345 - Kamilia Is A Statue, TRACY SPEAKS! End Of Universe Coming?

I like how Kamilia is just standing there frozen in terror as her daughter is trapped in a magical realm of whatsits for an indeterminate period of time.

Sharet's right arm looks weird. Snowy's head is slightly too small. That guy on the spiderbot is in a really ambiguous position such that his ear almost looks like it could be an arm, but after realizing that was, in fact, an ear, I briefly wondered where his arms went before realizing those where not just random lines on his back. Also the roof/floor looks very bland in comparison to the background trees/bushes but that's because buildings are a pain in the ass to make, I assume.

Erik, you can't be pleased, can you? Personally, I think Sam did a fan-fucking-tastic job, and spent a lot of time on it. Just because he didn't texture every single thing in the page, doesn't mean there is a problem. Snowy looks FINE, in fact, she looks better than she has in the past- and as for Kamilia, you would be frozen and terrified too if your 8ish year old daughter was sucked away by a beam of light... Ease up, Erik. Cut the guy some slack, yeah?

Well yeah, that's why I said I liked how Kamilia was just frozen there. I never said anything about this being bad, did I?

Everything else is simply standard critique so Sam knows what looks funky on the page from my perspective. I always do critique, why would you be complaining about it now?

I think all of Sharet looks weird, and that's after muddling with my semi-sick sketches. :/ But then if I think Sharet looks like Sharet should everyone thinks something is horribly wrong with her because screw all of you or something. I think Snowy looks fine, tho.

The roof looks bland because textures and gradients kinda fight a lot, and I'm missing all of my brushes. Also I crunched to make this page happen at all again. :/ I kinda figured the grad would be enough and too much detail would overwhelm the scene but maybe that's just me?

Meanwhile, nobody gives a damn about my pretty bushes. :c

Snowy is really bugging me in this one for some reason. I keep thinking her head is too small. Iunno.

I think this page looks bloody amazing, and you did an amazing job Zaron!
I don't think I've said this in a while, so I will say it now, that this is probably the most visually pleasing comic I read, it is beautiful.

Also, the story line is getting intriguing again (I love a mystery), enough to distract me from the whole "Wait, what do you mean my job's not done and I am now taking over the workload of the 11 people that went home? And you want this done WHEN?"

>_>
(Still, getting paid is better than not getting paid, and I will cut a few things out this week to make the thing I promised happen happen)

I'm late to comment here, as I'm trying to write something big for a deadline next week, and I feel distracted due to it, and couldn't seem to come up with an engaged reaction to this page. I still can't, but it deserves something, so I will say it's a nicely-executed continuation from the previous page. The pacing feels less intense and it's giving both us and the characters a chance to think about what's happened and what may happen next, and it's the kind of plot-punctuation which isn't all that exciting itself, but serves to frame the parts that are exciting favourably. I hadn't noticed the bushes before, but now I look they're drawn rather nicely, yes , and Snowy's head does look a bit off to me, but 'til I saw Erik's post I didn't notice. I think her neck just looks a little bit long, possibly it's due to the top she has on, it makes my eyes think that her neck reaches all the way down to the lower line of her collar, but I guess that's really closer to the front of her collar bone.

Nice page, I like ^^, sorry for late comment XD.

PS: Hello Swot, nice to see you !