things got better for Melissa. She got a decent job and her parents helped look after Rose. Rose developed into a good strong child who loved to run around the house, play with her dolls. Rose first showed magic when she accidentally dyed her doll's hair blue and by magic it turned back to blonde. Rose was the first person in this muggle family to show magic. However Melissa had a friend who was a witch so she understood this.
Rose attended primary school where luckily she didn't display any signs of magic. She made some true friends there, friends which she later told her secret too and they kept it. She did well in her exams, she wasn't the smartest in the class but she was one of the happiest and she got through primary school just fine. Then came the letter from Hogwarts which meant that Rose would leave home for most of the year. Melissa was sad but knew that her daughter had to do this. She wrote to her daughter every week at first but then gradually turned into two or three weeks but she wrote at least twice a month. Rose was sorted into Hufflepuff and she soon made friends there. She joined the Quidditch team in her second year. She then signed up for Care of Magical Creatures, Ancient Runes and Divinatiomn for third year. |
I like were this is getting, but it is short, I need a little more detail, explain a bit more, and you need to change the Hufflepuff house, and quidditch team member, you can out she likes it, but there has yet to be tryouts.
Please fix these things and we will look this over again.
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