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Name: Tomshu Hirokamaro (Akamichi Clan)
Sex: Male
Age: 19
Height/Weight: 5"5'/400lbs
Rank: Academy Student
Description: A Large white male with blond-ish hair and Roachinaru or as they are colloquially known as "crazy eyes" these eyes serve no other purpose except for the ability to show Tomshu's emotional state because whenever he is feeling a particular emotion his entire eye becomes a corresponding colour i.e: Red- Anger Black- Fury Sky blue- Calm Yellow- Happy Green- Envy etc Purple- Aroused
History: Tomshu is one of the two remaning survivors of his once great clanl; the itonami clan but his clan had an age old rivalry with the zetsumei clan and his entire clan was killed, Tomshu was able to survive because his brother the only other survivor of this clan saved his life on the clan leaders orders but his brother mysteriously dissapeared after taking Tomshu to the city, so at the tender age of 11 Tomshu was abandoned and left to fend for himself.
Level- 0
Experience- 0
Strength- 12
Speed- 2
Accuracy- 5
Intelligence- 6
You have 100 points to distribute through the following two stats
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Tom, just a hint. your rank is Academy student. Not Rank D =) And try to mention what your character is doing now, also add in things like Dmg and CK to your jutsu's. but apart from that its good.
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Busoutoshi- Tomshu fortifies himself and is protected from most physical attacks and most jutsu, this jutsu requires Tomshu to remain completly still Effect: Removes Tomshus ability to move but makes him impenetrable to physical attacks. But is still susceptible to Mind attacks Chakra cost of 6 per minute in this state
Meat Tank- Tomshu rolls into a ball and flattens anyone in his path Effect: Damage of 340 Chakra cost of 20
But is still susceptible to Mind attacks (Genjutsu?) Chakra cost of 6 per minute in this state (6 min? tom this has to be converted to posts E.g 6 posts)
Umm Damage of 340? tom dnt u think this is a bit too much Academy Student dnt even have more than 100 HP
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well maybe if u arnt such a usless mod and gave tom sum example of what his dmg n ck shuld be i wuldnt have to repeat aye? remember mods r suppost to help ppl... nt go around posting 96 post's of rubbish.
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QUOTE (Akito/Agito @ Apr 13 2008, 01:09 PM)
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Busoutoshi- Tomshu fortifies himself and is protected from most physical attacks and most jutsu, this jutsu requires Tomshu to remain completly still Effect: Removes Tomshus ability to move but makes him impenetrable to physical attacks. But is still susceptible to Mind attacks Chakra cost of 6 per minute in this state
Meat Tank- Tomshu rolls into a ball and flattens anyone in his path Effect: Damage of 340 Chakra cost of 20
But is still susceptible to Mind attacks (Genjutsu?) Chakra cost of 6 per minute in this state (6 min? tom this has to be converted to posts E.g 6 posts)
Umm Damage of 340? tom dnt u think this is a bit too much Academy Student dnt even have more than 100 HP
yes i mean genjutsu but there may be other moves called "mind attacks" that i/ you have not thought of