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 Poems, They may have triggers
Blace
Posted: May 6 2006, 04:12 AM


I am really sick of it all......
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Hey Guys this is where I post my poems that I make for now on.


This I wrote this in class a long time ago when I was really depressed and bored.

LOST

I am Lost
Surrounded in the Dark Abyss
Trying to find my way out

Is there light
Or is there Dark
As I know no more

Good Evil, Right and Wrong
As I come as both
And not as one

As I wander through life
I search for Death
as it is part of me missing

I search as I wander
Whishing to find Death
In the Dark Abyss

I still cant find the part of me
as well as my way
I am lost



I think that one kinda sucked though it was the first poem I ever wrote. This one I think is really better though. I wrote it for an art project cause we had to make a poem for this thing we were drawing but I didnt finish it and thank god cause if I turned it in den my art teacher would of turned me in also...lol

TRAPED

Traped inside a bloody barbed cage
With no one else only you.
You try to break it down with rage
Trying to send your messge through

As blood drips from your hand
Realizing no one feels your pain.
Wandering if there is an escape as you ran
Your fingers down your vein

"Why am I here
in this one person hell,
traped inside my biggest fear
knowing that I sure truely fail

Facing my greatest fear.
where I walk on my own
This is my horrid nightmare
Where I walk alone."



I think that end of TRPAED is kind messed up the rhyeme sceme at least casue it it some how binds with the next stanza which really kind messes it up but idk you decide.
silently screaming
Posted: May 6 2006, 01:06 PM


crawling in my skin
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i really like both of those smile.gif


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Coffin_Of_Guilt
Posted: May 20 2006, 01:55 PM


Uber Poster
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Posts: 662
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Joined: 29-December 05



hey Blace,

There really good! I like the second one better...there extreamly. good and your first poem is good for a first!

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