Shiva Gawain

[Shiva Garwain]

Name: Shiva Garwain
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Profession: engineer
Eye color: Black
Hair color: Black
Height: 1.70 m
Weight: 67 kg
Blood Type: AB
Character Rank: E

Appearance: People who don't know him would call him unremarkable normal or slick or even freaky.
Being a bit short sighted he wears glasses most of the time. His hair is usually middle in length. Sometimes military short.
Most of the time his usual appearance is that of a white collar.
When he is caught in intense work his appearance changes to that of a nerd or freak. He becomes skinny, mostly from being malnourished.



Biography:
His father was a military engineer and officer on Huffman Island. His family fled at the end of the first conflict to the USN
where he got married to a government secretary. Shiva was born as an only child. His mother's family had a history of military and governmental services.

Shiva was a lazy and carefree genius in school. Except during classes he never really studied, and had all possible marks one could get, resulting in an average score.
He was actually shy and easily fell into the loner image and only befriended others like him. This often got him into fights with any other clique.
With his friends he would sometimes make war plans to fight the vastly superior numbered and bigger hostile cliques.
Not seldom he would fend of or counter enemy attacks by himself. After all, he was not always in any company.
In his free time he played games, read novels, and various magazines.
He invented his own toys and machinery to play with.
As a jack of all trades he isn't fixed on anything, rather he pursuits anything interesting at a time. He isn't perfect in most things but rather better than the average.
Naturally, he gets bored quickly when coming across familiar things.

After high school he joined the military, and was assigned to a special unit as a command post operator and member of the command chain.
He was trained in and for various occasions that comes with international peace keeping missions or the like.
He had more than one tour overseas before leaving the service. When applying for a job his service file is often very short or simply not even turned in.
Combined with his seemingly carefree character some people would say he actually never worked in his life.

After leaving the service he went on to a university, during which time he took on many jobs in various branches of the industry ranging from a clerk to a manager.
Currently he works as a freelance computer contractor engineer and enjoys building gunplas which he would sell to the kids in the neighborhood.

Sample RP Post:
[random rp]
In a room at the end of the universe, Shiva was pondering about his next model kit.
About then his neighbor and friend drops in.

"What are you surfing for this time?"
"Just looking for some model kits to build."
"Oh, really. I thought you got enough already."
"Nah. Life would be boring with nothing to do. I can't sit around doing nothing."
"Well, what do you have in mind then?"
"I thought about starting with some mecha kit. There is this new Gunpla or so."

Shiva clicked on a tap in the webbrowers which brought up a site showing the word Gunpla.
"Here, it's about building gundam kits it seems."
Leaning forward his friend eyed and studied the page.
"Wasn't it like that since ever?"
"Dunno. It seems popular with the kids today."
"Well, so what's taking you so long to decide?"
"I don't want to do some simple ones like them. It's no fun without a challenge. No feel accomplishment without doin much or commitment."
"Geez, stop being picky and choose."
"No way. If I have to waste my time it has to be worth it."
"Have fun then. I for one am going to polish my Stingray."
"Heh, you and your Stingray. You are no better off, you know?"
"At least I can pick up chicks with it."
Shiva turns around only to see his friend closing the door. Putting he turned back to his research.

This post has been edited by Shiva Garwain on Feb 29 2012, 07:55 PM

[Bryant Molirse]

Alright, sorry about the wait, had to take care of more stuff then I had planned to.

First you really need to proof read your whole character. There is way too many vague sections where I can't even discern what you are trying to convey, the first sentence of the description being a example of this. Your bio makes hardly any sense, as if you took random sentences, and pasted them together. Not being mean, but you need to reread it, and see what I mean. I'll give you a chance to fix this up, but if you can't, you'll probably have to rewrite the whole thing.

[Shiva Garwain]

Alright, edited.