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a new poem.., ac/si possible trigger...

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*snowballinhell*	Posted: Mar 19 2006, 06:33 PM
the mad hatter Group: ~†Mad Member†~ Posts: 100 Member No.: 280 Joined: 19-January 06	as always i appreciate honest feedback, thanks! good at hiding.. little mouse run and hide.. run and hide and disappear.. hide in a hole.. hide in a crack.. under leaves along your tiny secret path.. in a crater on the moon.. so far away no one will ever find you.. deep in the woods.. in the snow.. in a cave.. under roots and inside trees.. sleeping long long freezing dreaming dark days away.. breathing slower slower.. getting colder.. waiting to awaken some sunny morning.. just a kid keeping a secret.. speaking only with your colors or in codes.. saying all your words with silence or your eyes alone.. holding the answers and the questions close to your heart.. rainy day.. running away.. safe in the dark where shadows live and lie whispering and hushing.. inside a rocketship.. never telling no one can make you.. good at hiding.. in a closet.. on a rooftop.. so good at finding just the right most unseen hiding places.. at keeping perfectly still.. listening and waiting.. undiscovered.. in a box of cats.. in a drop of blood.. on a dark ride.. under the water.. an unsigned valentine lost and weeping in the center of your maze.. between the lines of a poem.. behind a stack of books.. in storyland.. in the trunk at a drive-in movie on a starry night.. in another drink.. in the back of a classroom.. under a black hood and in the words of the music in your ears.. under the house in a crawlspace.. good at hiding.. i know your secret though (there's no one looking for you...) papercuts/poetry by snowballinhell -------------------- "i growl when i'm pleased.. therefore i am mad..." lewis carrol "i met a girl.. a snowball in hell... she was hard.. and as cracked as the liberty bell..." e. smith "said we then, the two then, ah, can it have been that the woodlandish ghouls, the pitiful, the merciful ghouls, to bar up our way and to ban it from the secret that lies in these wolds, from the thing that lies hidden in these wolds, have drawn up the spectre of a planet from the limbo of lunary souls, this sinfully scintillant planet from the hell of the planetary souls..." e.a. poe "i know you'd rather see me gone than to see me the way that i am.. when i am in the life anyway..." e. smith "i jumped in the river.. what did i see? a black eyed angel swam with me.. a moon full of stars and astral cars.. and all the figures i used to see.. all my lovers were there with me.. all my past and future.. and we all went to heaven in a little rowboat.. there was nothing to fear.. nothing to doubt..." radiohead "i never made it without biting..." *SI TRIGGER* friendly ghost blog

*-L-*	Posted: Mar 19 2006, 09:14 PM
Broken Wings Group: ~†Mad Member†~ Posts: 92 Member No.: 10 Joined: 17-February 05	God i luved it!!!!

*snowballinhell*	Posted: Apr 25 2006, 09:49 PM
the mad hatter Group: ~†Mad Member†~ Posts: 100 Member No.: 280 Joined: 19-January 06	thanks, L! this is a link to my poetry/short story collection for anyone interested... papercuts snowballinhell This post has been edited by snowballinhell on Apr 25 2006, 09:50 PM -------------------- "i growl when i'm pleased.. therefore i am mad..." lewis carrol "i met a girl.. a snowball in hell... she was hard.. and as cracked as the liberty bell..." e. smith "said we then, the two then, ah, can it have been that the woodlandish ghouls, the pitiful, the merciful ghouls, to bar up our way and to ban it from the secret that lies in these wolds, from the thing that lies hidden in these wolds, have drawn up the spectre of a planet from the limbo of lunary souls, this sinfully scintillant planet from the hell of the planetary souls..." e.a. poe "i know you'd rather see me gone than to see me the way that i am.. when i am in the life anyway..." e. smith "i jumped in the river.. what did i see? a black eyed angel swam with me.. a moon full of stars and astral cars.. and all the figures i used to see.. all my lovers were there with me.. all my past and future.. and we all went to heaven in a little rowboat.. there was nothing to fear.. nothing to doubt..." radiohead "i never made it without biting..." *SI TRIGGER* friendly ghost blog

*frozenriver7*	Posted: Apr 26 2006, 04:02 PM
is drifting along Group: ~†Mad Member†~ Posts: 348 Member No.: 132 Joined: 20-August 05	That was a great poem, I loved it, I'll have to check out you're other stuff. -------------------- If the eyes had no tears, the soul would have no rainbow

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