Im still working on it but i wanted to get some feed back on it i wrote this when i got out of the ER as a little reminder to myself of what happened and how i felt afterwards tell me what u think.
When theres no one left to turn to,
And all you want to do is Die;
Soon enough you feel all the warnth leave you.
Though you want to you can't say Goodbye.
Cuz if you were to they'd call 911,
Thats when all the guilt kicks in;
Again you're reminded that your fight here is done.
Now you don't feel as though it's such a big sin.
All your pain slowly disappears,
For this reason you begin to smile;
Your no longer filled with all your fears.
Physicly you feel as though you sprinted a mile.
At this time you get very drowzy,
So you close your eyes thinking soon it will all be over;
To your surprize you wake up in the ER feeling lowzy.
And every muscle aches because your completly sober.
That's really good hunni, describes the feelings very well
That's really well written, Azazel.