R+R story, We want to know what you think about it.

What do you people think of the first three posts in Strisas's and My RP? All and any input is welcome. ^-^

I was done writing this like at 8...i just wanted to push the envolope.

Grrrr... I was watching the clock too. That was very close on your part. How about we put a solid time limit on our posts...say every Wednesday unless one of us has a legitimate reason?
As for everyone else, POST YOUR THOUGHTS ON OUR RP. When we get input, we want to write more and modify it to make it more enjoyable to you and us. The more comments, it's more likely more posts for the story will follow.

COMEON PEOPLE!!!! WE WANT INPUT! If none of you start giving input, than it will cease. Also PLEASE START SOME RP'S. They are a lot of fun to do.

My posty is 1/4 done and I plan to finish writing it tonight. For once I'm making Strisas wait instead of the other way around......lol

Anyways, WE WANT INPUT! Comeon people, please tell us what you think. When we get comments, we get ideas on how to make the story and writting styles better and better so the more input the better, positive or negative. (If it's going to be negative, be nice about it! )

input is definitely handy because then we know what we need to imrove on. Also imput on where you guys all think that the story should go. So far i like the story. i just have to find the old ending to the story and then i am all set to go! its gonna be a bit long...not all my posts will be long.

well, i wil be posting very shortly...how to end my really long post is the problem now. should be done shortly....tis late...

Alright - so you wanted input? Here's some:

First of all, please be careful when you are typing that the same word is not used over and over and over and over(just like that). You may not notice it when you are writing, but it can be quite annoying. (This especially appiles to Vertashi's posts - try using Virhn's name less often.)

Finally, try to describe more of what is happening around your character. When I say that, I don't just means people's reaction to your character, but the scenery and the current state of affairs in the kingdom you are entering. Don't try to make your character the center of attention, but rather just part of a larger picture. Personally, I think that characters who work silently in the background are the best. Don't let the reader know how much influence your character has until later in the story, when it is necessary for him/her to use it. (As seen in Xenogears).

I will give more input later when I have a chance to read through the RP more carefully. Until then, continue posting and have fun!

P.S. - Notice how many times I said character in this post? That is what I mean when I said not to use the same word over and over. It is very easy to do (just have to stress that point).

i totally agree!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm thinking about starting up a new fantasy RP. Writing down some ideas now. All my old members for the RP decided they didn't want to continue which is why I'm creating a new one. If you wish to apply to join this RP it will be limited to a maximum of four rpers for this specific rpers. To apply send me a pm with a sample of your writing. If you need an idea for a sample, pm me and I'll be happy to assist.